That's Right, My Card is Xin Qiji. What's Wrong?

In ancient times, many generals were actually both civil and military. Their combat effectiveness should be stronger. You can consider writing about them, such as Lu You, Yue Fei, Wen Tianxiang, Qi Jiguang, etc. Can poems about characters conjure characters? For example, Mulan's poem summons Hua Mulan, "A hero in life, a hero in death" summons Xiang Yu, etc. Will there be some words and phrases with special effects, such as "Sneaking into the night with the wind, moistening things silently", "Two rabbits walking next to each other, can you tell whether I am male or female?" Disguise? The couplets should also be used, right? For example, those hanging at the door of your home during the Chinese New Year can be made into blessing cards or shield cards.

Although I feel bad, it is a book I wrote after all, so I would like to give you a five-star review first to calm my surprise and encourage it!

It's not bad. I feel like I can memorize some poems while reading the article. Great work, it's too little and it's not enough to read😹😹😹😹

After reading 80% of it, I still want to write a review after much thought, because there are some things I really want to say. Let's talk about the advantages first. The advantages are that the subject matter is novel, the setting is good, and the writing is pretty good among newer works in this subject matter. Then there are the shortcomings. I know I have complained a lot, but I really want to talk about it. (1) The writing is very confusing and the timeline cannot be reflected. For example, the previous paragraph was on the day when a store was opened to sell cards, and the next paragraph was about exploring fights. The fights were described for a few pages, but the impression I had was that I could only go in and fight the BOSS directly. It means that there can be several time spans in a chapter. I feel like I can add a separator or separate a few lines to reflect the changes in time. (2) It feels a bit like Long Aotian's déjà vu, and everything the heroine does is too easy. For example, in black boxing, the heroine is a high school student and has been boxing for several years. She can even just talk to the person in charge and bring her classmates to fight together. Also, the later part of making a black card and opening a store gives people a feeling that it is very easy, and the description is that the heroine herself thinks that the ruined card turns out to be a very cherished black card, and then the heroine's brother happens to take a fancy to her black card and helps open the store, and the heroine's growth and hard work process is not seen at all. And I can't understand the heroine's level. It is written later that the heroine's teacher is a card king and it will be hard to fight against an eighth-level beast. Then the heroine's senior brother temporarily raised his cultivation level to a card king so that he can fight an eighth-level beast. But in the assessment of the heroine's apprenticeship, the heroine, not to mention the card spirit, can kill the seventh-level beast in seconds without even reaching the card battle... (The author set the card king > card spirit > card battle. Then why did the heroine not reach the card battle? Because the author wrote that the heroine's second senior brother is expected to be the youngest person to break through the card battle, so we can know that the heroine did not come to the card battle. Using the analogy of cultivating the Qi-building foundation pill Yuan Ying, the heroine teaches Yuanying, the second senior brother builds the foundation, the heroine practices Qi, and then the heroine uses Qi to instantly kill the monster with the golden elixir... It can be understood that the protagonist is extremely talented and can fight across levels, but this is no longer against the sky, but cheating) (3) Except for yourself, other NPCs have no brains. Whether it's the opponent in the finals of a game who just admits defeat when he thinks he can't beat her, or when the aunt is showing off her son Qingbei while riding in the car and the passerby NPC in the same row naturally asks the heroine to applaud and celebrate together, or when she sees her husband transferring money and decides that the heroine is a mistress looking for someone to teach her a lesson. The PC and her husband's brother (who likes female NPCs) saw the heroine coming up and made no distinction between black and white, so they took action first because the female NPC said that the heroine was a "mistress", and the head of the Su family, who was mentioned later as the number one, was very awesome. He knew clearly that he could not beat the heroine's teacher, but he couldn't help it after being scolded a few times. I went out to be beaten and then regretted it (that is to say... I can be the head of the house, but I know that I can't beat him and I still go to die. Is it really that stupid?), And the sales NPC who was accepted by the heroine as the store manager. When they met, he kept thinking because he saw the heroine at a high-class banquet. When I was eating, I felt that the heroine was here to catch Kaizi, and she said a lot of things for no reason, which was really very brainless. I think someone who can achieve gold medal sales and get invitations to high-class banquets shouldn't be so brainless as to define people they don't know at a banquet of this level... That's the main thing. My suggestion is to just read it as a mindless novel. Don't use your brain and don't think so much about why. It's pretty good this way. If you want to watch it with your brain, I don't recommend watching it.

