Rebirth of the Proud Immortal Concubine

In today's world where routine writing is dominated by novices, it's great to have such a high-quality and high-level writing!

I like the male protagonist and the female protagonist! ! !

The author's starting point in the opening chapter is really good. At least it aroused my interest. I couldn't stop reading it in one breath.

The leader of the main station, Yongzi, is here!

I really like this book, please update it soon! ! !

With all due respect, I think the setting of the male protagonist is too cowardly. Although he rises up after more than 110 chapters, the rise is also helped by the female protagonist, and I feel that it is basically the female protagonist who is helping him (I don't know if it is my illusion...), So I can't feel the aura of the male protagonist. Because... The male protagonist's name is too much like a passerby, and I didn't know Qin Xiaoyu was a boy until I read more than 40 chapters. . . (I, I, I said my personal opinion, don't hit me!!) I just want to suggest that you can change the background and personality of the male protagonist, or secretly change a male protagonist before the story line of the male and female protagonists has begun (Don't be angry, because I just said this because I saw that the male protagonist really has no enthusiasm...) But in the end, I still want to brag ~ It is very well written, and the image of the female protagonist is very successful! And the logic is very clear, I think it's great. In short, I hope my opinion will be adopted! (It's my first time to post such a long book review, so I'm so nervous...)

I have been following the article silently for several days, but as I don't like to leave comments, I mustered up the courage to leave a comment to show that I have been here.

,, I feel like the heroine is too flamboyant, and the identity of the heroine should be hidden, and the heroine is too talkative, and the characters in it all start fighting while talking, and I feel like they are irrational people.

I have always preferred novels about strong women, and Sakura's novel has a very good beginning. Unlike many novels where the heroine is weak and becomes stronger later on, so the beginning attracted me and made me want to read more. Maybe it is because I have read too many novels and my taste is picky, so I only have this novel on my bookshelf now. I look forward to a big update in the end! Come on! 😽😽😽

Qin Xiaoyu is such a scumbag, and why doesn't the author give it for free? My inner world collapsed