Mortal: Start a Minecraft System

Now, the game the author is referring to is the protagonist's Golden Finger - MC World If you don't develop your golden fingers, leave them alone to practice. . .

To be honest, I saw this book next door, Minecraft. The idea is okay, and the anime-based version is okay. Compared with the original book, Han Li in the anime version is more humane, while the original book is too cold and ruthless. But after I read a few chapters. . . How should I put it? It's too childish. There are already several poisonous points in the first few chapters. First, for the healing potion, tell Han Li that there is a fairy medicine. Han Li changed the clothes. Where did you get it? Is it hidden in the hook? Second, you've already entered the inn, why are Han Li's parents here to see you off? And sister Han Li? ? Third, you only have the first-level exercise formulas. How did you reach the sixth level of cultivation? Awesome! ! ! Fourth, beating Mr. Mo was too childish. A man who is an elite and a master of martial arts was simply tricked by you? Fifth, do I have to enter the game specifically to get an alloy sword? Then why didn't you take it in the first place? Sixth, in two years, everything should be built in my world. I remember that there should be a merchant who refreshed the world. There should be things from all over the world, techniques, elixirs, and weapons from other worlds, right? It should appear within two years, but why haven't I seen it? Anyway. Your 6.6 Points are really not unfair! ! !

Too dramatic, too idealistic

The protagonist has been casting a spell on the people around him If it weren't for the fact that no one except Han Li could marry the Nascent Soul, each one's inner demon obsession is too deep, and they are all stacked up by the protagonist. They don't have the attitude of a cultivator, and they don't look like a cultivator at all.

Why can't the villager who cultivates immortality be broken?

I have been reading fanfics for nearly five years. This is the first time I have seen a book that has been changed so much. It can be said to be completely different from the original setting. It is also the first time I am so speechless. It is also the first time I have given a one-star negative review. If you can't write something original, you can write a fanfic. You can change the plot, settings, etc. But you can't change it randomly. You can only read the first few chapters, but the rest are all 💩

I couldn't bear it when Hongxiu forced her to change the system to one with a background, but I couldn't stand it when I shared the system with Zi Ling and told her that she could tell her parents. Good brothers like Han Li and Zhang Tie have been with you for decades without telling them about the system. When you get married to a girl, you not only share the system with her but also allow her to tell her parents?

First of all, the author has always emphasized that he only watched anime, so please write in a way that is consistent with anime and don't make up random things, okay? In addition, the author said that he has played MC, and he is still using MC with enchanted crossbows and axes for two years? The functions of those props are not introduced, and the functions are not explained at all, and the workbench and synthesis formulas are not written? You don't even take any medicine, but you only use that kind of medicinal herb for two years? Planting grass doesn't require you to do it yourself. With so much time left in the day, do you have to meditate or eat dry food?

My dear, you have no logic at all when writing a book.

An author who only understands my world but does not understand the story of mortals cultivating immortality