The Great Master: Starting from the Contract Goddess Luo Li

Author, are you going to cuckold Xiao Yan and Lin Dong? Have you collected Xun'er, Medusa Colorful Scales, Ling Qingzhu, and Ying Huanhuan?

Shouldn't you just pretend to be a bitch, get slapped in the face, and have invincible cultivation? ? Why did she get into the harem? Give her the power to cover the sky, raise her with the imperial soldiers, and give her double pupils Isn't this easier to write than the harem? Or come to Dharmakaya on the big stage of the sun and moon! Who can beat you?

Can the author collect all the women from Xiao Yan and Lin Dong, as well as Dou Po and Wu Dong?

Author Brother Author Brother, can the female protagonist in this book have a spiritual stream? 👿👿👿

I originally thought that Wu Yingying was not included because the plot was over, but now that I see the protagonist and Muchen seeing each other naked, I don't understand why I have to write such a story that makes others see the naked body. I read the comments and found out that the author first wrote that the protagonist and Muchen saw the other person naked, and then got scolded, so he didn't change it and added a sentence in front of it.

I've only read the first two chapters and I can't help but complain. Because there are really few followers of the Great Lord (compared to Douluo Douluo), I sincerely give you a suggestion. Just change it if you can. You have just started. Others have golden three chapters. This kind of plot is meaningless. The whole unrequited female character is ignored by the protagonist and the original male protagonist, but it takes up the most crucial chapter at the beginning. Others don't seek merit at the beginning of their novels. How attractive it is, but they seek no fault. Just like a reader friend wrote that you were a little earlier than Muchen, Wu Yingying collected it. If I don't praise you, at least I won't persuade you to quit. Either there is no paragraph at the beginning, and this person and the related plot are not shown at the end of the spiritual path, then no one will say anything, and the whole thing is neither good nor bad. A female character recognized by the system that the male protagonist has seen her body has been seen by the original male protagonist at the same time. I even had the illusion that the male protagonist and Muchen were together. Anyway, I was speechless by this kind of beginning. This is probably the author's first time writing a novel, and he probably hasn't read many novels and doesn't read readers' comments very much. The poisonous points of the novel have been constantly evolving in the past twenty years, but some poisons have remained unchanged. The author has continued to Even old poisoners can't avoid it. I'm really worried that some of the rumors in the past few years will be trampled all over again. Finally, I suggest again that this plot can be deleted, but not deleted. At least now, I saw several comments in the paragraph saying that it was dismissed at the beginning. Anyway, I didn't see that it was well written at the beginning. I only read the beginning and gave it a rating of 3, blaming me for being too hasty and harsh. There is inertia in reading novels. If it is well written at the beginning and does not make mistakes later, many readers will have the inertia to continue reading. If you don't write the beginning well, don't talk about the rest. You are equivalent to setting a threshold for your book in advance and brushing off a group of people.

There is no limit to 6, and the poisonous carry from Tomato is full, but here I can't even get through the first chapter😐😐

This is the most beautiful master I have ever seen

The content is average, but there aren't many major fics about the Lord, and even less interesting ones. Come on, author, I encourage you with 5-star reviews. The requirements for fan fiction are not so strict, respect the original setting and plot direction, and write boldly about other things. Fan fiction is just whatever makes you happy.

Watching it, I feel like all the golden fingers are gone. The main character is so useless and his feelings are gone. I want to open a golden finger for two women.