
Become a Treasure in Your Husband's Palm
by Twin Fruit
About This Novel
The long-cherished wish of our ancestor Taibai, which he could not fulfill throughout his life, must be fulfilled by someone, and someone will surely go down in history! The treacherous Yingtian Mansion of Bo Yun hides many shady thoughts, or perhaps Sima Zhao's heart. Unravel the mysteries, clear away the layers of fog, and reveal the truth, but you can't see clearly the misty people's hearts. Who will distinguish between good and evil, who will bear the good causes, and who will bear the bad consequences? Small Theater "My name is Qian Shuangshuang, Shuang is my husband... Odd is Shuang's Shuang." Qian Shuangshuang secretly breathed a sigh of relief, almost saying that they returned the house as husband and wife. "What about you, what's your name?" He didn't say anything, he just spread out the rice paper and wrote two straight big characters vigorously. "Nie..." " (Sounds like tree), a person should have his roots firmly established, be down-to-earth, and be strict with himself." "Oh, Nie Zhu... No, slip of the tongue!" Qian Shuang covered his mouth tightly, but it was too late.
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Official(2)Scraped 1mo ago
👍👍👍👍
The author's writing style is really good. Qian Shuangshuang is so cute. A pure and innocent girl. 👍👍👍Like
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It is suggested that the author can make the plot of the story complex, thrilling, and frightening if you think about it carefully. Proposal: For example, those cases feel that they are relatively important and should connect the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. I think those cases can also be connected with each other and ultimately lead to the same place, organization, or person. Then, I think we can deepen the description of the heroine before she passes through, so that readers can better understand the character and psychology of the heroine, and better interpret the girl Qian Shuangshuang. Regarding the male protagonist, the author writes well. I think the male protagonist is very straight, but I like him. He is serious when he should be serious, rigorous and upright! Regarding the two people, it is recommended that the relationship lasts for a long time, and you can have some affection, but it is recommended not to develop the relationship too quickly. The above are just my own suggestions and suggestions, no offense intended. Note: I didn't check it after I finished writing.
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Official(2)Scraped 1mo ago
👍👍👍👍
The author's writing style is really good. Qian Shuangshuang is so cute. A pure and innocent girl. 👍👍👍Like
suggestion
It is suggested that the author can make the plot of the story complex, thrilling, and frightening if you think about it carefully. Proposal: For example, those cases feel that they are relatively important and should connect the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. I think those cases can also be connected with each other and ultimately lead to the same place, organization, or person. Then, I think we can deepen the description of the heroine before she passes through, so that readers can better understand the character and psychology of the heroine, and better interpret the girl Qian Shuangshuang. Regarding the male protagonist, the author writes well. I think the male protagonist is very straight, but I like him. He is serious when he should be serious, rigorous and upright! Regarding the two people, it is recommended that the relationship lasts for a long time, and you can have some affection, but it is recommended not to develop the relationship too quickly. The above are just my own suggestions and suggestions, no offense intended. Note: I didn't check it after I finished writing.









