Beastmaster: I'm Really Not a Master of Training

It's seriously inconsistent with the title. It says about cultivating masters, and the introduction also says that the four great wastes turned into the four great gods. Then the first one was successfully cultivated, and the first twenty chapters were about fighting against the evil god organization. I was convinced, and the process paid off. Even though the official organization is obviously nearby, they use students as bait, and then shamelessly ask if they can buy the pet beast cultivated by the protagonist. The protagonist directly agrees to sell it for at least 100 million for only 10 million. I was very upset when I saw this, and then I read the comments. Many people actually thought that the beginning was good, but they had to have more diarrhea later on.

When cultivating beasts, don't write about cult attacks or anything like that. What you write is for those who come to see the beasts. They are always in the water.

The protagonist is too rigidly portrayed, and it feels like his character just follows the plot. I don't have my own character at all, just the character of a greasy man. But what do you think is attractive about a greasy man? You can portray an ordinary man. After all, he has cheats and confidence, but he has an oily character, which makes me very embarrassed. Then there are several chapters in the plot where all the supporting characters are included, and the protagonist does not show his face. I don't know. I thought you were behind the story of the group portrait. As a beast-control novel, the battles in this beast-control novel are all about fighting those cults, not serious fights. You want to say that the focus is on cultivation, and the protagonist is still fighting back and forth with the cults.

The theme was originally good, but the plot was really annoying, especially the official forces in it, which seemed very useless. They were always being led by the villain, and a group of cultists seemed to have more brains than the official forces. The main storyline is often about cults causing trouble. The official forces are full of confidence at first, as if they are strategizing, and then they immediately slap in the face and create traps. Taking advantage of the situation turns into being cheated by the leader, and actively setting up traps turns into digging holes to bury oneself. In order to highlight the role of the protagonist, there are dangers every time. The protagonist is asked to fill in the leaks time and time again. The so-called back-up tactics are all detonated by the enemy in advance, which makes the top management feel very brainless.

After reading Chapter 26, let me break down the gambling points of such a small chapter. 1. The male protagonist himself said that he has been in this world for three months. He cherishes the family relationship because he was an orphan in his previous life. There is no problem with this, but where did that inexplicable fat man come from? We started to call each other brothers and sisters. I just mentioned 3 months earlier, and when I introduced Fatty, I mentioned how many years we have been together. Don't be disgusted with me😐 2. I can understand the male protagonist researching koi fish and looking up information and asking people, but if you directly say that I already know what evolution requires when there are so many people in the group, you are missing a kind of material. Are you really brainless? 3. It's a cult within a cult. This is the point that I can't understand the most. In front of the huge state machine, organizations like you are nothing like Li. I don't understand why so many novels like to write this kind of mentally retarded content. 4. The male protagonist clearly knows how exaggerated the evolution of the koi is, but instead of secretly evolving, he drags the fat man along to watch the evolution process. By coincidence, the place of evolution happens to be within the scope of the cult's activities. 5. After the evolution, the cult organization came out immediately, and knowing that the male protagonist was a genius cultivator, the male protagonist directly exposed his identity and asked the male protagonist to join them. The above is all within Chapter 26. I didn't even need to read the subsequent development to know that the male protagonist started to have various conflicts with the organization and fell into organizational difficulties, and then pretended to be slapped in the face. This cycle continues.

The subject matter of this book is indeed good, which is why I gave it two stars. There's really nothing else to say. The plot drags on, and the author doesn't read any comments. Either he made typos or he forgot what he wrote before, and there are many inconsistencies. Furthermore, many parts of it are very brainless. There are a lot of people who hate the protagonist when they see him with a girl. They are all students at the Beast Control University. How can they not be so brainless? I feel that the author's brain is the same as that of the villain in it. Either the capacity is small or it is covered with lard. It's so stupid. Overall, you can still watch it. It's purely mindless. Just put your brain aside before watching it.

Plots such as the protagonist attacking the city are definitely not a failure for this type of article. Do you write about combat or cultivation? If you want to cultivate it, pretend to fight. What is more interesting about protecting the future of mankind and protecting the city?

The first 25 chapters were well written. The evolution of the carp was quite innovative and worth at least four and five stars. After that, it was completely dwarfed. There were a lot of useless plots. It was nothing but water. The writing was vulgar and the plot was dragging and worthless. Especially the description of the battle was not ordinary. I was dumbfounded. All appeared, and I was speechless. If this originally was a good novel, if it was written from the perspective of cultivation, continuous innovation, and advancement layer by layer, it would definitely become a masterpiece. It is a pity that the author is not careful and always wants to save trouble. He tightens things first and loosens them later, and uses a lot of cliched plots to overwhelm the word count, which completely ruins the book.

Jue Juezi, the male protagonist never shows off his self-awareness

Before graduating from high school, he and the security bureau were evenly matched against the evil forces. His combat power was completely broken. An ordinary koi could evolve and deal with this evil force with a captain of the security bureau. The evil force was so weak and should have been wiped out long ago. A high school student could fight him back and forth.