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The women are either talented or good. The descriptions of the men in the family are almost as honest, submissive and not very talented. According to your description, they should fall into the general fantasy framework, that is, there are more male monks, but when it comes to your family, the yin and yang are directly in decline.

I've been reading your novel for several days! It's well written and interesting, but your update speed is as slow as a snail. I took a look. Other books I found that you have another book that is being updated! I would like to suggest that we can focus on one book and write it carefully to ensure quality and quantity? If you open two books at the same time, it will easily affect the quality and cause the eunuch to be released in advance! And it is most important to build your speed. . Simply. Internet literature is so developed now, and everyone reads a book very quickly, how many readers can you lose if you don't update it in time? In the end, the two books were tepid! The current number one in the monthly ticket list, what is the most important thing that can make people popular? Isn't it just the update speed and word count, everyone can enjoy it! How much difference can there be with a simple essay pen? The key is that speed and word count determine whether this book is popular! I hope you will adopt this book!

The following represents only my personal views. I saw the test of a daughter's aptitude. To be honest, there is no need to write such a fantasy novel in which the yin and the yang are in decline. After reading for so long, I haven't seen a few men with better aptitudes, and the descriptions of the male members of the Wang family have almost no characteristics. This is a family novel, and the protagonist is not the king of the daughter's country. Moreover, some of the words in the article are really too modern and lack a sense of substitution, as does the world view. Although the picture seems to be quite big at present, it does not show much. There are too few fantasy elements. To be honest, I feel that there is nothing wrong with reading it as a low-level martial artist. Also, the protagonist really shouldn't be too over-the-top, making his wife and descendants all have better qualifications than the protagonist. This is not a daily novel after all, and being strategizing and resourceful is really not a good idea for a fantasy novel. Having said that, the above are just some of my shortcomings so far. I personally like this book quite a lot, and I definitely don't mean to criticize it.

This is really a very good and classic book. I am very picky when reading books. One of the most critical points is the worldview. This is also the strongest point of this book in my opinion, the worldview. The author has successfully written a brand new world so vividly. There is no such thing as pretending to be B all the time, and relying on the settings (as soon as you see a book that pretends to be cool and just eat the settings, discard it), the descriptions, plans, etc. Of all levels and levels of Xuanwu Monk will not be messy. Secondly, I would like to call this book the originator of farming. Just like other books, the protagonist is strong and invincible, followed by a bunch of women running behind him, but the protagonist of this book is not the strongest. The simplest person who is stronger than the protagonist is his wife ( The only female protagonist, but as long as she takes good care of her wife, she can be called the strongest. I learned a lot about how couples want to get along. 😚) And this book is about the strength of the family, not the core of a person, but the strength of the family, your elders, and your children. Highly recommended, love it very much.

The pacing in the early stage was okay, but in the later stage the author suddenly became impatient? ? ? What? ? It's a bit weird to change the rhythm all of a sudden

This is how family stories should be written. When the protagonist's level is low, the family can help. When the protagonist's level is high, the families help each other. This looks better. Unlike other family stories in the later stages of the protagonist's life, the family can't help at all and is just a drag.

I do so, why didn't gunpowder travel through the Three Treasures? One exchange, two flows, three charcoal. Paper cement.

After wiping out two families, you can skip the year and let the family develop a bit, otherwise your book won't be able to end with 1,000 chapters. Don't write too detailed a family story, just embellish it with some stories.

Only Pigfoot can make arrangements, and the rest of the family, regardless of rank, will not make arrangements in advance. The rest of the people, no matter how powerful the masters are, are always short of money. The pig's foot family, except for the beginning, has never been short of money, and they don't think about where all the thousands of years of accumulation of other 1.2.3-Grade families have gone.

It's exactly the same as the fairy tale about family, except for the name!