Zhang Butcher's Chronicle of the Qing Dynasty

I feel that a lot of the content written is not detailed. Isn't it doubtful that the heroine has changed so much? You can directly save your life by living in someone else's home without hiding your strength? It feels a bit mindless! Always consider whether someone who is not a relative will take advantage of her because of her differences! Everything is really unreasonable at such a young age! People in modern times are not omnipotent. They can do everything very easily, and they don't need any money. The heroine's family is very poor! I don't like this kind of heroine! I don't know what direction to take in the later stage. Is it a house fight?

After reading about ten chapters, it can be seen that the author is very serious, such as word choice and so on. In order to adapt to the era, he has made a lot of preparations for the article. The sense of era is very good, the description is clear, and the writing is crisp, which deserves recognition. But sometimes it's hard to say whether the writing is a shortcoming or not. As for me, I feel that the author writes too quickly, with too many descriptions and few dialogues, and the plot goes by without even unfolding. He has done several things that can make money. In other articles, it may be interspersed with other plots for half a book. You can finish it in ten or so chapters. There is no sense of narration. You can read what the master says The rhythm of the writing (personal feeling, I don't rule out that some people like this fast writing style) is too fast and makes people feel that the characters are not full enough, and some people are not standing up. I also noticed that your "master" (not grandpa) has never been named. He has appeared many times and is not a soy sauce or cannon fodder. He should have a name, not a description of an old man. It looks a little awkward. The heroine is eight years old and can do so many things, even perform surgeries, and has no scruples at all. Her actions are a bit too bold, and the explanations given by her grandfather and master later are a bit... Not too careless. This setting is not easy to write. Your book is not like other crazy novels. Your writing style should be low-key, bide your time, and take your time, instead of standing in front of people all at once, which is slightly unreasonable. I don't know what will happen next, so I'll just say this first, and please forgive me if I'm wrong. Another point is that each chapter only has a serial number and no explanatory subtitle. This is a matter of opinion and not necessary. I just personally feel that having a general chapter is more convenient for people to read. Writing is not easy, and few people can do it overnight. The author's ability to persevere is the greatest advantage. He will be a master at completing the book, come on💪

Big, come on＾0＾~ Mmmah

Everyone likes the Fourth Master and the Fourteenth Master. I like the Ninth Master and the Sixteenth Master. Can you please make the Ninth Master or the Sixteenth Master the male protagonist?

When will it be updated? ? ? ?