
The Rise of King Chu of the Three Kingdoms
by Heart More Delicate Than Heaven
About This Novel
[The new book Three Kingdoms: Laozi is the Emperor has been released! ]At the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, the world was in chaos. The feudal lords are separatist, and war is everywhere. In order to survive, Xu Tian was born in a desperate situation. Crisis everywhere inspires fighting spirit. So he looked to Jingzhou to develop people's livelihood. Recruit heroes and reform the army. Develop your power! Conquering cities and territories, granting lordships to Jin kings to conquer the world, everything starts from here...
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Long suite building
Recently, I have seen many book friends suggesting building a secondary building, so let's build one. I hope everyone can actively tell the characters in the Three Kingdoms in their hearts. I will read each one carefully and add it to this book. Thank you.
Let me analyze that the protagonist's resourcefulness is good, but there are still some aspects that are not considered comprehensively.
Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with it, and the protagonist's mind is adequate. But in my opinion, although the protagonist's mind is adequate, it is a bit too ill-considered. Although the protagonist can guess the enemy's thoughts, such as the scheming of the man named Lu, you ignore the danger. It's good to take risks with your own body, but you also have to think about yourself. You should at least let them accompany you. It can be seen that the author is careful, but you have neglected the analysis of the opponent. After all, you are also a smart person. What if the enemy suddenly realizes that he has no way to survive and kills you directly. This is a chess piece that you did not expect. Secondly, even if they arrive safely, what should you do if there is any danger to your life? Well, what if your people don't pay much attention to it? Even if someone comes out later and ruins the plan with you, what if he becomes angry and angry? I think if the protagonist is a smart person, I don't think he has even thought of this. Maybe the author feels that he is unlikely to encounter danger, but who can guess accurately about people's hearts? I hope the author doesn't mind.
Feeling a bit depressed
It was really frustrating to see the fiancée die and the protagonist be insulted. It felt like the protagonist was really incompetent, but this is the reality of history, it is so cruel, and it is like having no power in the hands. This is also a change for the protagonist. Hope to come on! At least I can stop being the fish on the chopping board.
Let me analyze it
Overall it's pretty good, but the theme of the Three Kingdoms isn't quite suitable for you! You can try to ignore this kind of historical theme, because historical themes will be criticized no matter how you write them. First, assist Cao Cao to unify the north as long as you don't go directly to Sun Quan or win the Battle of Chibi. There is no passion. If you assist Liu Bei, Zhuge Liang, the civil servant, and Guan Yu, the military minister, can be stronger than them. It is unrealistic. Where else can he go to fight after assisting Sun Quan and winning the Battle of Red Cliff? The navy of Wu State is powerful, so beat Liu Bei? Liu Bei wants to launch a guerrilla war. There are so many mountains and it is not easy to fight. What should we do about military supplies? If you have no horse to defeat Cao Cao, how can you use your legs to chase him? Generally speaking, everyone has his or her own version of the Three Kingdoms, and each of us will have regrets about history. For example, would Huo Qubing be able to reach the Arctic Ocean if he survived? Is there still a prosperous age when the Sui Dynasty never destroyed the Tang Dynasty? (Don't troll if you don't like it. This is for both the author and the trolls.) I hope the author can write his own version of the Three Kingdoms. After all, Luo Guanzhong's Romance of the Three Kingdoms is not all history, but I also hope the author can respect history. In another novel, the author actually said that Sun Ce had no sons. When Sun Quan proclaimed the emperor, he didn't make Sun Ce the emperor because he had a son, so he made him the king. You wrote well and I hope you don't make such ignorant mistakes.
This is the first book review I wrote because I was so weak after reading it.
