Extra of "fighting Through the Sky and Yun Yun
by Baibaik
About This Novel
Ps: It's been almost two years, and I look back at the miscellaneous things I wrote. Hahaha, I feel so young. I think I am also a teenager writing about teenagers, and everyone is a teenager reading teenagers. I plan to rewrite this story recently and have already saved it. The storyline will be greatly changed, including for original characters. However, the character Lin Zhen is going to disappear. Later, everyone scolded me miserably. I also went back and watched Dou Po again and again. Yun Yun really doesn't know how to do it. As the readers said... In short, this version is still there, but soon, I will update a follow-up with a better storyline and more characters, mainly about Yun Yun. You can look forward to it... "Little guy, you took advantage of me again!" As he said this, Yun Yun's shy face turned slightly red, her mouth murmured softly, and her fingers gently approached Xiao Yan's chest, with some avoidance in her eyes, like a kitten. Xiao Yan silently looked at Yun Yun in front of him, raised the corner of his mouth slightly, his eyes were full of love, and said with some excitement, "Come back to the Jiaji Empire with me, I want to marry you, and I don't want to miss you anymore." "You!" Yun Yun was a little surprised, shocked by Xiao Yan's sudden words. Yun Yun lowered her head, blushing and whispered, "Humph! I won't let you go this time, little guy!"
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Official(54)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is very delicate and the plot is novel. It is a particularly great book and well worth reading!
The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It uses the description of the environment to set off the mood of the characters, which is very artistic. 👍👍😹😹
Come on, big, big, big!
Hang in there! Coding seriously during the summer vacation! Looking forward to a big book!
The article has great literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. Worth a look
Not bad, keep up the good work.
Although I have only been exposed to novels for a short time, I only started reading novels in 19 years. At that time, I watched Swallowing Starry Sky, Ancient God King, Futian Clan, Wu Ji Tian Xia, Ai Tian Xie Shen... And Dou Po, who I had just come into contact with last year. I personally feel that Fighting the Sphere is very enjoyable, although Tudou's literary talent at that time was not as good as it is now, and there are still some gaps in the novel that have not been filled. But overall it is still very popular, but one of my problems is Yun Yun. Yun Yun is so madly in love with Xiao Yan and has resisted so many scoldings for him, but in the end she couldn't become the heroine. On the other hand, Xiao Yan hurt her so much but did not give Yun Yun an explanation. I think Yun Yun still hopes to become Xiao Yan's woman. After all, I think she is the person who loves the male protagonist the most in Dou Po. Although Tudou later wrote a spin-off about Yun Yun, I still haven't completely healed this sore spot, and my heart is itching! 🤠😇
good book
Good books deserve to be seen, please keep updating the author, GoGo
It's really good~ I highly recommend this book~ Everyone, please go~
This book is really good, and the author is also very talented~ I hope the author will work harder~ Go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go!
Highly recommended, the writing is great, you must read it! ! !
Big cheers for the author!
The author is very good~ The writing style is very good~ I am looking forward to the following stories~ I hope the author will work harder~
I like this ending very much
I suggest that this extra chapter can be made into an animation to let more people know about it. I hope that Yun Yun and Xiao Yan will have a happy ending together.
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Official(54)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is very delicate and the plot is novel. It is a particularly great book and well worth reading!
The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It uses the description of the environment to set off the mood of the characters, which is very artistic. 👍👍😹😹
Come on, big, big, big!
Hang in there! Coding seriously during the summer vacation! Looking forward to a big book!
The article has great literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. Worth a look
Not bad, keep up the good work.
Although I have only been exposed to novels for a short time, I only started reading novels in 19 years. At that time, I watched Swallowing Starry Sky, Ancient God King, Futian Clan, Wu Ji Tian Xia, Ai Tian Xie Shen... And Dou Po, who I had just come into contact with last year. I personally feel that Fighting the Sphere is very enjoyable, although Tudou's literary talent at that time was not as good as it is now, and there are still some gaps in the novel that have not been filled. But overall it is still very popular, but one of my problems is Yun Yun. Yun Yun is so madly in love with Xiao Yan and has resisted so many scoldings for him, but in the end she couldn't become the heroine. On the other hand, Xiao Yan hurt her so much but did not give Yun Yun an explanation. I think Yun Yun still hopes to become Xiao Yan's woman. After all, I think she is the person who loves the male protagonist the most in Dou Po. Although Tudou later wrote a spin-off about Yun Yun, I still haven't completely healed this sore spot, and my heart is itching! 🤠😇
good book
Good books deserve to be seen, please keep updating the author, GoGo
It's really good~ I highly recommend this book~ Everyone, please go~
This book is really good, and the author is also very talented~ I hope the author will work harder~ Go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go!
Highly recommended, the writing is great, you must read it! ! !
Big cheers for the author!
The author is very good~ The writing style is very good~ I am looking forward to the following stories~ I hope the author will work harder~
I like this ending very much
I suggest that this extra chapter can be made into an animation to let more people know about it. I hope that Yun Yun and Xiao Yan will have a happy ending together.
