
The Lady I Picked up is a Fish
by Big Eggplant
About This Novel
[Buddhist mermaid and salted fish fairy-Vinegar paranoid and controlling boss] Tangeshui is a famous flower of the high mountains among celebrities in City A. It attracted countless celebrities to stretch out their hands and try their best to bring the flower of the high mountains into their arms. What I didn't expect was that such a noble young man would be picked up by a little girl who appeared from nowhere. Yun Anan was originally a wandering fish, but accidentally got a permanent meal ticket. After being complacent, he found that the fish couldn't escape and was in a villa on the private beach in Haicheng. Tan Ge Shui, soaked all over, took the huge silver fish tail into his arms, and held his thin waist tightly with his big and well-jointed hands. The deep voice was gentle and gentle: "An'an, don't even think about leaving."
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Official(94)Scraped 8d ago
This tange buffalo began to treat Yun Anan as if he were taking care of his daughter. He carefully and patiently taught her how to speak and normal human behavior. Later, he secretly poked her and abducted her back to her household registration book.
The author is so sorry for this sentence
Ah, the author's sentence fragmentation was so confusing that I almost thought the author was a merman who had just learned to speak...
Pay attention to typos
The names Yun Anan and Yun Chuan changed back and forth. There is no distinction between him and her, girls also use him
Yun Anan gave birth to another mermaid. Although she had the memory of being a human in the past, she temporarily lost the ability to speak and could not even perform basic human behaviors. Therefore, her life was very simple and inconvenient from the beginning.
typo
Too many big typos
Good guy, a big-tailed wolf, Tange Shui fell in love at first sight from the first time I saw him on the beach. I'm afraid I've already started to make up my mind at that time.
Very nice
Personally, I think there's nothing wrong with it except for the sentence fragmentation and the incorrect placement of punctuation marks.
The author does not use punctuation
The punctuation is not easy to use. Two sentences are combined into one long sentence, which is uncomfortable to watch.
The author's sentence fragmentation is really excellent, and there are some logical and timing problems. Change it
Damn, I'm here to urge you to update. I'm really looking forward to the male protagonist discovering that the female protagonist is a fish🐟
I am an experienced reader. I personally like mermaids, but there are very few authors who have written about them. I am very glad to have read this book. So far, I like both the plot of the book and the characters of the male and female protagonists. Please keep up the good work! <-Biubiu-⊂(`ω´∩)
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Official(94)Scraped 8d ago
This tange buffalo began to treat Yun Anan as if he were taking care of his daughter. He carefully and patiently taught her how to speak and normal human behavior. Later, he secretly poked her and abducted her back to her household registration book.
The author is so sorry for this sentence
Ah, the author's sentence fragmentation was so confusing that I almost thought the author was a merman who had just learned to speak...
Pay attention to typos
The names Yun Anan and Yun Chuan changed back and forth. There is no distinction between him and her, girls also use him
Yun Anan gave birth to another mermaid. Although she had the memory of being a human in the past, she temporarily lost the ability to speak and could not even perform basic human behaviors. Therefore, her life was very simple and inconvenient from the beginning.
typo
Too many big typos
Good guy, a big-tailed wolf, Tange Shui fell in love at first sight from the first time I saw him on the beach. I'm afraid I've already started to make up my mind at that time.
Very nice
Personally, I think there's nothing wrong with it except for the sentence fragmentation and the incorrect placement of punctuation marks.
The author does not use punctuation
The punctuation is not easy to use. Two sentences are combined into one long sentence, which is uncomfortable to watch.
The author's sentence fragmentation is really excellent, and there are some logical and timing problems. Change it
Damn, I'm here to urge you to update. I'm really looking forward to the male protagonist discovering that the female protagonist is a fish🐟
I am an experienced reader. I personally like mermaids, but there are very few authors who have written about them. I am very glad to have read this book. So far, I like both the plot of the book and the characters of the male and female protagonists. Please keep up the good work! <-Biubiu-⊂(`ω´∩)