Although the writing style of this book is not excellent, and it seems that there are many tangled places, the story has always touched my heart from the beginning, and it is also very engaging. However, after reading Chapter 39, I have no desire to continue reading. First of all, the self-humiliating behavior of the protagonist personally feels childish, but it can also be seen from it. It shows the depth of the protagonist's love, and then because he loves Wang Ling deeply, he does nothing about Wang Xiang's behavior of humiliating his wife's body. It feels like the protagonist's character has collapsed. Although it is foreshadowing the following and will come back with revenge later, it still makes people feel a knot in their hearts. Furthermore, Wang Ling has already worshiped the prime minister, how can his character be so low? , Although the novel does not need to be serious, but I feel really uncomfortable. Moreover, the protagonist has just made great contributions to Cao Cao, but Cao Cao has ignored his fiancée. Wouldn't the protagonist feel chilled? As a protagonist who has traveled through time in the modern era, he should be very aware of Cao Cao's dirty tricks. For now, it seems that the protagonist will always assist Cao Cao. It is really frustrating to watch like this, and he has the urge to kill. The above are purely personal thoughts.
Emotional writing is not well written, it's like a piece of shit
Emotions don't necessarily need to be abused to be profound. Writing it this way feels awkward, as if a love scene is forcibly added. Even if you are being abused, you still have to write smoothly. The blunt addition seems to be superfluous.
I'm so disgusted by the fact that the heroine, Wen Zhen, is so mean to her just because we've only known each other for a few days.
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There are not many novels following Boss Cao, so I plan to keep following them. The protagonist is a modern person who doesn't understand politics and needs to grow up, but don't take the dark side. The protagonist can be strong but don't become a tyrant.
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I have read a lot of books about assisting Liu Bei or establishing himself as king. It is still rare to assist Cao Cao. I still like this very much. It is rare...
Encourage points.
First, I personally don't like Cao Cao. Second, the protagonist receives a lot of care from Zhang Quan. It can be said that the life-saving grace is not exaggerated. Because when the protagonist is caught, Zhang Quan can kill him with just one sentence. Third, the protagonist has lived two lives and is immature. Because when he goes to see Cao Cao, he will definitely be suspected by Zhang Quan, but he himself is enjoying Zhang Quan's favor without knowing it, because his wife is the cousin of Zhang Quan's wife. Zhang Quan had some dissatisfaction with Cao Cao. The protagonist without Golden Finger comes into contact with Cao Cao prematurely.
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Official(268)Scraped 13d ago
Long suite building
Recently, I have seen many book friends suggesting building a secondary building, so let's build one. I hope everyone can actively tell the characters in the Three Kingdoms in their hearts. I will read each one carefully and add it to this book. Thank you.
Let me analyze that the protagonist's resourcefulness is good, but there are still some aspects that are not considered comprehensively.
Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with it, and the protagonist's mind is adequate. But in my opinion, although the protagonist's mind is adequate, it is a bit too ill-considered. Although the protagonist can guess the enemy's thoughts, such as the scheming of the man named Lu, you ignore the danger. It's good to take risks with your own body, but you also have to think about yourself. You should at least let them accompany you. It can be seen that the author is careful, but you have neglected the analysis of the opponent. After all, you are also a smart person. What if the enemy suddenly realizes that he has no way to survive and kills you directly. This is a chess piece that you did not expect. Secondly, even if they arrive safely, what should you do if there is any danger to your life? Well, what if your people don't pay much attention to it? Even if someone comes out later and ruins the plan with you, what if he becomes angry and angry? I think if the protagonist is a smart person, I don't think he has even thought of this. Maybe the author feels that he is unlikely to encounter danger, but who can guess accurately about people's hearts? I hope the author doesn't mind.
Feeling a bit depressed
It was really frustrating to see the fiancée die and the protagonist be insulted. It felt like the protagonist was really incompetent, but this is the reality of history, it is so cruel, and it is like having no power in the hands. This is also a change for the protagonist. Hope to come on! At least I can stop being the fish on the chopping board.
