What Should I Do If the Starting System Kills My Company?

Because the author probably wanted to write something different about this book, a few novice readers who have extremely poor resistance to stress and whose tolerance is infinitely close to zero shouted that it was poisonous. I have read the first chapter. The so-called poisonous point is that the author's system does not directly reward the protagonist after completing the task, but cancels the reward. Laughing, you can't see the protagonist being defeated, right? Then just go and no one will stop you. The library is so big and there are many cheating protagonists you like. Criticism is okay, just tell the author openly if it doesn't work, and then complain if it doesn't make sense. There has to be a process, and you have to be both responsible and upright, what? Are you addicted? He said that he had no way to confiscate the money. It was true that there was no three hundred taels of silver in this place. The first chapter is not a poisonous point. I won't comment on the subsequent chapters, because I feel tired after reading too much of this kind of subject matter. But the author does not need to pay special attention to comments. You can absorb opinions and don't change your original intention of writing. Uh-huh... I wish you good writing and writing about fire. Come on!

This is the first chapter, brothers, watch this for yourself

Maybe it's because I've been reading too many fantasy and urban fantasy novels lately, but when I saw this calm youth romance novel, I really liked it. I have only read more than sixty chapters, and the only thing that feels a little bit toxic is the misunderstanding in chapter 31. I suggest you revise it, or say in this chapter when the misunderstanding will be resolved, that's it.

Not to mention anything else, just the first one is enough to persuade you to quit. Isn't the system task that the efforts will be rewarded? If the system can give rewards or not at will, then what is the purpose of this system? Is it really good for the protagonist? Who do you think the protagonist is? Will you attack the protagonist in the future? This is already a setting issue. Just write it and read it yourself. Don't post it and it will be embarrassing.

The first few chapters are really not good. Your portraits make people not want to watch the movie again after reading it for the first time. Stop playing here.

It's so funny compared to the male protagonist, this system is also a dog, no, the author and the system are the same as the male protagonist.

What can I say? The third golden chapter is quite frustrating and the pace is fast. In addition, the character of the protagonist is really unlikable, which makes people feel very unhappy.

People who are not very toxic should not read it. The writing style is not enough to be classified as a novice novel, but the author wants to write a unique feeling of being young. Occasionally there will be some poisonous points created to advance the plot.

Good guy, no brains, no emotional intelligence. Only the crappiest rewards will be chosen. It's a bit abusive to persuade the owner to quit.

I feel that the development of the emotional line is too sudden, and some plots and events are too abrupt. Anyway, it is very strange and strange to watch. Yes, that's it.