Benxian Xiong Chumo

Beichenxuan: Super arrogant, what do you think of the title Princess Nan? If you are domineering or not, let me ask you whether you are handsome or not. Chu Mo: Tsk, what the hell is this? I don't want it.

"Benxian Xiongchumo" has been published from Yunqi Academy in mid-December to now, which has lasted a total of three and a half months. Xiaolin would like to thank all the cute little friends in the book club. Thank you for your rewards, thank you for your recommendation votes, thank you for your subscription, and thank you for checking in in my comment area. To be honest, I know what I wrote myself. There is actually nothing outstanding about this book, especially the second volume [After Death] and the third volume [Lady of the Southern Country]. They are really poorly written, and there are even signs of collapse several times. But thank you, little cuties, for not giving up on me because of this. If you are a newbie who has just started reading this book and happened to see this essay, then my suggestion is that the beginning of this book is okay. Even if nothing else is said, it is at least relatively relaxed and humorous. Of course, it may be just me who thinks so. After Mo Mo traveled to the Kyushu Continent, robbed the Southern King, went to the brothel to capture An Guohou, including the part where he gave Prime Minister Xiong acupuncture points and hung up the small blackboard, I personally think it is quite interesting... If this book collapses, it should be when Xiong Chumo enters the palace and punishes the little palace maid. In this place, the temper of the heroine may be a little too much, and the treatment of the vicious female supporting character is also too vicious. I personally feel that the writing from this place to the Black Dragon Village is not very good. The heart-wrenching plot in Black Dragon Village after that was honestly the most enjoyable plot I have ever written, but the later parts began to slowly return to dullness. From the part after Xiong Chumo left Youdu City, to be honest, I didn't think it was worth watching. Maybe it was because I didn't write the kind of heart-wrenching plot I wanted, and also, the feeling of a sweet pet. The plots of the second and third lives after that, except for some sweet spots in some places, most of them are relatively dull. Of course, in the end, I was willing to do it because my personal writing level has not yet reached it, and the details were not grasped well at the beginning. However, when it comes to the volume of "The Demonic Concubine of the Confused Country", I personally feel that it is still okay. In this life, the character of the heroine may have changed a lot compared to the first life. From the simplest personal relationship between children, I try to expand this aspect as much as possible, so that the plot of this volume is not only about the personal relationship between children! However, I was personally satisfied with what I wrote at the beginning, but when the war between Nanyue Kingdom and Yan Kingdom started, I did not write the part where Xiong Chumo advocated for peace very well. Until Xiong Chumo was injured, pretended to have amnesia, and started to decide to do business, I think this part is still acceptable. In fact, I have a problem, that is, after every book I write, I will make a summary for myself. However, I never posted it before because I felt embarrassed. However, now that time has passed and I have become thick-skinned, I am no longer afraid of being embarrassed. Of course, there is another very important reason, that is, I think shortcomings must always be faced squarely. Only by facing shortcomings squarely can we correct them. The worst thing I deal with now is probably the character part, and the over-processing of the plot. Sometimes, due to the needs of the plot, the character of the protagonist becomes not so likable, or even untenable, including the supporting characters, and the transitional parts of the plot afterwards. The transitions are very ink and stiff every time. Of course, if you have any other opinions or suggestions for me, you can also leave me a message in the comment area directly. I will work hard to correct it. Finally, thank you all for your companionship over the past three and a half months. In addition, Xiao Lin's new book "The Beauty of the National Map" has been officially launched. The author is positioned as a "hot-blooded power plot". As for the emotional line, it is a bit sadistic, and of course there will be some sugar-splitting parts, but it is all because of the plot needs, and the original text has no CP. The author also strives to write in a light humor direction, but after all, it is positioned as a Machiavellian novel, so it cannot be funny and humorous throughout. There is only some light humor at some appropriate points. I hope everyone will like it. [Moxiaolin Book Club]: 161880013

Classmate Xiong Chumo, please always remember that you are a girl and be gentle in your actions. You were playing with a kitchen knife, and your little brother was so frightened that he stammered. If you look for someone to show you the way, don't you have to hide when everyone sees you? 😂😂

I just wanted to rate the trumpet, but suddenly I found out that I had grabbed the 250th floor. I was heartbroken, so sad and unhappy...

Happy New Year to the author hahaha ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

Come on, punch in, punch in, punch in

The little emperor is so cute. I like him so much. He speaks serious truths (nonsense). I want to rub him and hug him haha. So who will win this fight? I bet the little emperor loses.

Although I know that this heroine is really seeking death and does not deserve sympathy, I still want to say, Beichen Mo, are you seeking death? These two people have a blood feud, and you still let her coax your little queen mother! ? Aren't you afraid that Xiong Chumo will take out a kitchen knife and chop up your little queen mother in seconds? ? My heart is really big...

Water review. You actually praise yourself like this, it's cbyl😑 (it's referring to the author's post praising his talent)

Those things that can make you better may not be easy at first, but as long as you persist, you can grow.