My Devil Girlfriend Always Wants to Eat Me

Emmmm, the author's early preparation is very good, but he digs too many holes. I really think the author is a pit-digger, and the author should stick to his own style. The routine of pretending to be tough, like the part where the protagonist is provoked when he starts school, is somewhat inconsistent with the previous style. I always feel that the article has a literary flavor, which feels good, and overall it is okay. Author, if you can't fill the hole you dug, it will be embarrassing. Highly recommended! ! ! ! !

I'm currently reading Chapter 90. I saw before that you wanted to promote stocks. I really don't recommend it. I know you prefer the character of Quinoa, but what about the audience? So far, ninety chapters. There isn't much interaction with Li Jin. Even if you have laid a lot of pits for yourself, you know how much Li Li has paid for the male protagonist. But we don't realize it. Now, for me, the person with stronger senses is Yi'er. In other words, even if the first female protagonist in this novel is Qiu, I still feel that the first female protagonist is Yi'er. I don't like Yi'er very much either. It's just that the presence of the character of Quinoa you set is too weak. It's just that you have been writing unilaterally about the male protagonist and how he is doing with Quintin, but the daily interactions really have no real sense. You write Japanese light novels. If you have read those works, you should know that a character like Li will most likely be replaced by Tianshuang. And you really want to open shares. What are you going to do if the character that the audience expects in the end is not Quinoa? Forcibly round? After all, Chinese readers are different from the people who live in the house. I hope you can handle your emotions more delicately. According to your comments and the current content, the first two lives were either tragedies or one-liners. This time, it has a perfect ending. You might as well try the line "You are all my wings". Besides, I don't own any of these characters. I quite like them all. If I have to say, I still like Lolilong and Deer Girl more.

It's really good, the text is also very good, and the writing is very cultural. It has a lot of powerful sentences and classics. It's a harem, not a stallion. The heroine's relationship is well written, and the plot is very smooth. But no one reads this good book, which makes me feel uncomfortable, brother. (This is the longest book review I've ever posted.)

I have no money to eat! It feels so uncomfortable~

To reiterate, third, if you don't like it, delete the book; if you don't like it, delete the book; if you don't like it, delete the book. No money was taken and no one was asked to see it.

I seem to have seen a real angel, not the kind in other novels who pity and help the world with a trace of mercy, and maintains a arrogant attitude all the time. What I see is an angel who does not want others to suffer. He is using his kindness to infect the world and change the world next to him.

Update it quickly This book feels like it will be a hit🔥

What's wrong with the author? I remember that I started reading this book as soon as it came out. Author, you also said you would keep writing, but why don't you update it now? Alas, no matter what, I will always support you just like before.

I don't know if I will ever encounter a book like this that makes me so excited again, but this one will definitely be on the top of my bookshelf forever.

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