Portable Space for Farming
About This Novel
Please support the new book "I Can Log In to the Game"! ... An earthquake made Lin Qian travel through time and become a little girl from a poor mountain village in ancient times! Fortunately, she has a portable space, and she will live a carefree life in this life!
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Official(22)Scraped 19d ago
The writing is very ordinary
I have read several books written by the author. The writing style is okay, but the storyline is not very good and makes people uncomfortable to read. If the character of the protagonist is not good enough, is he so afraid of death after traveling through time? You are still so selfish, just because you are afraid that others will discover the space. Your protagonist can also put some space water for his family to drink. After all, it is to strengthen the body, detoxify and maintain health. The writing of the story is terrible. So many things are written before the protagonist has grown up, and then all kinds of attacks are made on the protagonist. This kind of plot is very poisonous. Hope the author improves.
The biggest flaw of this book is that most people have no names.
There are too many when the heroine was a child, and the male protagonist rarely appeared when the heroine was a child -_-||
In short, it's not good
boiled water
As plain as boiled water, too wordy, not decisive, looking forward and backward in doing things, it is a pity that the benefits of traveling through knowledge + space are
said
"Lin Qian said", "Lin Qian's mother said", "Lin Qian's grandma said", "several people said"... I felt a little dazed, and kept listening to what this person said and that person said...
It's a bit long-winded and I have to explain it over and over again.
If the heroine is afraid of exposing her space, she doesn't have to explain everything over and over again.
How did you get such a high score?
Sometimes it's Lin Qian, and sometimes it's Lin Zhi. The author doesn't even know the protagonist's name.
It's not how you make up the word count! !
It's so long-winded that I can't stand it anymore.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(22)Scraped 19d ago
The writing is very ordinary
I have read several books written by the author. The writing style is okay, but the storyline is not very good and makes people uncomfortable to read. If the character of the protagonist is not good enough, is he so afraid of death after traveling through time? You are still so selfish, just because you are afraid that others will discover the space. Your protagonist can also put some space water for his family to drink. After all, it is to strengthen the body, detoxify and maintain health. The writing of the story is terrible. So many things are written before the protagonist has grown up, and then all kinds of attacks are made on the protagonist. This kind of plot is very poisonous. Hope the author improves.
The biggest flaw of this book is that most people have no names.
There are too many when the heroine was a child, and the male protagonist rarely appeared when the heroine was a child -_-||
In short, it's not good
boiled water
As plain as boiled water, too wordy, not decisive, looking forward and backward in doing things, it is a pity that the benefits of traveling through knowledge + space are
said
"Lin Qian said", "Lin Qian's mother said", "Lin Qian's grandma said", "several people said"... I felt a little dazed, and kept listening to what this person said and that person said...
It's a bit long-winded and I have to explain it over and over again.
If the heroine is afraid of exposing her space, she doesn't have to explain everything over and over again.
How did you get such a high score?
Sometimes it's Lin Qian, and sometimes it's Lin Zhi. The author doesn't even know the protagonist's name.
It's not how you make up the word count! !
It's so long-winded that I can't stand it anymore.
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