Nostalgic Era
by Xiaojiefan
About This Novel
If you want to travel, just travel, but what the hell is traveling to the battlefield? That's fine, but why are the names and looks of these people around me so familiar? The boss is Li Yunlong in "Bright Sword", and the cheap brother is Jiang Defu in "Parents' Love". Even the woman who pursues him is a famous character in movies and TV series. Good guy, what about this hodgepodge of nostalgic dramas?
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Official(28)Scraped 2d ago
The unfinished plot is too fast, a lot of the plot is unreasonable, and some of it is violent.
I've been reading for a long time and I don't know what the hell I'm writing about.
You have to have a theme anyway, so just write it down
I've deleted the comment again. I can't say that there are too many anti-theft chapters, and I can't say that the novel has been too slow lately, so I just abandoned the book. I'll delete the comment if I'm happy to do so.
Characters appear too quickly
The characters appear too quickly, and the plot is a bit poorly described! I hope to improve my writing skills!
It's a hodgepodge that's hard to write and ugly to read.
Won't this hodgepodge of individual plots fight? Could it be that we have to borrow the original setting and ask readers to shield the conflict themselves?
It's completely forced
The important subordinates of Commander Li Yunlong are not only at the regiment level but also at the battalion level. The revolutionary People's Liberation Army soldiers who are rooted in Miaohong went to college and were not promoted to three levels in a row? Just kidding at the grassroots level!
The further back you go, the harder it is to read. The writing is out of line.
not good
The plot of the Siheyuan was written slowly, and one thing was explained repeatedly and verbosely. When the partner's intentions are unclear and their attitude is ambiguous, those who are fighting on the battlefield should be decisive and cheerful!
Daily check-in will bring you a wave of experience.
It's very rubbish, and the Qingman Courtyard is very dramatic.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(28)Scraped 2d ago
The unfinished plot is too fast, a lot of the plot is unreasonable, and some of it is violent.
I've been reading for a long time and I don't know what the hell I'm writing about.
You have to have a theme anyway, so just write it down
I've deleted the comment again. I can't say that there are too many anti-theft chapters, and I can't say that the novel has been too slow lately, so I just abandoned the book. I'll delete the comment if I'm happy to do so.
Characters appear too quickly
The characters appear too quickly, and the plot is a bit poorly described! I hope to improve my writing skills!
It's a hodgepodge that's hard to write and ugly to read.
Won't this hodgepodge of individual plots fight? Could it be that we have to borrow the original setting and ask readers to shield the conflict themselves?
It's completely forced
The important subordinates of Commander Li Yunlong are not only at the regiment level but also at the battalion level. The revolutionary People's Liberation Army soldiers who are rooted in Miaohong went to college and were not promoted to three levels in a row? Just kidding at the grassroots level!
The further back you go, the harder it is to read. The writing is out of line.
not good
The plot of the Siheyuan was written slowly, and one thing was explained repeatedly and verbosely. When the partner's intentions are unclear and their attitude is ambiguous, those who are fighting on the battlefield should be decisive and cheerful!
Daily check-in will bring you a wave of experience.
It's very rubbish, and the Qingman Courtyard is very dramatic.
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