Let me analyze it
Overall it's pretty good, but the theme of the Three Kingdoms isn't quite suitable for you! You can try to ignore this kind of historical theme, because historical themes will be criticized no matter how you write them. First, assist Cao Cao to unify the north as long as you don't go directly to Sun Quan or win the Battle of Chibi. There is no passion. If you assist Liu Bei, Zhuge Liang, the civil servant, and Guan Yu, the military minister, can be stronger than them. It is unrealistic. Where else can he go to fight after assisting Sun Quan and winning the Battle of Red Cliff? The navy of Wu State is powerful, so beat Liu Bei? Liu Bei wants to launch a guerrilla war. There are so many mountains and it is not easy to fight. What should we do about military supplies? If you have no horse to defeat Cao Cao, how can you use your legs to chase him? Generally speaking, everyone has his or her own version of the Three Kingdoms, and each of us will have regrets about history. For example, would Huo Qubing be able to reach the Arctic Ocean if he survived? Is there still a prosperous age when the Sui Dynasty never destroyed the Tang Dynasty? (Don't troll if you don't like it. This is for both the author and the trolls.) I hope the author can write his own version of the Three Kingdoms. After all, Luo Guanzhong's Romance of the Three Kingdoms is not all history, but I also hope the author can respect history. In another novel, the author actually said that Sun Ce had no sons. When Sun Quan proclaimed the emperor, he didn't make Sun Ce the emperor because he had a son, so he made him the king. You wrote well and I hope you don't make such ignorant mistakes.
This is the first book review I wrote because I was so weak after reading it.
Although the writing style of this book is not excellent, and it seems that there are many tangled places, the story has always touched my heart from the beginning, and it is also very engaging. However, after reading Chapter 39, I have no desire to continue reading. First of all, the self-humiliating behavior of the protagonist personally feels childish, but it can also be seen from it. It shows the depth of the protagonist's love, and then because he loves Wang Ling deeply, he does nothing about Wang Xiang's behavior of humiliating his wife's body. It feels like the protagonist's character has collapsed. Although it is foreshadowing the following and will come back with revenge later, it still makes people feel a knot in their hearts. Furthermore, Wang Ling has already worshiped the prime minister, how can his character be so low? , Although the novel does not need to be serious, but I feel really uncomfortable. Moreover, the protagonist has just made great contributions to Cao Cao, but Cao Cao has ignored his fiancée. Wouldn't the protagonist feel chilled? As a protagonist who has traveled through time in the modern era, he should be very aware of Cao Cao's dirty tricks. For now, it seems that the protagonist will always assist Cao Cao. It is really frustrating to watch like this, and he has the urge to kill. The above are purely personal thoughts.
Emotional writing is not well written, it's like a piece of shit
Emotions don't necessarily need to be abused to be profound. Writing it this way feels awkward, as if a love scene is forcibly added. Even if you are being abused, you still have to write smoothly. The blunt addition seems to be superfluous.
I'm so disgusted by the fact that the heroine, Wen Zhen, is so mean to her just because we've only known each other for a few days.
,,,,,,,,,,,
There are not many novels following Boss Cao, so I plan to keep following them. The protagonist is a modern person who doesn't understand politics and needs to grow up, but don't take the dark side. The protagonist can be strong but don't become a tyrant.
...
I have read a lot of books about assisting Liu Bei or establishing himself as king. It is still rare to assist Cao Cao. I still like this very much. It is rare...
Encourage points.
First, I personally don't like Cao Cao. Second, the protagonist receives a lot of care from Zhang Quan. It can be said that the life-saving grace is not exaggerated. Because when the protagonist is caught, Zhang Quan can kill him with just one sentence. Third, the protagonist has lived two lives and is immature. Because when he goes to see Cao Cao, he will definitely be suspected by Zhang Quan, but he himself is enjoying Zhang Quan's favor without knowing it, because his wife is the cousin of Zhang Quan's wife. Zhang Quan had some dissatisfaction with Cao Cao. The protagonist without Golden Finger comes into contact with Cao Cao prematurely.









