Douluo: Leading the Heroic Spirit to Conquer the Peerless Tang Sect

I don't understand what's wrong with normal writing. I have to do something weird to attract people, and I don't want to make a girly protagonist. It's too dramatic.

Bad review of sissy. Bad review of sissy. Bad review of sissy.

If you don't follow the plot, the series will die. If you don't join Shrek or Sun and Moon, you won't be able to write a series.

The writing is very good, the introduction of beasts in the later stage is also very thoughtful, and the emotional line of the heroine is also very deep. Overall, it is a very good fanfic. It's a pity that it is too snake-tailed. I complimented you on the heroine's emotional connection earlier, but then you ended up doing this. Not only did you force the semi-invisible auspicious beast to get married in the end, but the other heroines also had no emotional catharsis at all when their relationships were finally established, and they jumped directly to the period after giving birth. Forget it, it only described the perspective of the children throughout the whole process, only mentioned the male protagonist at the end, and never thought of describing the female protagonist's situation. The state of the earth mentioned before has not been recycled either. It's a pity. It's the same sentence. The previous chapters were well written, but the last two chapters were really too clumsy.

Outrageous. I read the negative reviews about effeminate. Isn't the introduction not written? If you don't like reading it, don't read it. It's not funny to get negative reviews after less than an hour of reading time. Except for the ending, this book is a bit sloppy and the emotional ending is not written. The rest is very good. It's almost the first to second echelon in fan fiction. It would be great if there were extra chapters with emotional lines.

Qian Renxue changed the continent, Huo Yuhao changed the cultivation system, Tang Wulin was pulled out of Tang San by the Shura God because he was simply occupying the manhole and did not shit, the Shura God strengthened Qiyun Qianren in the Wuhun Palace, and Xue's Qi was transferred to Tang San. I asked the author, will the Qiyun be returned to Qian Renxue? Why is there a world without Tang San? Bibi Dong is still the villain. He wants to kill Qian Renxue at the beginning. He is a scheduled villain. In Tang San Shura God, he married the Qi of Qi Wuhun Palace and Qian Renxue to Tang San. The hybrid Douluo Dragon God only brought the blame on himself to expand the Douluo universe. Then he went crazy, and then the nine dragon kings and Long Zi joined forces with the five god kings to awaken, and then the nine dragon kings paid the price, and God Shura was cut into two halves. The remaining souls were exiled to other stars, waiting for Douluo Four, Douluo Five Lan Xuanyu to succeed, vomit, he is already dead.

I don't know what the Command Seal is. I can't understand it and feel uncomfortable.

It's okay, I don't know why so many people are criticizing you in the comment area

Come on, author, they are all heroic spirits that I like. Can you arrange some heroic spirits of Qiu rank? After all, all members of the second memorial are offline

Not bad! After looking for a long time, I finally found something I can watch