I Am a Heavenly Master in Another World

I have a cold, and I don't have much strength. I won't update today. I went to the doctor in the afternoon, and the various tests alone cost two to three hundred. The doctor said it was bronchitis caused by the cold, but to be on the safe side, he asked me to self-quarantine at home for 14 days. I hope I won't be so lucky and get caught. God bless 😂😂😂😂

Personally, I prefer novels that don't have male protagonists and don't take away from the original male and female protagonists. The first few chapters are actually pretty good, but then when the heroine goes to college, the writing style develops in a weird direction. The whole thing has a strong air of pretense. . . . Maybe it's because I've read too many articles, except for Wushan, it's not Yun.

The heroine always claims to be the Virgin, but what she does is exactly the opposite. The main personality is a love brain immersed in his own world. The behavior of the sub-personality makes me feel very aggrieved and I can't describe it. If I have to find a way to describe it, it's just that I'm acting like that but still doing that. Don't say don't read it if you can't stand it. This is one of the rare times I couldn't stand it and didn't just fork it and leave a comment. I give four stars because I hope the author can change this, because I think the author's work is generally quite good and very interesting.

The beginning is okay, but the ending is rushed

Can you please stop writing the main personality? I feel a little disgusted.

The Holy Mother is a fake, pretending to be for money, but in fact she is the Holy Mother. No matter how others offend others, she always finds reasons to help others. The most disgusting thing is to write her own main personality in a very disgusting way, and then do whatever the sub-personality is. Hehe, she also talks about the sub-personality. I don't know how to cultivate the main personality, so that it doesn't seem to be a body. There are also treasures that claim the main personality when there is a main personality. There is nothing you can do to get the bracelet. I don't know what it is called. It's a novel that bitches can no longer be bitches.

The heroine acts procrastinated and looks at the thief struggling. It mainly depends on the plot. If I don't want to watch the female protagonist, it's annoying.

The ending sucked, not good-looking

A love-minded protagonist can actually make it to the end, and the heroine can't defeat her? In the end, we have to rely on the character of the protagonist to be destroyed to save the world that was almost ruled by Mary Sue?

The whole idea and structure of the book is quite good, but the heroine's thoughts are a bit contradictory. She clearly said she doesn't want to interfere with other people's affairs, but she ends up doing it every time. Later I said it was for money. It feels like the heroine wrote about practicing before she time traveled, and then she didn't practice much after she time traveled, because she became invincible after having that bracelet, and the weirdest thing is that the heroine herself tries to change the fate of others. Everyone has a destiny, good and bad people alike. When they meet good people, they save them, and when they meet bad people, they interfere with their fate and make their fate bad. The heroine is stronger than the laws of this world. Since I wanted to write a story about a heroine who doesn't want to care about anything and is relatively cold, but the heroine cares about everything. It's not that the storyteller is bad, but the heroine is becoming increasingly boring and has no distinct character traits.