Sui Jun Admitted the Wrong Person? Kissed Hard by Abstinence Boss

The new book "Pregnant Belly Follows the Army, and the Vicious Ex-Wife Was Pampered to Tears" has been released. It is a sweet story about marriage first and love later ~ I hope readers will enjoy reading it!

The author's writing is fluent, and there is nothing wrong with it as a daily sweet story about soldiers. The male protagonist is very devoted to the female protagonist. At least so far, he has not seen any emotional entanglements other than the female protagonist. The female partner who liked the male protagonist in the early stage is not too entangled. It is suitable for reading without thinking to pass the time when you are bored. The following is a lightning protection: First of all, there are too many flaws in the character design. At present, the male protagonist's character is not broken. The heroine's character is very confusing and a bit inconsistent. The heroine was a criminal psychologist before she entered the book. However, except for the use of some psychological counseling and treatment in the hospital in the early stage, the heroine can see 0 people's thoughts when getting along with others. It is clear that when she debuted in the car, she was able to adapt to danger without any hesitation when faced with threats from criminals, but the heroine could not see that the man was interested in her. The heroine even noticed someone staring at her when she went out alone, but she did not travel more cautiously and observe whether the people around her were unfavorable to her. The female protagonist has 0 self-protection ability, and she needs the male protagonist to save her from danger every time. I don't know how the author arranged the heroine's character? Do you want an independent strong woman or a purebred wife? If it is a story about a spoiled wife, then the book will focus on family life running the compound from beginning to end, or just focus on the love life of the male and female protagonists, but the two people got married and agreed to write a one-month deadline to write two hundred chapters; if it is a strong independent woman, the heroine will become extremely soft when she meets the male protagonist. The female protagonist seems to have to rely on the male protagonist. When she encounters the male protagonist, she forcibly subdues him. As a criminal psychologist, it's okay to be unable to hide things in front of the male protagonist. I understand that the author wants to write about the special or tacit understanding between the two of them, but the male protagonist can see anything that happens to the female protagonist. The female protagonist is a psychology practitioner but can't see through the male protagonist at all times. The female protagonist described is not even comparable to ordinary people in the professional field, with 0 professionalism. As well as some plot conflicts and character arrangements, the main male characters currently appearing (with physical characteristics) are all interested in the female protagonist. This is not a big deal, but the character design of the original female protagonist has completely collapsed. It is obvious that the inner monologue of the female protagonist when she appeared was that she liked the original female protagonist better when she was chasing books. As a result, the appearance is demeaning, engaging in female rivalry, behind the scenes, and being a fisherman. Except for her appearance, which is consistent with the original work, 0 things are consistent with the original description of the original heroine. Of course, it is acceptable to set up from the beginning that this person is not a good person. However, what is the difference between the original heroine forcibly subverting her intelligence and becoming the vicious female supporting character in this article and the so-called original female supporting character in the original work? At least the original female protagonist confirmed that whether she was cowardly and did not dare to resist or was hopelessly brainwashed, she did cause harm to the original male protagonist. She deserves to be targeted by others. It is okay to say that hateful people must have pity; but why did the original female protagonist target the female protagonist after she appeared? Is the inner monologue that the other person does not deserve such a good life? What does it have to do with how the other person lives? Targeting her forcibly when it has nothing to do with her is not forcibly subduing her. Moreover, (the original heroine) said that her rebirth cannot be noticed by others, and she kept lying. There are too many inconsistencies in the character design, and the settings are too perfunctory and superficial. Many settings are Schrödinger-style settings. When necessary, a simple forced connection will appear, but in most cases this setting cannot be seen on the character. Yes, that's right, I'm talking about the heroine of this article. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. The character creation is really too flawed, and the plot has some prefaces that don't match the subtitles. There is definitely a chance that these changes will be successful. After all, the writing style is still good. Even if it is a mindless wife novel, there will still be an audience. 🚬

It's a bit outrageous. The fiancé can actually get it wrong. Let's not talk about the heroine. The male protagonist's family conditions are so good. Plus, he is a soldier. He needs to investigate before the military marriage. You still can't figure it out? Suddenly a girl came to me and said that she was my fiancée. She called her home to ask but she didn't even ask about the situation?不问家里叫什么吗? The heroine met her real fiancé, but the original fiancé didn't even tell her. In order to make up the word count or to force the male and female protagonists to be together, do you make the characters all idiots?

Good article, I try my best to let everyone read it together, you vote and I vote, the author wrote it until he was ninety-nine years old😘

I just love watching this kind of tugging and teasing, it's so much fun! The heroine is kind, principled and has upright views. She always tries her best to help the people around her. Keep going!

The writing is too ink... The heroine has been in more than 100 chapters and I still don't know that I have identified the wrong person...

In fact, I don't think there is any need to forcefully add any space, the writing is very good in all aspects, but adding a space is so abrupt and the grade is lowered!

In this environment of evil women everywhere, a stream of clear water finally appears. It is really not easy for the author to persevere!

Not enough. Not enough at all. Please update the author.

It's pretty good-looking. The heroine is like a little sun, and the hero is okay. But the hero doesn't like smoking very much. Men who smoke stink, and so does the hero. And don't pinch the heroine's chin at all times. I'm sorry that I can't imagine that scene. Five stars is really a hard life.