I Can Hang up in Zongwu

The main reason why the protagonist released Ye Erniang was to let her find the lost child. After all, only she knew to whom the child was thrown. It was refreshing to kill Ye Erniang on the spot, but it would not help in retrieving the lost children. The most important thing was to retrieve the children Ye Erniang had thrown away casually. Moreover, Ye Erniang is very stubborn. After her own child was lost and she could not find it, she became a little bit crazy, which is why Ye Erniang became what she is today. But now that there is hope of retrieving her child, she will do her best to complete the task assigned by the protagonist, because this is the only clue she has in recent years to retrieve her child.

Martial arts turns into fantasy. People who write about martial arts always use my punch as many times as they want. Are you hungry? Shouldn't the main plot start from life experience? People with martial arts can even resurrect your martial arts because of others. Isn't it outrageous?

After reading more than 20 or 30 chapters, I haven't seen anything exciting from the author's writing. Since it's a mixed martial arts world, and the protagonist is a character who has read Jin Guhuang's novels or martial arts dramas in his previous life, you don't have the slightest bit of caution. Also, although the protagonist was in his twenties in his previous life, he can't be a stupid or naive talent! I have read a lot of martial arts novels, and there are several characters in them who are good in the true sense. What you write, the author, is about being reborn in ancient times. Look at the thoughts of ancient people from the perspective of modern people. Modern peace and the lack of war are the strong support of the country. In ancient times, the mixed martial arts world where the protagonist was reborn was a time when many countries invaded each other, so the ideas were different. Moreover, in ancient times, imperial power was supreme. There were some officials and eunuchs in the palace who had simple ideas.

It feels like the protagonist has no purpose. To put it simply, it is boring and mediocre. It makes people unable to feel the progress of the protagonist.

(If there are any omissions, please point them out and they will be added in the next update) Western Regions Overlord Rakshasa Sect: Leader Jade Rakshasa (celestial being), Elder Great Joy Bodhisattva, Suihan Three Friends, Ghost Sage (dead), Liehuo Ancestor (dead), Ding Chunqiu (dead) Hostile forces: Xiaoyao Sect: Xiaoyaozi (Heavenly Man), disciple Tianshan Tonglao, Wuyazi (deceased), Li Qiushui White Camel Villa (Destroyed): Ouyang Feng (Dead), Ouyang Ke (Escaped) Mingjiao: Yang Xiao's branch Southwest Overlord of the Snowy Mountains: Living Buddha Eight Masters (celestial being), eminent monk Jiumozhi (no longer martial arts) Great Zhou and Song Dynasties: Song Que, Song Lu, Song Zhi Da Zhou Fan: Dali Kingdom: Yideng, Tianlong Temple, etc. Jianghu forces: Yihua Palace: Yaoyue, Lianxing, Jiang Biehe, Wuliang Sect, Duan Yanqing (deceased and retired), Ye Erniang (dead), Yue Laosan (dead), Yun Zhonghe (dead) The Imperial Court of the Great Zhou Dynasty: Dongchang Cao Zhengchun and Cao Shaoqin (deceased), Xichang Yuhuatian, iron courage god Hou Zhuwuwu, Liumen Guo Jing, Huang Rong, Jin Jiuling, Minister of War Pei Ju (Shi Zhixuan, Heavenly Man Falls), cabinet scholar Huang Shang (missing) Jianghu forces: Wudang Sect: Zhang Sanfeng (celestial being), Mu Daoren (suspected to be a heavenly being), Wudang Seven Heroes (Zhang Cuishan died), Shi Yan (branch leader) Shaolin Temple: Abbot Dabei Zen Master, the head of Bodhidharma Monastery Xuanci (deceased), emptiness, emptiness, and emptiness hearing, the sweeping monk (celestial being), Xiao Yuanshan (conversion), Murong Bo (conversion) Jing Nian Zen Monastery: Ling Kong, the Four Vajras, and the Four Holy Monks Beggar Clan: Hong Qigong (former gang leader), Qiao Feng (current gang leader), Quan Guanqing, Snake King Quanzhen Sect: Wang Chongyang (deceased), Zhou Botong (heavenly man, wandering around the world), Quanzhen Seven Sons Ancient Tomb Sect: Lin Chaoying (deceased), Maid (deceased), Xiao Longnu, Yang Guo special forces Valley of the Wicked: Top Ten Wicked Guys, Yan Nantian (disabled), Xiao Yu'er Murong Villa: Murong Fu Sanren Ning Daoqi (Heavenly Man) Experts who have been mentioned but have not appeared or have retired: Sun En (broken), Yan Fei (broken), Chuanying (broken), Ying Yuan (broken), Xiang Yutian (broken), Meng Chixing (Heaven is dead), Mu Qingliu (Heaven is dead), Li Gong (Heaven is dead) Pang Ban (celestial being), Bi Xuan (celestial being), Fu Cailin (celestial being), Lang Fanyun (celestial being) Ye Gucheng (attacking heavenly beings), Ximen Chuixue, Dongfang Sheng of the Sun and Moon Demon Sect, Zhu Yuyan of the Yinkui Sect

Reading the book still makes me feel happy, but the eunuch is really damned!

Original text: (However, when Huang Lin easily pointed out the misunderstanding of the opponent's Wudang Changquan, Song Qingshu's enthusiasm for Huang Lin increased a hundred times.) Without showing talent, there are fewer opportunities, which slows down the growth rate. The effect of Gou is that it can grow slowly and safely. But how can you still be a good teacher? And he still showed his talent in front of the very jealous Song Qingshu. Why don't you show your talent in front of Zhang Sanfeng? As a result, I suffered Gou's disadvantages and grew slowly, and did not enjoy Gou's benefits and grow safely.

If someone who practices other people's martial arts can be resurrected by the dead in the realm of heaven and man, then who dares to practice other people's martial arts? This is even more awesome than cultivating immortals. As long as you practice other people's martial arts, you run the risk of being taken away. And it's not like cultivating immortals, but you can seize others' bodies after they die. You also learn risky martial arts. Unless you create it yourself, there are risks in learning anything else. After all, who knows who created the martial arts you learned and whether the person died? What if someone dies and comes back to life in your body?

The author should sort out the outline! It feels like the protagonist is a headless fly, moving a hammer here and there, doing things here and there inexplicably. He knows the plot at one moment and doesn't know the plot at the next. The mixed martial arts plot is even more confusing, and it makes people forcibly lose their intelligence.

After reading three chapters, I don't know whether the author is too confident or wants to play with some different fireworks. Just come out with the system and use it as a cheat. There are so many odds and ends. Even if you want to add restrictions to it, you can use the novice gift pack to get through the beginning and retain readers. Look at the setting you wrote, it is very annoying.