Big Star Legend

How can I put it, the plot is too far-fetched and unrealistic (personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it) Since we are writing about the entertainment industry, why not go straight to the topic? Why do we have to start with ordinary people? It always feels weird to write like this (maybe it's a matter of writing style) You can set the protagonist to be a second-generation celebrity, or someone in an art school. (Of course, some people will say that this is too vulgar, and that it is pretentious and embarrassing.) Indeed, in reality, there are celebrities who graduated from a certain university and crossed over. But most of them are still art school students with good foundation. You do not want to be a capital tycoon. You do not feel the need to interact with too many irrelevant people. For example, this choir thing is too ridiculous (of course, it may be because the previous story of the head teacher and some chat methods are too literary, which makes me feel that the subsequent plot is vulgar and cliched.) Under normal circumstances, teachers cannot be like this. (When you make up a story, it's not nonsense. It should be based on reality and higher than reality. A little bit of nonsense is acceptable, but when you think the story is too outrageous, can you still read it?)

Is someone else wearing the vest? It doesn't look like it was written by one person at all.

I didn't expect this to be the first comment on this book. The author's writing is quite good. I am a person who is not good at words and I don't know what to say. I hope that the book written by the author will be read by more people!

I think you should rewrite the previous book. That book is good. What is this book about?

The name is the same as mine. What a coincidence. Good writing. Come on.

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