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[Campus entertainment single heroine, easy to complain about daily articles] Pu Tong, a 18th-tier starlet, traveled through time and became a student. He was used to the entertainment industry's depths, and decided to stay away from it and study hard. What? The original person was selected by a variety show and became an amateur student? What the hell, a citizen's daughter is sitting at the same table with him? Why was I secretly photographed singing "My Deskmate" by myself? This is not written for my deskmates, don't get me wrong! I really don't have a crush on her. ... Later, as a top student, Pu Tong did not choose drama and film schools, but quietly went to Beijing University... Sorry fans, I really just want to study hard! (The author is a dead nerd, his world view is more two-dimensional, and he doesn't like to lightly criticize)
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Tianhu started, but the follow-up was unsatisfactory
I first saw this book through the commentary at Station B, and I was immediately attracted by the beginning. The setting is quite interesting. Pu Tong's character is low-key. He doesn't want to enter the entertainment industry because he has unpleasant memories from his previous life. The setting is quite normal, and the reason makes sense. Yu Wanwan is a daughter and a star, and Pu Tong is his deskmate because he is not interested in him. The reason also makes sense. The editing of the first episode was also very appropriate. This is the method commonly used in variety shows nowadays to create excitement, and it also has a bit of irony. After that, Pu Tong made it clear that he wanted to be an ordinary person and did not want to enter the entertainment industry. He just wanted to study and do some math. There will also be topics such as cultural inheritance and Chinese character dictation in the follow-up. As a person who was tortured by Chinese language in high school, I may feel that it is a bit fake and empty, but it does not prevent these from being a good idea and entry point. I also like Wang Guowei's "Human Poetry" and I was really excited when I saw it appearing in an online article. The entire 12th issue of the variety show is one of my favorite chapters, including encounters, conflicts, climaxes, and endings. It also witnessed the birth of Pu Yu CP. I was moved by the twelfth episode. Although I guessed it in advance, it didn't stop me from being moved. The interaction between the two people in the following article was so sweet to me. The plot of the summer vacation is generally acceptable. It is reasonable. Yu Wanwan changes schools, acts, and meets his parents. There is no problem in this. I personally think it's okay for Pu Tong to write a school script, because the purpose is to transfer his girlfriend to another school. But what was the purpose of writing "A Chinese Ghost Story"? As soon as Yu Wanwan asked him to write one, he wrote it. They hadn't confessed their love at that time, but they started pretending. It seemed like they were quite busy during the summer vacation, and then they stopped studying. From here, Pu Tong's settings started to change. Later, I went crazy with songwriting and had n number of programs in the Spring Festival Gala. This completely changed the flavor. As for the three Yu Wanwan, they haven't changed much. These three are very lovable from the beginning to the end. Pu Tong is low-key and extremely high-key, which is very strange. He sings in variety shows in scripts, commercials, and now he has to film his own TV series. This makes him feel like a different person. In general, the plot has plummeted since "When You Were Young". As for the setting, if it is said to be a parallel world, I will accept it. All the works in this world are not as good as ours. The history is also different, but the countries are the same, so I will not complain about it. But sometimes I joke, "I am the First Emperor of Qin" (I forgot where). This is said by someone in this world, which is contradictory. Also, the three women did not know Confucius before, but I remember "Confucius" in the lyrics of "Chinese". After all, I read this kind of novel without thinking, so I found some contradictions, and there will definitely be more details. As for Pu Tong, his dream at the beginning was just to be ordinary. How did it change later? I thought about it for a moment. It may have been his love for Yu Wanwan that made him change. He hoped to be in the same class as the person he liked, and then he got out of hand and became a top-notch person. In short, the setting changes too much, without any reason. Later, someone comes to him to do something, first shirks it and then takes over. After that, it becomes the same as other pretentious novels, lacking new ideas. It's important to mention that he was recommended. He ranked seventh in the country in one semester of mathematics competition. He must be reincarnated as an academician. As a mathematician, I can only say that it is outrageous, but after all, I can't complain about online writing. Most of the reason why I was able to watch the latest chapter was because I watched the candy-sprinkling, dog-food-eating, and early plots that stood out from the crowd. I already had a deep impression on Pu Yu, so it supported me to continue reading. And CP Xie Ding, he was relieved when he saw it was done. The reviews are almost like this, and the follow-up is actually pretty much the same, already "vulgar".
