The Rebirth of the Leftover Girl

It's just a bit verbose. Some words and phrases are actually not needed at all. After adding them, it becomes a bit verbose. It feels like the author is trying to make up the word count.

I don't like the heroine. The heroine is not a real child. She is also written in such an innocent way. She doesn't know how to increase her own force value even if she has the space. It's really stupid not to think that she has the strength to protect herself.

Is there too much (here, there) in the article? Basically every sentence is included, but in fact many of them are not needed. I listen to the book by voice, which sounds awkward.

Sorry, I didn't understand it. The article has no main line, it's a bit like a running account, and the description of the protagonist is not full.

Aren't grandpa's sons and granddaughters called aunties or uncles? Why are they called uncles?

Shouldn't Father Chen's brother be called uncle or second uncle? Why are you the eldest uncle and the second uncle?

I read more than forty chapters, all of which were "here they are" and "he is here". I felt dizzy while reading, as if I was just trying to make up the numbers. It's about the rise of a wealthy family, and nothing would happen without the heroine.

Xinxin's father is the son-in-law?

Grandpa Chen has three sons. Xinxin's father is the youngest. Shouldn't the eldest and second son Xinxin be called uncle and second uncle? He is my uncle. Have you figured out the relationship? It looks uncomfortable🤗

I said that after reading the entire book, I didn't know what the theme was and what the main line was. . .