
People Are in Douluo, Coaxing Xiaowu Soul Ring
by Fried Green Peppers With Eggs
About This Novel
(New book "Peerless Douluo: Another Suffering for Huo Yuhao") This book is also known as "I pretended to be Tang San and coaxed Xiao Wu into offering sacrifices", "Buddha's Angry Lotus blew up Tang Ritian", "I pretended to be Tang San and did bad things", "The Clear Sky Bamboo Shoots are far better than the Clear Sky Hammer", "Tang San: None of these were done by me"... Lan Si, a Blue Star firearms enthusiast in his previous life, was brought from modern times by a mysterious force to the world of bad guys in Huajianghu by chance, and became the 14th Taibao of Tongwen Hall. Before he could show off his ambitions, he was regarded as an anomaly by the bad handsome man and was knocked off the cliff. His soul was reborn in Douluo Continent... Tang San: Lan Si, why do my Tang Sect secret arts have no effect on you? Give me Xiao Wu, give me the fairy grass, give me the Eight Spider Spears... Xiao Wu: Didn't I sacrifice it to Third Brother? Why did it become your soul ring? Ah, don't eat rabbit.... Tang Hao: I only taught Xiaosan the Great Sumeru Hammer, why can you do it too? Yu Xiaogang: I regret that I shouldn't have offended Lan Si. I researched the invincibility theory myself and I didn't plagiarize it. Ning Rongrong: I missed 100 million. Dai Mubai: Why is it me again in LV? Ps: The author has two completed books "Douluo: Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System" and "Douluo: The Yibao System" with orders of 2,000 each. Please support. Friendly reminder: Xiao Wu and Ning Rongrong will not be accepted for non-systematic articles.
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Official(333)Scraped 1mo ago
Some personal advice about the heroine!
The ending of the original work of Wuhundian Sanmei is too tragic, so it can be dismissed. The three beauties of the soul beasts (Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Wang Qiuer) can also be taken in. These are poor people who were persecuted by the Tang family. Since they are hostile to the Tang family, they must be saved. It's totally unreasonable for Zhu Zhuqing, this treasured girl, to end up with a guy like Dai Mubai in the original novel. I don't know how he can get away with it! Seven may be a bit much, but I think these seven are very pitiable characters. (Anyway, I haven't watched a lot of anime updates, and the more I read, the more disgusting I feel. I can only read fan fiction with more positive views)
heroine
Will this book have a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? I hope it will be a single female protagonist, as multiple female protagonists are too disgusting to watch.
Come on author
The author's protagonist becomes a god and pretends to be a bad person, and understands cause and effect with Yuan Tiangang. If the empress doesn't like Li Xingyun, she can add Chi Meng. If you really want to fight, there is no need to conflict with Xiao Yan, just trick Yao Lao into giving him his ring. Xiao Yan was still a decent person, unlike Tang San. The conflict with Xiao Yan was just because of Xiao Xun'er. It's not good to have too many female protagonists.
Xiao Wu was eaten! !
When I saw the chapter where Xiao Wu was eaten, I was first shocked, then confused, and finally felt a little nauseous and felt like vomiting rainbows. I have read so many Douluo fan novels and seen many endings for Xiao Wu. The good ending is to take Xiao Wu away, and the worst ending is to turn Xiao Wu into a soul ring and soul bone. This turned Xiao Wu into a soul ring and soul bone, and finally ate the rabbit Xiao Wu turned into! ! ! This is the first time I've seen it, and I just want to complain about it. A few days ago, people turned into rabbits and now they eat them. It feels like they've changed their direction and eaten that thing. Anyway, that's what I personally think. (The above is purely personal opinion, please don't criticize if you don't like it. Discussion is welcome, thank you! 🤞)
Now writing fan fiction
I feel like when I write Douluo fanfics nowadays, the protagonist is so handsome that the girls can't walk on the road after just one look at it. It doesn't have the same feeling as in the previous novels, where the protagonist is okay, but not the best in the whole book. He's handsome, but he can still attract the heroine's liking. Only when you watch it like this can you feel something. Otherwise, you just think you're handsome, and you're stupid. The more you watch this review, the more you want to vomit. When writing a book, you have to be like, the protagonist's appearance is not so earth-shattering, right?
The writing is quite good.
I would like to ask, the author has written so much, but has not written much about helping Zhu Zhuqing and Ye Lingling improve their talents. They cannot inherit a second-level god like the original work. If the talent is too low, the cultivation speed will be very slow. I think you can write the protagonist to help them improve their talents.
About the protagonist
There is generally nothing wrong with this book, but what about the protagonist? I didn't like him at all, and then I didn't even know how Qian Renxue fell in love with him, and even opened a harem later. I didn't understand, and laughed at Tang San from the commanding heights. In fact, I really don't think the protagonist is any better than Tang San. They all use some despicable methods. Is the protagonist's character really higher than Tang San? In terms of the character of the protagonist, this is undoubtedly a dark story, but you still want to create that kind of character. It seems that the protagonist is absolutely forced to target Tang San. He looks very noble, as if he is a complete victim. This is the routine in the later stage. To be honest, I don't like it.
Adding a gun was a failure
Can the fantasy world not include looting? Even if it does, it will still be martial arts. I can't believe that a group of soul masters fought with guns in the later stage. Needless to say, the agile clan will definitely be very popular in the later stage.