I really can't stand it anymore. I was attracted to it on Douyin. The setting is so good and the writing is so unbearable. It's so fake and ridiculous at the same time. It's really disgusting. Garbage
It came from Douyin,
I feel like the setting is pretty good, but the performance is too deliberate.
This book is quite poisonous
1. Set the poison. For its own selfish desires, the school ignores the normal teaching order and has been filming variety shows for a long time. What is it for? It's not just about making money... It seems that the destination of the money is not mentioned, but it is conceivable that it is almost impossible to give it to the students, but the negative impact on the students is long-term and real. Of course, it is impossible for the Education Bureau to exist in this kind of article, and parents are all idiots with a love brain. 2. The character design is poisonous. The female protagonist doesn't care because she's the one who eats the rice anyway. The male protagonist plays a role and is upright and upright. He keeps his hands and mouth empty and keeps saying "I just want to study." He really clings to a beautiful woman to gain a sense of presence. Just licking it and saying "study" is pretty disgusting. Although you can't use your brain when reading online articles, not having a brain doesn't mean you don't have a brain. If you treat readers as idiots, this is purely to disgust people. To be continued
It started fine
At first I was attracted by this setting, but later I saw that I was helping with dictation writing and I didn't like it anymore. I was no longer needed, so I went to help with dictation writing, and then to make up for my mistakes, I started to show off. Is this called not being a star? Why did you have to have a relationship with a female celebrity when writing this? Don't you want to be one? Wouldn't it be better to stay far away?
Looks awkward
First of all, the problem is that the game company wants to do it from the beginning, but then refuses and then has no money to sell songs. Secondly, there is nothing wrong with deliberately emphasizing learning. Every chapter of this book emphasizes, is it necessary to engage in scientific research? Then, knowing that it is a parallel time and space and paying no attention to copyright history, this point can obviously be described with more words, but I deliberately emphasize learning. The last two points are founding a company and deliberately emphasizing learning. Creating a company is to get rich. What is the purpose of deliberately emphasizing learning? The main purpose of learning is to learn how to be a good person, and strong learning ability is for scientific research and development. Then I don't write about scientific research at all.
Hard to comment, hope it can be changed
Let me make it clear first that I don't read much novels. These are my personal opinions. 1. The male and female protagonist's cp emotional line I feel that Pu Yu's relationship line between the male and female protagonists is getting worse and worse as the writing progresses. Probably the quality began to decline significantly after the confession. Among them, the heroine's inexplicable jealousy is a bit annoying. She is jealous two or three times in just a few pages. It feels unreasonable to pinch the male protagonist. Especially when reporter Chen Ying, the male protagonist's mother's friend, came to joke, the female protagonist was even jealous Little sister, don't be jealous. . . . It makes people feel a little unreasonable 2 The heroine's words and deeds are somewhat inconsistent (? The female protagonist said in the article that she and the male protagonist would make progress together and not be a drag, but to be honest, I didn't see her progress. In fact, if you look at it roughly (underlined), all in all, the male protagonist helps the female protagonist write songs to obtain high-quality resources. How can the female protagonist have such a big background and not get any good resources at all? . . Especially after getting together with the male protagonist, it is all the male protagonist's contribution, while the female protagonist's background is like a decoration. She occasionally jokes about inheriting the family business and mentions it. Later, her role is obviously much smaller. In the past, she threatened Director Xu and had a stronger sense of presence. 3 About Mulingcp I can only say that only the main CP is a bit broken, but the rest are all pretty good. But I feel like the author didn't take this couple seriously, and forgot to add a very important point after the confession chapters. Go see Grandma Xin I thought this was a very important plot to enhance the relationship, but the author completely forgot that, like the previous dialogue between Xie Mu and his father, it was all foreshadowed (Xie Mu promised to visit his grandma in the New Year, and as the Spring Festival was approaching, he told the protagonist to go see him after a few days off/the protagonist told Xie's father to tell his son himself) All eaten by dogs And after the confession, the emotional line is almost gone. . . (This is my personal feeling. After all, this pair is what motivates me to keep watching. I want to write about this fanfic myself, but I'm a little bit confused. 