Gain Favor and Turn the Heroines into Bosses

Drive high and go low, there is water, there are few pitfalls, and there are many things that are not written down that make it more enjoyable!

Isn't there too much plot for this villain? Moreover, such a large force and such a large wave of actions did not cause it. The attention of local forces, even if the local forces are taken care of, what about the Templars? With such a big movement, do you think the Templars can't come through to maintain order? It was just two people fighting there unscrupulously, but a large circle of people around them pretended not to notice. He was quite speechless, and the plot was good, ***ink. One battle lasted for several chapters for a year. Then the protagonist wants to save the heroine, but he is even more mentally retarded. Can you improve your IQ? Did God get into the protagonist's arms and then block the weapon? Might as well help, If you crawl into your arms, his meow will not help you. Can you improve your IQ? How old are you? Not a three-year-old. If you want to describe improving feelings, you don't need to describe it like this, right? This is so damn speechless.

But when the protagonist fights, can he fight faster if he fights with a high level and a low level? Can you be more silent during the fight, and keep chatting with the other person? It's very speechless. It's just like those Japanese comic battles, it's very speechless and ink-stained. Can you be more efficient? In conjunction with the protagonist's high IQ Could the description of the fight be more efficient? I feel very speechless when I fight against someone whose level is lower than mine and still get entangled by them. The previous interface was level 5, and after the instant kill, the next level 5 was delayed for a year and it felt outrageous. The difference in strength between the two people should not be much. Combat experience isn't calculated like this, and it's not as if the protagonist doesn't have one.

Some readers reported that the character names were too cliché, and some changes have been made in order to adjust the look and feel. Aaliyah=Rias, Ellie=Revney, Jerry Tom=Pierce and Carter, Aia=Lola. (The book titles are all like this. I really can't think of any good names. Now these character names are all used by the writer's assistant's random naming function.)

Drive high and go low, each plot is well written in the front, but the water is boiling in the back

Just take a look at it. I won't be able to watch it anymore after reading the first copy.

The single-line plot of each heroine is well written, and overall the writing is okay. However, for the characterization of the heroine, the full score is 4.9, Which is just shy of passing the mark. Similar to system articles, when the system reward range does not account for much, there are not those numbers that rely on system rewards, and there are not a lot of rewards. The specific writing is okay, 8.1

I read it as a love harem story. The simulated small theater is good to watch, but some characters interact too little, the self-guided strategy is not interesting, the emotional line is not deep enough, and the subsequent battles are too long and boring, but overall it is okay. If the ending is not more than 30 chapters of fighting and killing, let's have the protagonist team lose in a decisive battle. When the two sisters Letiluna and Cher are about to make a wish, the male protagonist will have a super difficult simulation of random skills and other things, travel back to the past to gain favor with the sisters, and then return to the present, the sisters In fact, I have been carrying the memories of the past, and the wish I want to make is also related to the male protagonist. I find that the male protagonist knows everything, and leave the choice to the male protagonist. The male protagonist uses the producer's authority to recover the Holy Grail, realize the wishes of the sisters, and accept the last two harems with a happy ending. That's fine😙😙

The protagonist is running around for the heroine, but for no reason. (Okay, love at first sight, but no follow-up. In a sense, it is a kind of licking dog that ignores dedication) To advance the plot. Because he is the heroine, she will fight hard for him. This simulation time is weirdly long, this is the plot. I finished the simulation with only two or three chapters left, but it ended up being so long. This is a simulation. Isn't this a complete plot? If I don't tell you, I've forgotten it. He fell in love with her as soon as they met and fought for her life and death. We need to save her, there are so many poor people in the world. It's just that he is the heroine. By the way, you can actually write so many chapters in one simulation. It's not necessary, even the opposition faction can open a few chapters.

There are obviously a lot of cool things, but I haven't written any of them.