See Desolation in the Beginning of the World
by 81194
About This Novel
"Arrow Shoots the Emperor" The racecourse was filled with wind and sand, and several riding officers stood up reining in their reins. The leader came with his whip pointed. "Wu!" Listen up, you big errand! We are ordered by Shangguan Jun to quickly seize your most powerful horse and use it as a royal patrol. This is the emperor's mission, no delay, hurry up and get ready! 』 "..." "Advice?" Pfft hahahaha! You, a horse breeder, actually want to give advice to His Majesty? 』 "Who is the author of Manjianghong?" Never heard of it! ! Are the articles written by unknown people worthy of His Majesty's holy hearing? 』 "..." Another person came forward, pointed his finger and sarcastically. "Hahahaha, little Bima Wen, a sesame in charge of a small racecourse. Are you still dreaming of attending a meeting in front of His Majesty? What a dream. A mote of dust like you can't even touch His Majesty's dragon boots! 』 "Tell you, that old emperor, he looks down on someone. I want to show him that I am not someone to be bullied! 』 According to historical records, the emperor was on a hunting tour and held a banquet on a high platform. From time to time, flying arrows flew through the air, penetrating from the distant mountains and approaching the throne...
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Have you two agreed on the title of the book? |･ω･｀)
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The author should look at other authors' books and see how they format them (you should use colons and quotation marks instead of a mess of special symbols. It looks very messy. This is just a problem I found after reading one chapter. I came here to give some suggestions to the author). It's not that it's bad, but it's just that a book written in the first person is like a narrative, like a running account. Only when written in the third person can a story be better told.
Still writing novels using "I"
You still use me to write novels, don't you think it's awkward? No one will read this.
I think it's pretty good! come on
Come on, work hard for each other! Go, go, go! Great!
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Have you two agreed on the title of the book? |･ω･｀)
A vivid couplet
suggestion
The author should look at other authors' books and see how they format them (you should use colons and quotation marks instead of a mess of special symbols. It looks very messy. This is just a problem I found after reading one chapter. I came here to give some suggestions to the author). It's not that it's bad, but it's just that a book written in the first person is like a narrative, like a running account. Only when written in the third person can a story be better told.
Still writing novels using "I"
You still use me to write novels, don't you think it's awkward? No one will read this.
I think it's pretty good! come on
Come on, work hard for each other! Go, go, go! Great!
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