4 Male protagonist's point of view (? Can't find the right word It's hard for me to say this, eh In the past, I vowed not to be in the entertainment industry, but later I was very comfortable in various programs, stages, and variety shows. This feeling cannot be explained by "I will die if my heart is not entertained, but I am fearless in entertainment" It can be said that the connection is not very good and the transition is a bit too fast. 5 Questions about eating books This is the most uncomfortable question. It makes me suspect that the author either wrote randomly or hired a ghostwriter. Here I'll mention Tuotuo, Yukino's cat You said earlier that Tuotuo was fucked, and then you said that Tuotuo was pregnant. Very good. How many cats does Yukino have? Are they male or female? 6 Xixue cp It feels like this pairing was not in the outline from the beginning. It is just a random balancing act of literature. From the beginning of the sentence, it seems that we can't be together, and then there are many hidden hints at the emotional line. To be honest, the early foreshadowing of this pair can only be a plot of teasing each other. I feel that the emotional foundation is not enough, and then they suddenly write a lot later, it feels like. . . . A bit cool It's not impossible to do this, but it's going too fast. . . I didn't look carefully, but the two of them had no idea that they were the same person, and they had no feeling of thinking, entanglement and temptation. . . Or maybe I haven't fully thought about my feelings for the other person. For now, let's talk about other things. I really did a cursory look at it, and it doesn't count as close reading (because I read five hundred chapters in one day, that's all...
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. The whole Internet was saying that the protagonist had a secret crush on Yu Wanwan. The protagonist neither denied nor clarified, so he was forcibly defeated? Directly explain that the reason why I watched Yu Wanwan in music class was because there was something wrong with her guitar, so I helped her adjust it after school, and "My Deskmate" was not written for Yu Wanwan, right? And that director, what is his status? He has seen countless stars. Who do you think you are as a high school student? After being criticized by you, he even arranged for a camera to film you and insisted on promoting you into the entertainment industry. Isn't it embarrassing?
What's going on? The author doesn't update anymore?
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Official(449)Scraped 3d ago
Tianhu started, but the follow-up was unsatisfactory
I first saw this book through the commentary at Station B, and I was immediately attracted by the beginning. The setting is quite interesting. Pu Tong's character is low-key. He doesn't want to enter the entertainment industry because he has unpleasant memories from his previous life. The setting is quite normal, and the reason makes sense. Yu Wanwan is a daughter and a star, and Pu Tong is his deskmate because he is not interested in him. The reason also makes sense. The editing of the first episode was also very appropriate. This is the method commonly used in variety shows nowadays to create excitement, and it also has a bit of irony. After that, Pu Tong made it clear that he wanted to be an ordinary person and did not want to enter the entertainment industry. He just wanted to study and do some math. There will also be topics such as cultural inheritance and Chinese character dictation in the follow-up. As a person who was tortured by Chinese language in high school, I may feel that it is a bit fake and empty, but it does not prevent these from being a good idea and entry point. I also like Wang Guowei's "Human Poetry" and I was really excited when I saw it appearing in an online article. The entire 12th issue of the variety show is one of my favorite chapters, including encounters, conflicts, climaxes, and endings. It also witnessed the birth of Pu Yu CP. I was moved by the twelfth episode. Although I guessed it in advance, it didn't stop me from being moved. The interaction between the two people in the following article was so sweet to me. The plot of the summer vacation is generally acceptable. It is reasonable. Yu Wanwan changes schools, acts, and meets his parents. There is no problem in this. I personally think it's okay for Pu Tong to write a school script, because the purpose is to transfer his girlfriend to another school. But what was the purpose of writing "A Chinese Ghost Story"? As soon as Yu Wanwan asked him to write one, he wrote it. They hadn't confessed their love at that time, but they started pretending. It seemed like they were quite busy during the summer vacation, and then they stopped studying. From here, Pu Tong's settings started to change. Later, I went