I May Become the Favorite of the Police Station When I Work in Society

Those who don't like Our Lady, are tired of the slow pace, and feel aggrieved, you can leave. Uncomfortable points: 1. Character of the heroine: She is both a virgin and a virgin, but she is a weakling. Her sister-in-law occupies her room, which is not a fair move by her parents. Her brother is a softhearted person (he feels sorry but he is sincere and takes advantage of her). The heroine became rich and swollen because she joined the series (that's how it made me feel). She was very generous (showing off her vanity) and bought a house, a car and a job for her brother, sister-in-law, and parents (not that you can't be good to your family. To compare your feelings, you have to see how others treat you, right? It's not excessive at all. She cried to death when she said she had no family, but she didn't feel angry or resentful at all later. I picked it up and bought it, but if the author makes a twist and his family realizes he was wrong, they sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk to slowly ease the relationship), he signs a confidentiality agreement and says he doesn't like lying (isn't it funny? If you don't lie, just tell it. With this kind of temper, what secrets of the country will be known in a minute?) If the ending is a dream The family was instantly shaken back to their original shape 2. Maybe you should show off the effects of being given superpowers? When I clicked on the introduction, I thought it was a cool novel or a growth novel. After reading nearly two hundred chapters, the character has almost not changed, and the role is only that of the prophet? Maybe writing about some cases is to save regrets? But like some anti-drug cases or cases with grandiose and eye-catching intentions, they are all written in one stroke, like a canary. If she is in danger, she will be a hindrance. If you are not sure about the rhythm, I suggest you read more stories about the growth of the heroine.

I like reading it. I only have 20 yuan left for living expenses and more than 1,000 yuan in debt. I shouldn't have spent money, so I spent 9.9 Yuan to become a member just to continue reading this novel. The author said that his writing is poor, but I didn't see that the author's writing is bad. On the contrary, I felt very happy when I read it! If I am dissatisfied, my biggest dissatisfaction would be - why is this book not finished? If I finish the book, I can keep reading it and enjoy it! I just ask the author to update quickly and update more. The sooner the better, the more updates the better. Great author, come on! Don't let me down!

I was attracted to it at first by videos that tell stories about novels. After watching it, I thought it was pretty good, so I kept up with it. The heroine is a relatively ordinary and down-to-earth character, a bit useless but also has advantages. There are two male characters in the front who are okay, a little bit fragrant, and you can buy shares. I should praise the good writing in the early stage, but I should also criticize the bad writing. The Hemu Village section was so boring and tasteless. I can understand that the author wanted to write a section where the heroine begins to slowly transform and become braver and more proactive. But author, please take a closer look at what you actually wrote. It's just a bunch of words sitting there. What contribution did the heroine make throughout the whole process? What changes as the story progresses? Anyway, I didn't see much of it, but I saw the heroine shaking hands and creating a spoiler. The whole process was ostrich, using mobile phones and eating snacks to divert attention, and the battle ended in a hurry. I feel that deleting it will not affect your subsequent development. There are even some embarrassing patriotic education scenes. Moreover, during the Chinese New Year, I almost abandoned the entire novel. Fortunately, this section is relatively short and can be skipped quickly. Author, please think more carefully about the plot arrangement, so that the details of the story can be richer and more delicate. If the loser protagonist is always the background in scenes like "big battle", then why should she be the protagonist?

This book is very beautiful. If only the author could update 100 chapters a day, it would blind my titanium alloy dog ​​eyes. [Emot=default,07/]

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The plot is okay, but I really can't stand the plot about my brother. At first, the brother and sister-in-law ostracized the heroine, and then the brother gambled online and the heroine helped pay back the money. I thought there would be no role for the brother in the future. But it turned out that the brother had no job. My parents have told me that the brother-in-law and sister-in-law went to Haishi and often contacted the heroine. If the heroine's job is to be exposed, the sister-in-law will definitely spread the news to her parents' family, and then the heroine will ask her brother to be the store manager in her own store. I am speechless😓 No ordinary person would go so far. Anyway, as an ordinary person, it is impossible for me to understand and accept it. It is too frustrating to watch.

The hostess is probably not the Holy Mother. , I really can't stand the fact that the heroine keeps crying when she sees someone getting hurt... And there's also something wrong with the setting. People with super powers cannot be exposed to ordinary people. But the abilities of superpowers are so powerful. The police department should be able to get a free ride. When the heroine calls the police, it depends on whether it is a local police call. Why doesn't she use this identity? I only add exclamation points to express the heroine's anger and I am also drunk. I think it's too much to give two stars... And many real-life cases are very short. There are more case reports than this.

Sorry, I got this from a tweet on Douyin. I have opened a membership for this novel, and I just want to comment because I don't want my time to read the novel and the money I spent to add my membership to be wasted. Purely personal opinion, you can comment if it offends anyone 1 The copywriting of this work did not clearly state who was the male protagonist, so at first the fight was between Yang Lin and the female protagonist. After knowing that Yang Lin was not the male protagonist, I recalled the various descriptions in the article and found that they were indeed not a good match. 2 The male and female protagonists are inexplicably attracted to each other, and they are together inexplicably. My ability is limited and I cannot understand the love in the author's words. 3. Several men in the article [He, Yang, Xuan] have rich and powerful families, and the heroine is a breath of fresh air among them. The scene where the rich young master falls in love with the little white flower. Come back and read it when the book is finished.

I had a preconceived idea that Scarface had committed something, but I didn't expect that he was an undercover agent. I hope he can be rescued in the book.

Today, Sunday, the editor did not go to work. I have been revising. I have revised it three or four times. Every time I applied for backend unblocking, I waited for two or three hours, but it was never approved. I don't know what the problem is. Wait a little longer. If it doesn't work, I will add another chapter. I will ask the editor to unblock chapter 62 tomorrow.