I've seen Chapter 212. Don't go too far later. Is this the plan for mother and daughter to take it all? Tang San just built a pig farm. Is the author planning to turn Douluo into a sow factory? 😐😐😐😐
I am a brainless black\(@^0^@)/♪I am a brainless black
I am a brainless black\(@^0^@)/♪I am a brainless black I can't stand it anymore. Say goodbye.
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Official(333)Scraped 1mo ago
Some personal advice about the heroine!
The ending of the original work of Wuhundian Sanmei is too tragic, so it can be dismissed. The three beauties of the soul beasts (Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Wang Qiuer) can also be taken in. These are poor people who were persecuted by the Tang family. Since they are hostile to the Tang family, they must be saved. It's totally unreasonable for Zhu Zhuqing, this treasured girl, to end up with a guy like Dai Mubai in the original novel. I don't know how he can get away with it! Seven may be a bit much, but I think these seven are very pitiable characters. (Anyway, I haven't watched a lot of anime updates, and the more I read, the more disgusting I feel. I can only read fan fiction with more positive views)
heroine
Will this book have a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? I hope it will be a single female protagonist, as multiple female protagonists are too disgusting to watch.
Come on author
The author's protagonist becomes a god and pretends to be a bad person, and understands cause and effect with Yuan Tiangang. If the empress doesn't like Li Xingyun, she can add Chi Meng. If you really want to fight, there is no need to conflict with Xiao Yan, just trick Yao Lao into giving him his ring. Xiao Yan was still a decent person, unlike Tang San. The conflict with Xiao Yan was just because of Xiao Xun'er. It's not good to have too many female protagonists.
Xiao Wu was eaten! !
When I saw the chapter where Xiao Wu was eaten, I was first shocked, then confused, and finally felt a little nauseous and felt like vomiting rainbows. I have read so many Douluo fan novels and seen many endings for Xiao Wu. The good ending is to take Xiao Wu away, and the worst ending is to turn Xiao Wu into a soul ring and soul bone. This turned Xiao Wu into a soul ring and soul bone, and finally ate the rabbit Xiao Wu turned into! ! ! This is the first time I've seen it, and I just want to complain about it. A few days ago, people turned into rabbits and now they eat them. It feels like they've changed their direction and eaten that thing. Anyway, that's what I personally think. (The above is purely personal opinion, please don't criticize if you don't like it. Discussion is welcome, thank you! 🤞)
Now writing fan fiction
I feel like when I write Douluo fanfics nowadays, the protagonist is so handsome that the girls can't walk on the road after just one look at it. It doesn't have the same feeling as in the previous novels, where the protagonist is okay, but not the best in the whole book. He's handsome, but he can still attract the heroine's liking. Only when you watch it like this can you feel something. Otherwise, you just think you're handsome, and you're stupid. The more you watch this review, the more you want to vomit. When writing a book, you have to be like, the protagonist's appearance is not so earth-shattering, right?
The writing is quite good.
I would like to ask, the author has written so much, but has not written much about helping Zhu Zhuqing and Ye Lingling improve their talents. They cannot inherit a second-level god like the original work. If the talent is too low, the cultivation speed will be very slow. I think you can write the protagonist to help them improve their talents.
About the protagonist
There is generally nothing wrong with this book, but what about the protagonist? I didn't like him at all, and then I didn't even know how Qian Renxue fell in love with him, and even opened a harem later. I didn't understand, and laughed at Tang San from the commanding heights. In fact, I really don't think the protagonist is any better than Tang San. They all use some despicable methods. Is the protagonist's character really higher than Tang San? In terms of the character of the protagonist, this is undoubtedly a dark story, but you still want to create that kind of character. It seems that the protagonist is absolutely forced to target Tang San. He looks very noble, as if he is a complete victim. This is the routine in the later stage. To be honest, I don't like it.
Adding a gun was a failure
Can the fantasy world not include looting? Even if it does, it will still be martial arts. I can't believe that a group of soul masters fought with guns in the later stage. Needless to say, the agile clan will definitely be very popular in the later stage.
I've seen Chapter 212. Don't go too far later. Is this the plan for mother and daughter to take it all? Tang San just built a pig farm. Is the author planning to turn Douluo into a sow factory? 😐😐😐😐
I am a brainless black\(@^0^@)/♪I am a brainless black
I am a brainless black\(@^0^@)/♪I am a brainless black I can't stand it anymore. Say goodbye.
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This book is also known as "I pretended to be Tang San and coaxed Xiao Wu into offering sacrifices", "Buddha's Angry Lotus blew up Tang Ritian", "I pretended to be Tang San and did bad things", "The Clear Sky Bamboo Shoots are far better than the Clear Sky Hammer", "Tang San: None of these were done by me"... Lan Si, a Blue Star firearms enthusiast in his previous life, was brought from modern times by a mysterious force to the world of bad guys in Huajianghu by chance, and became the 14th Taibao of Tongwen Hall. Before he could show off his ambitions, he was regarded as an anomaly by the bad handsome man and was knocked off the cliff. His soul was reborn in Douluo Continent... Tang San: Lan Si, why do my Tang Sect secret arts have no effect on you? Give me Xiao Wu, give me the fairy grass, give me the Eight Spider Spears... Xiao Wu: Didn't I sacrifice it to Third Brother? Why did it become your soul ring? Ah, don't eat rabbit.... Tang Hao: I only taught Xiaosan the Great Sumeru Hammer, why can you do it too? Yu Xiaogang: I regret that I shouldn't have offended Lan Si. I researched the invincibility theory myself and I didn't plagiarize it. Ning Rongrong: I missed 100 million. Dai Mubai: Why is it me again in LV?




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