crazy with songwriting and had n number of programs in the Spring Festival Gala. This completely changed the flavor. As for the three Yu Wanwan, they haven't changed much. These three are very lovable from the beginning to the end. Pu Tong is low-key and extremely high-key, which is very strange. He sings in variety shows in scripts, commercials, and now he has to film his own TV series. This makes him feel like a different person. In general, the plot has plummeted since "When You Were Young". As for the setting, if it is said to be a parallel world, I will accept it. All the works in this world are not as good as ours. The history is also different, but the countries are the same, so I will not complain about it. But sometimes I joke, "I am the First Emperor of Qin" (I forgot where). This is said by someone in this world, which is contradictory. Also, the three women did not know Confucius before, but I remember "Confucius" in the lyrics of "Chinese". After all, I read this kind of novel without thinking, so I found some contradictions, and there will definitely be more details. As for Pu Tong, his dream at the beginning was just to be ordinary. How did it change later? I thought about it for a moment. It may have been his love for Yu Wanwan that made him change. He hoped to be in the same class as the person he liked, and then he got out of hand and became a top-notch person. In short, the setting changes too much, without any reason. Later, someone comes to him to do something, first shirks it and then takes over. After that, it becomes the same as other pretentious novels, lacking new ideas. It's important to mention that he was recommended. He ranked seventh in the country in one semester of mathematics competition. He must be reincarnated as an academician. As a mathematician, I can only say that it is outrageous, but after all, I can't complain about online writing. Most of the reason why I was able to watch the latest chapter was because I watched the candy-sprinkling, dog-food-eating, and early plots that stood out from the crowd. I already had a deep impression on Pu Yu, so it supported me to continue reading. And CP Xie Ding, he was relieved when he saw it was done. The reviews are almost like this, and the follow-up is actually pretty much the same, already "vulgar".
I really can't stand it anymore. I was attracted to it on Douyin. The setting is so good and the writing is so unbearable. It's so fake and ridiculous at the same time. It's really disgusting. Garbage
It came from Douyin,
I feel like the setting is pretty good, but the performance is too deliberate.
This book is quite poisonous
1. Set the poison. For its own selfish desires, the school ignores the normal teaching order and has been filming variety shows for a long time. What is it for? It's not just about making money... It seems that the destination of the money is not mentioned, but it is conceivable that it is almost impossible to give it to the students, but the negative impact on the students is long-term and real. Of course, it is impossible for the Education Bureau to exist in this kind of article, and parents are all idiots with a love brain. 2. The character design is poisonous. The female protagonist doesn't care because she's the one who eats the rice anyway. The male protagonist plays a role and is upright and upright. He keeps his hands and mouth empty and keeps saying "I just want to study." He really clings to a beautiful woman to gain a sense of presence. Just licking it and saying "study" is pretty disgusting. Although you can't use your brain when reading online articles, not having a brain doesn't mean you don't have a brain. If you treat readers as idiots, this is purely to disgust people. To be continued
It started fine
At first I was attracted by this setting, but later I saw that I was helping with dictation writing and I didn't like it anymore. I was no longer needed, so I went to help with dictation writing, and then to make up for my mistakes, I started to show off. Is this called not being a star? Why did you have to have a relationship with a female celebrity when writing this? Don't you want to be one? Wouldn't it be better to stay far away?
Looks awkward
First of all, the problem is that the game company wants to do it from the beginning, but then refuses and then has no money to sell songs. Secondly, there is nothing wrong with deliberately emphasizing learning. Every chapter of this book emphasizes, is it necessary to engage in scientific research? Then, knowing that it is a parallel time and space and paying no attention to copyright history, this point can obviously be described with more words, but I deliberately emphasize learning. The last two points are founding a company and deliberately emphasizing learning. Creating a company is to get rich. What is the purpose of deliberately emphasizing learning? The main purpose of learning is to learn how to be a good person, and strong learning ability is for scientific research and development. Then I don't write about scientific research at all.
