The Demon Emperor of the Perfect World

Yu Tuo, save me! On the top of the immortal world, proud of the world, there will be heaven with me, Anlan; At the top of my words, I am persuading the world. Look at me, Quntuo, persuading immortals to die; On the top of the grave, buried in the world, waiting for me, Duan De, to dig through the sky; On the top of my father's world, my son Wang Teng can become an immortal; On the top of the dog, barking in the world, watch me, the Black Emperor, bite the immortal to death. On the top of the broken world, there will be immortals if I, Chendong, are there

Everyone came here for the Demon Emperor, but when they saw the profile, they were trying to pick up girls and get compliments. Are you kidding me? If you don't write about monstrous killing, blood boiling, and selfishness, how dare you write about demons? Is it possible that your parents were killed and your wife cheated on you, so you became a demon out of despair? That's from a TV series about misery. What is a demon? Look at the setting of the demon ancestor Rahu, who demonizes the whole world and makes all living beings like ants. There is also the demon ancestor of the Tomb of Gods who kills relatives, himself, and all living beings. In "Zhetian Perfect", if you want to write a demon, you will be dark and weird.

Is the path of the author's protagonist Yin Yang? There are many directions for the development of Yin-Yang Dao. Whether it is yin-yang transforming chaos, transforming the Five Innate Tai Tais, or taking the world path, all are good choices. Just develop it well. Don't have too many female protagonists, otherwise you will be scolded. If you can't write a good emotional line, there will be no female protagonist. But if you want to write a female protagonist, just write one or two. You can also create a few opportunities and have some autonomy. You can think about various aspects and give some suggestions to the author.

First, get Liu Shen, otherwise, there will be no benefit in the front, and then you can deal with the heroine later

Has the author won Qin Yining? Now he wants to be a member. I haven't read it yet. If he wins, I will become a member. If not, I will continue to raise it.