I wondered why I couldn't publish anything because I didn't write anything. I was so anxious and anxious!

I personally like the theme of cards very much, and it can also summon many poets. This really pokes me, and the two stars are for the theme. I started to frown when I saw the setting of the heroine playing black boxing in the introduction, because this is a card world, is black boxing necessary? Because most card-themed authors will write about Kaling battles. My first thought was that black boxing was just for coolness, just like the previous setting where the heroine was a gold medal killer before she traveled through time. But I liked the subject matter, so I clicked in and read it. Sure enough, it didn't mention how the heroine learned martial arts. What kind of martial arts did the heroine belong to? Sanda, martial arts, Muay Thai, etc. How did she find this place? Not even mentioned, and a fight costs 100 yuan, are you kidding me? Is it enough for medical expenses? It also makes your family worry, so you might as well get a part-time job. Moreover, this black boxing gym has never killed anyone. Is it because the one hundred yuan payment is not worth it? If it's to pave the way for what's to come, you can write that the boss lady knows the heroine's S-level talent and invites the heroine to compete in the card master competition. This black boxing is really unnecessary. There is also the appearance of the character Xin Qiji. He appeared when the heroine came to save her mother, but there was no description at all. For such an important first appearance, it was written that the bodyguard was beheaded by a ray of light. I even thought it was the person from the Sun family who killed him. (That Sun xx deserves to die, that bodyguard deserves death.) The second appearance was already in the arena, and the card appearance still didn't describe much about what Xin Qiji's card was like. I only hurriedly described it after playing it. For a card-themed book, there are so few descriptions of cards, and look at the title of your book, author. I've been making cards for many days, so why don't I summon the cards a few times to get a better understanding of them? It would also be nice to have more interactions with the characters on the cards. The appearance of the card is an important point of description. Instead, the focus is on how the heroine pretends to be cool, which is putting the cart before the horse. The characters are relatively intelligent. The heroine's S-level talent is rare. If a school produces one, it won't be held up like a treasure. Instead, the heroine's school will look down on it. Elite teachers will also look down on them. Can someone who can only teach geniuses be considered an elite teacher? Then not just any teacher? Don't special teachers deserve to be called special teachers because they teach ordinary people better? After all, the school teacher is also studying hard to see if this literary talent can be saved before giving up. On the contrary, the head of the villain family is interested in the talent of the heroine, and it is estimated that the Sun family will have to appear later. The card world has been developing for a long time, and various talents have appeared. All kinds of geniuses are indispensable. Various talents should be studied. Don't underestimate the genius's cool operations. How can I put it this way? It's a matter of opinion to give a character a wit in order to force a slap-in-the-face plot, but is there any pleasure in slapping a fool in the face? Isn't it better to slap a smart person in the face? After all, it is a card theme, so describe the card characters more, communicate more with the card characters, and write the stories of these poets. These are exciting and important aspects of the card theme, and I hope we don't abandon them.

I have read Cardiff's novels more than once, with various themes such as apocalypse, interstellar, etc., And most of them were abandoned halfway through. But this one is very interesting and attractive, which makes me keep reading. If you like fantasy, you can give it a try. This book is really good, but it is too short, and it disappears at the first glance. It is not enough to read.

I really like Yi Zhu's story, but I really can't get enough of it!

The subject matter is very novel and the content is interesting, but a little lacking.

Just do these slaps in the face and treat others as fools