Hard to comment, hope it can be changed
Let me make it clear first that I don't read much novels. These are my personal opinions. 1. The male and female protagonist's cp emotional line I feel that Pu Yu's relationship line between the male and female protagonists is getting worse and worse as the writing progresses. Probably the quality began to decline significantly after the confession. Among them, the heroine's inexplicable jealousy is a bit annoying. She is jealous two or three times in just a few pages. It feels unreasonable to pinch the male protagonist. Especially when reporter Chen Ying, the male protagonist's mother's friend, came to joke, the female protagonist was even jealous Little sister, don't be jealous. . . . It makes people feel a little unreasonable 2 The heroine's words and deeds are somewhat inconsistent (? The female protagonist said in the article that she and the male protagonist would make progress together and not be a drag, but to be honest, I didn't see her progress. In fact, if you look at it roughly (underlined), all in all, the male protagonist helps the female protagonist write songs to obtain high-quality resources. How can the female protagonist have such a big background and not get any good resources at all? . . Especially after getting together with the male protagonist, it is all the male protagonist's contribution, while the female protagonist's background is like a decoration. She occasionally jokes about inheriting the family business and mentions it. Later, her role is obviously much smaller. In the past, she threatened Director Xu and had a stronger sense of presence. 3 About Mulingcp I can only say that only the main CP is a bit broken, but the rest are all pretty good. But I feel like the author didn't take this couple seriously, and forgot to add a very important point after the confession chapters. Go see Grandma Xin I thought this was a very important plot to enhance the relationship, but the author completely forgot that, like the previous dialogue between Xie Mu and his father, it was all foreshadowed (Xie Mu promised to visit his grandma in the New Year, and as the Spring Festival was approaching, he told the protagonist to go see him after a few days off/the protagonist told Xie's father to tell his son himself) All eaten by dogs And after the confession, the emotional line is almost gone. . . (This is my personal feeling. After all, this pair is what motivates me to keep watching. I want to write about this fanfic myself, but I'm a little bit confused. 4 Male protagonist's point of view (? Can't find the right word It's hard for me to say this, eh In the past, I vowed not to be in the entertainment industry, but later I was very comfortable in various programs, stages, and variety shows. This feeling cannot be explained by "I will die if my heart is not entertained, but I am fearless in entertainment" It can be said that the connection is not very good and the transition is a bit too fast. 5 Questions about eating books This is the most uncomfortable question. It makes me suspect that the author either wrote randomly or hired a ghostwriter. Here I'll mention Tuotuo, Yukino's cat You said earlier that Tuotuo was fucked, and then you said that Tuotuo was pregnant. Very good. How many cats does Yukino have? Are they male or female? 6 Xixue cp It feels like this pairing was not in the outline from the beginning. It is just a random balancing act of literature. From the beginning of the sentence, it seems that we can't be together, and then there are many hidden hints at the emotional line. To be honest, the early foreshadowing of this pair can only be a plot of teasing each other. I feel that the emotional foundation is not enough, and then they suddenly write a lot later, it feels like. . . . A bit cool It's not impossible to do this, but it's going too fast. . . I didn't look carefully, but the two of them had no idea that they were the same person, and they had no feeling of thinking, entanglement and temptation. . . Or maybe I haven't fully thought about my feelings for the other person. For now, let's talk about other things. I really did a cursory look at it, and it doesn't count as close reading (because I read five hundred chapters in one day, that's all...
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. The whole Internet was saying that the protagonist had a secret crush on Yu Wanwan. The protagonist neither denied nor clarified, so he was forcibly defeated? Directly explain that the reason why I watched Yu Wanwan in music class was because there was something wrong with her guitar, so I helped her adjust it after school, and "My Deskmate" was not written for Yu Wanwan, right? And that director, what is his status? He has seen countless stars. Who do you think you are as a high school student? After being criticized by you, he even arranged for a camera to film you and insisted on promoting you into the entertainment industry. Isn't it embarrassing?
