
The Geniuses of Spell Return Are All Crazy
About This Novel
She traveled through time and became the adopted sister of Xia Youjie who never existed in the original work. After living alone in Sendai for several years, she finally planned to go to Tokyo to find her cheap brother to see if she could change the tragedy, but ended up falling in love? ?
What Readers Think
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Official(6)Scraped 5d ago
Just a little short
The writing is pretty good, but it's short and not enough to read. I prefer a happy ending, but I could do with a few scenes about chasing my wife in the crematorium (quietly)
Cheers + suggestions
First of all, the storyline of this book is good, and the emotional involvement between the characters is relatively clear. However, I have a few suggestions for the author. Throughout the novel, the heroine is described in the first person "I". The author can try to use the protagonist's name instead. This can increase the reader's sense of involvement and reduce the difficulty of writing for the first time. Of course, this is not a huge criticism of the author. Every great writer is a great writer from a novice to a later one. Even the first novel written by the third young master of the Tang family when he first entered the novel world was written in the first person. Finally, I wish the author great success in his book. Come on, 😘😘 (This opinion only represents my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.)
Don't give up the trap.
It's good to read, but the updates are a bit slow. Each chapter is too short and not enough to read. Please keep up the good work. I'm optimistic about you.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 5d ago
Just a little short
The writing is pretty good, but it's short and not enough to read. I prefer a happy ending, but I could do with a few scenes about chasing my wife in the crematorium (quietly)
Cheers + suggestions
First of all, the storyline of this book is good, and the emotional involvement between the characters is relatively clear. However, I have a few suggestions for the author. Throughout the novel, the heroine is described in the first person "I". The author can try to use the protagonist's name instead. This can increase the reader's sense of involvement and reduce the difficulty of writing for the first time. Of course, this is not a huge criticism of the author. Every great writer is a great writer from a novice to a later one. Even the first novel written by the third young master of the Tang family when he first entered the novel world was written in the first person. Finally, I wish the author great success in his book. Come on, 😘😘 (This opinion only represents my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.)
Don't give up the trap.
It's good to read, but the updates are a bit slow. Each chapter is too short and not enough to read. Please keep up the good work. I'm optimistic about you.

























