This Senior Brother is Too Outrageous

It's a good subject matter, but too many elements are stacked together, which makes it unsightly. It looks messy. In fact, it would be good to just write about a senior brother who is amazingly talented and a junior sister who is equally talented. The two of them have a sweet love relationship, plus various interesting things and a process of cultivation.

Qin Shuang traveled to the world of Xianxia and became a disciple of the Wannian Great Sect. There was a junior sister who was born with insulated spiritual energy and had just been annulled. Not only was the engagement annulled, but the junior sister also shouted the phrase "Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't deceive young girls into poverty." Although the old lady didn't have any rings, there was a remnant soul from her previous life in her mind. Facing the junior sister next to her who had the aura of a good-for-nothing protagonist, Qin Shuang always thought that her persona was that of a secondary brother of the Destined Girl. Unexpectedly, on the first day of adulthood, Qin Shuang received his coming-of-age gift, the reward system, the incredible ability to get rewards for anything he did. If there are three, six or nine levels of plug-ins, then Qin Shuang's reward system must be among the top ones. The reward system can not only give rich rewards to Qin Shuang's every move and event he encounters, but the most important thing is that he can also reward the system. That's right, the system creates the system. Qin Shuang, who has a reward system, really has invincibility written on her face. The subject matter of this book is good, but there are too many elements stacked up. The protagonists of mediocre flow, farming flow, grandpa flow, rebirth flow, talent flow, invincible flow, Gou Sheng flow, background flow, luck flow and other genres can be seen everywhere, as well as the protagonists who are a combination of these genres, and this is only the part that is currently shipped. In the background, there are also elements such as the main god space and the palace of reincarnation. To be honest, the writing is too messy. The core of this book is actually about an amazingly talented senior brother and an equally talented junior sister. The two have a sweet love affair, plus various interesting things, a period of training and the most important process of showing off.

Entering the palace, my father-in-law has a good trip. Bye-Bye

It should be given five stars, but why add "-"? I can't listen to it at all, and it's very awkward to watch.

I could still read the book, but the symbol you made made me feel uncomfortable and boring.

Listen, here comes one - I feel very unhappy.

The mediocrity flow, farming flow, grandpa flow, rebirth flow, talent flow, invincible flow, Gou Sage flow, including background flow, luck flow and other schools, can all find their corresponding Destiny Child.

It's not bad, it feels too confusing and I don't know who is the real protagonist.

What's going on, what's going on, what's going on

It's really awkward for me to listen to and read, okay, I'm really shutting down the Q, I can't listen to it intermittently.