Tokyo: My Wife is Nasu Mushroom

Most of the new book friends are from ahb. I have also read the criticisms and suggestions in the comment area. First, about why fz started. I believe that most people got into Xingyue because of the Fate series, and the sales of Fate games are much higher than Tsukihime. (The reason why only Tsukihime is called the three wonders of doujin is because when he started FSN, Xingyue had already established a company and had broken away from the concept of "doujin community") The original work of fsn is a game, and the animation form cannot be perfectly restored, let alone the novel, so I chose fz, whose original work is a novel, as a starting point. But those guys who think FZ is better than FSN and are dissatisfied that it was written by Mushroom should not read this book. I don't want to see this kind of rhythm in book reviews. I have always felt that readers who are ignorant and like dark and crippled characters are irrational. Besides, those who have played the original FSN and been tricked by dozens of bad endings will not think that FSN is just playing tricks. Second, why is there no Takeuchi? In fact, before I started the book, I thought about whether to join Takeuchi, but considering the strong character of the president in real life, I felt that writing it would not be so lovable (I am not very good at writing female imp characters). And if the real-life story is copied, Takeuchi will find out when Mushroom dies, and with the support of friendship, the weak image of Mushroom in my setting will not be established. Third, why mushrooms are ghosts From my superficial understanding of romance-themed works, I think adding light fantasy is the best solution for romance novels. For example, some cute gals, and even many romance light novels on the site also have light fantasy elements. If some readers feel that it is not realistic because of this, then I can only apologize, because the setting of ghosts was determined by me from the beginning. Fourth, there is too much writing on the original characters I went in the direction of multiple female protagonists from the beginning. Some readers thought that the book was not focused on Mushroom and abandoned the book. This is not the reason for the harem novel, but my problem. The character I created is not likable enough. Fifth, there are too many practical problems Actually, I don't quite understand this. Isn't it important that urban backgrounds be more realistic? Moreover, anyone who has played "Magic Night" and watched "Sky Realm" knows that reflecting reality in a fantasy background is one of the characteristics of mushrooms (the victims of the bubble economy will definitely reflect these). If there are any other shortcomings, you are welcome to correct me. This is my first novel, so there must be many shortcomings, and I am always learning. Many of the issues listed today are things I have not considered before. I hope everyone can speak freely. I welcome discussions on the shortcomings of this book.

There has been no update for several days. The author should not go to Xingyue to become a heroic spirit first😻

I disbanded the group by sliding my hand. I'll create another one during the day.