From the plot written at the beginning and the psychological activities of the protagonist, I feel that this experience has allowed the protagonist to see the world of cultivation more clearly, and his mind has become stronger. When he meets Ishimura, he will cherish it especially, become calm and complete. These protagonists are well written and progressed very comfortably. I felt like I had found a treasure. I was quite disgusted until Shi Yi's mother told the truth. The disgusting thing was nothing else. I didn't want to see this part too excessive without any reason or the reason was far-fetched. However, the result gave me a small surprise. It was based on the cultivation of yin and yang, and the explanation was very clear. I needed this poisonous woman to open it up and let me know that what the author wanted to do had a beginning and an end. It was not about writing a novel to let myself know. I enjoyed it, including the comments at the end of individual chapters. I occasionally read the comments. It was rational for the author to add a key character, and he would not force the character into it unreasonably. This is also good. So in fact, I should give this book at least four stars, because the depth of these points is unparalleled in fan fiction. However, I only gave two stars, which made me feel disappointed and deducted two stars. The protagonist starts to behave like a fool since he joins Butian Pavilion. This book starts with the emphasis on purity and sex, but from then on there are too many psychological activities, which are very jumpy. Even I can see that some of the content is to pave the way for the future, at the expense of the protagonist's IQ. I think it is ridiculous. The early foreshadowing is so rare, but I personally overturned it. , Is it worth it? I express my love for Liu Shen again and again, too often. It seems that when I see Liu Shen, I have to express it. Is it like this if I like someone? Since you have made so many decisions, you just do it. Before you have the strength, do what you should do. Just do what you can. There is no need to think so much. Is it still the most pure and pure thing to do? I felt that the foreshadowing was so easy to write in vain. But after losing the purity of nature, or in other words, after the personality has collapsed, if you look at a woman who can't walk, this is different from Shi Hao who simply loves to eat. It will make people disgusted and he is a fool. There is also the broken stove. I read that the message was following the Yuan Tiangang route, just to dump the blame on one person. I am a little confused about this. Maybe some people did not understand why the author chose Yurou before, and found someone to stop everyone. Writing this way makes me doubt the author's understanding of the original work. Liu Shen said that the stove was a bit too interference, but I think it is okay. Since the main character in the fanfic was rewritten, he was also at the same level in the later stage. Fairy, it is just a phase. For a weak period of time, because of Shi Hao, the protagonist will not stay in the humane field for too long. After the protagonist becomes stronger, if it is mentioned like Liu Shen, it is a bit too much. I think that furnace is ignorant and stupid when he knows the plot, and he is not far from death, so there is a problem. The author is particularly willing to make small things bigger when writing at this stage. Liu Shen just turned cold, saying that Liu Shen has huge emotional fluctuations, and the writing is a bit messy. Since the appearance of Butian Pavilion, he has been separated from the pure. He has become a fool and has become stupid. He is always competing with Shi Hao. What is Shi Hao? No matter whether you compare with him or not, he will reach the top according to the original track of cultivation speed. As for Shi Hao's terrifying speed, just pay attention to yourself. You think too much. Either you are drifting or you know you need to restrain yourself after encountering something. It is not that the excessive plot is not written well, but it is wrong from the beginning. I particularly dislike this plot. I forced the protagonist to be mentally retarded, but that sentence was too disappointing, and the early stage was a waste of time. Every action was always followed by an explanation. There were too many explanations, and too many explanations meant that the writing was unsatisfactory. I was tired of reading the explanations. One comment said it well. The author probably doesn't know much about the Holy Ruins. What kind of ruthless person appeared in the paper boat, saying that he was protecting the Emperor Huang Tian? What kind of opportunity was it? He also thought about things that were complicated, immature, and unable to withstand scrutiny. First of all, tell me what the chance was. The ruthless person in the whole perfect world directly helped Shi Hao. Someone moved the river of time, and a ruthless man appeared to protect Huang. According to the setting of the original work, this is not considered a chance. This is because if someone moved the river of time and wanted to reverse the cause and effect, there would be corrections. Whether it is the Red King or the three quasi-immortal emperors behind, anyone who wants to change the cause and effect will be stopped. So tell me what the chance is. The ruthless person was the one person left in the trio who separated at that time. He used his methods again and again in the long river of time to find the wilderness that disappeared in their era. It is completely messed up as of this writing, and the protagonist is a variable, and it is the previous era of the reincarnation fairy king. Variables that can be deduced, I doubt the author's understanding of the word "variables" in combination with the perfect world. When Huang was in the perfect world, the immortal king of the foreign land of the Immortal Era deduced the future generations, Huang's existence was called a variable. This variable The number refers to the fact that the foreign land was obviously stronger than Jiutian at that time, and because Shi Hao's existence caused Jiutian to win, he was called a variable, that is, a variable. He was both a key figure and an existing figure. His existence was reasonable, and everything in future generations was a given. In fact, the author of the protagonist also calls him a variable, but I feel that the author means that the protagonist is suddenly inserted in the long river of time. Starting from the ancient era, everything will change in later generations, then he is not a variable but an anomaly, a heresy. If we follow the setting of the original work and treat the protagonist as a variable, then from the time he can be deduced from the previous era, everything in the future generations will have corresponding established facts. We will no longer follow the original work as the direction. The protagonist appears, develops and affects another later generation. He is not someone who jumped out of the cracks in the stone. He is a real person. Later generations will know that there were two Heavenly Emperor series in the ancient times, instead of one Heavenly Emperor in the original work. , And the author did not set this setting. The protagonist jumped out of the cracks in the rocks and interfered with some established trajectories. How could a weak existence like you change the established trajectories? How could time keep you? It would get rid of you without modifying you. The first person to destroy you was Huang. Suddenly a person appeared in his childhood and abducted the child Yun Xi. The little stone was also gone. Why don't you die? The empress said from later generations that the empress wanted to straighten the line between Yun Xi and Shi Hao, but she failed? Do you know what you are writing? I didn't expect that in the end I would write to the point where my words are the way of heaven. It was said that the later generations were messed up and could not be deduced, but the result was that the protagonist was holding a war weapon, and there was a sea of ​​blood behind him. What was deduced was an established fact that was divorced from the original work. If it was not deduced, it was someone who helped from the cracks in the rocks. If it did not jump out of the cracks in the rocks, it would be deduced. It is not messy, it is true and true. I saw that this piece no longer had the initial consideration, and it was not as worth recalling as when I started reading.

This is not the Demon Emperor, this is the Love Emperor, the protagonist is actually the owner of the copper coffin, and ruthless people can come and threaten the protagonist, and when the protagonist is about to be killed, the protagonist returns, I am speechless. The protagonist may be a priest in the future after all. Sometimes he cries, can it be like the perfect double undercover? What the protagonist said to Ye Qingxian is like you have come to my time now, so my future body is also there. Looking at you, I have a future body and have been paying attention to your growth trajectory. Ye Qingxian was frightened. To be honest, the protagonist of the novel "Perfect Double Undercover" is invincible all the way. I came here for you, the Demon Emperor, as the protagonist. Do you write like a demon now? What the hell you are dragging is the Love Emperor (this should be able to lust after the Emperor of Heaven). The protagonist only relies on these two cultivation techniques and kills some people. Does he think he is a demon? During the period of Zhe Tian , or in a perfect period, who hasn't had tens of thousands of lives in his hands?

It is really a rubbish novel. The main character, the big licking dog, has no adult logic at all, and the character of Huang is completely confused.

How to say it? Although it is a little flawed, it is still good to have your own ideas. That is the Demon Emperor. There should be no heroine in this thing, or all the heroines are dead.

Is there any reason why the Rain Clan targets the male protagonist? It feels weird. Are you forced to stand with the perfect hero?