The Night of Werewolf Killing Ends at Dawn

The author probably doesn't play werewolf, right? If you kill a werewolf, you won't be rewarded. If you don't look at your identity at the beginning, you will go straight into the night. Did you speak to the police directly the next day? How many policemen are there and how many are under the police? The prophet checks the logic, the police badge flows, and the speech is not good! Alas, I can't stand it after reading the first chapter. Werewolf, you have to write it logically, and not only the protagonist's logic must be good, but also the logic of other people! At least we know the identity of the protagonist, but you have to write about the other characters so that they don't explode! I really can't write a werewolf book if I don't have good logic.

Those who write werewolf killing novels with a surreal background and worldview should be thrown into the street

The following parts are completely copied from PK, GL and the famous games of the Beijing Masters. If the names of crooked brother, cowardly brother, etc. Are changed, it becomes a novel? Plagiarism! Ba Jin Shui, Crooked Three Swords, Barb Knight, Didi Black Car, that's enough. I advise you to restrain yourself and be an individual, okay? Then at least show your source.

The four-star rating does not mean that your writing is particularly good. The main reason is that few people write novels of this type. I would like to support you. First of all, when you used passers-by A and B, you felt that it was very dramatic at the beginning. Of course, you did not write it later. Second: when you wrote the protagonist, you did not include the details of each game. The identity should be written clearly so that the reader cannot have a sense of involvement. The whole process will be confused. Third, you should mention the format at the beginning of each game. Otherwise, how will the reader know what is being played? In the first game, I didn't know it was the White Wolf King until the end, like this "[12-man White Wolf King Guard]" Dark side. Butcher side. There is a police sergeant Configuration: White Wolf King + 3 wolves + 4 civilians + pre-hunter Witch: You can't save yourself in the whole process Tie vote: PK round of speeches Speaking time: 120 seconds Sheriff: decides the order of speaking, has 1.5 Votes Your identity in this bureau is: XX". I really hope that someone can write a good novel, and I don't want to give you the pen, but you can write it because you don't have time or energy. For other formats, just change the identity.

After seeing a few pictures, I felt a little bit poisoned. He is a talented person who passes by people in the east and west, and his number is whatever he is. It looks very uncomfortable to do this. It would be fine if you removed it. So the author is digital.

The twelve people didn't say what game they were playing, nor did they explain the protagonist's number first. In the King's Game mentioned above, there are still people who come out to play for newbies. Also, if you don't want to make up a name, just use the number. Write about passers-by A, B, C, D, southeast, northwest, and it's annoying to look at. Let's see what happens next! It doesn't give us a perspective. It is said that with a perspective, some people's speeches will be found to be stupid. But if you don't give us a perspective, I feel that some people's speeches are even stupider. I felt like I was sitting in the audience. I can't get enough energy at all. The protagonist also feels unrelatable. After watching it, I felt like I had experienced it again. I saw many people commenting that the logic is very good, but I don't feel it. I can't even sit in any of the 12 seats. If you want to fight on top, just fight! I feel nothing! I have absolutely no desire to find wolves or priests.

...Why use PandakilI's battle example?

I feel that the protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and it feels very frustrating to watch. The girls also like others in front of the protagonist.

Come on! Don't go into the palace.

Since the author is writing about werewolf killings, he should be familiar with JY. I have an idea that you can see if it is feasible. It is to write about someone who travels back in time and participates in various werewolf killing programs with JY. I think it is interesting.