What's going on? The author doesn't update anymore?
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Recommendation index: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Writing: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Plot: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Genre: Light novel Recommended words: The 18-line artist who was deceived traveled through time and was reborn, and was wasted by the company for 20 years Yin, now he has traveled through a new life, recognizes the current situation, works hard to become stronger, and can't help but It was reported that a variety show was being recorded at school... "Hey, don't go through it." Ah, I really just want to study hard*"... The combination of celebrity reality show and daily youth campus love is very good, amateur With celebrities, variety shows and studies, the two world cultures collide with each other, making the protagonist's campus life colorful! Bad points: The nature of this book is a parallel world literary copycat type of novel Wen, there is no shortage of traditional cool points and thunderous points. For example, the star heroine at the same table has a tendency to be given away at the beginning. The protagonist pretends to be sexy everywhere but is forced to show off without realizing it. He copies songs and ancient poems and is widely praised. He doesn't want to be a star but is forced to do so, which leads to a stiff plot twist. However, it is great for a new author to innovate. I believe that things will gradually get better as they expand and they will take the initiative to improve! Readers who like the daily life of young campus love can take a look!




Recommended words: The 18th-line artist was deceived and was reborn in time. He spent 20 years in the company. Now he has traveled back in time and relived his life. He understands the current situation and works hard. Qiang, unexpectedly a variety show was recorded in school... "Hey, you guys Don't pass it, I really just want to study hard*"... The combination of celebrity reality show and daily youth campus love is very good, amateur and stars, variety shows and learning, the two world cultures collide with each other Collision makes the protagonist's campus life colorful! Bad points: The nature of this book is a parallel world literary copycat type of novel Wen, there is no shortage of traditional cool points and thunderous points. For example, the star heroine at the same table has a tendency to be given away at the beginning. The protagonist pretends to be sexy everywhere but is forced to show off without realizing it. He copies songs and ancient poems and is widely praised. He doesn't want to be a star but is forced to do so, which leads to a stiff plot twist. However, it's great for new authors to innovate. I believe it will be easy to do in the future. Things are getting better gradually as things unfold, and we will take the initiative to improve! Readers who like the daily life of young campus love can take a look!




Recommendation index: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Recommended words: A 18-line artist was deceived and was reborn. He spent 20 years in the company. Now he has traveled back and relived his life. He recognizes the current situation and works hard. Unexpectedly, a variety show was recorded in school... "Hey, don't go through with it. I really just want to study hard"... The combination of celebrity reality show and daily youth campus love is very good, amateur and stars, variety shows and learning, the two world cultures collide with each other Collision makes the protagonist's campus life colorful! Bad points: The nature of this book is a parallel world literary copycat type of novel Wen, there is no shortage of traditional cool points and thunderous points. For example, the star heroine at the same table has a tendency to be given away at the beginning. The protagonist pretends to be sexy everywhere but is forced to show off without realizing it. He copies songs and ancient poems and is widely praised. He doesn't want to be a star but is forced to do so, which leads to a stiff plot twist. However, it's great for new authors to innovate. I believe it will be easy to do in the future. Things are getting better gradually as things unfold, and we will take the initiative to improve! Readers who like the daily life of young campus love can take a look!




Keywords: urban entertainment, single female protagonist, relaxed Word count: 160,000 words I personally rarely come into contact with traditional entertainment works, but if you have something to do with campus, romance, daily literature, etc., I might be a little interested, okay! (≧∇≦)/ To make a long story short, this kind of novel is all about slow reading, but for some reason I feel like I want to read it slowly. The author calls himself a nerd, and the world view is more two-dimensional. There are many gags in the plot, including Kun Kun and a certain two-dimensional open world game. Ahem, but overall, the performance is good and worth looking forward to. Recommendation: Worth adding to the bookshelf, growing it as a fairy grass, looking forward to trying it! ╰(*´︶`*)╯














