Ah? How Did My Wife Come True?

I feel like it's just a mess, without an outline to lead it. And the last few pictures are all pitfalls. The first is about saving the world after 4,000 games, and the later simulation brings out the genius son. The previous simulation is covered, and the daughter from before is simply gone, so why bother writing it out. The writing is getting more and more messy, and there are more and more female protagonists. I don't deny having a harem, but author, can you write it? I do not deny that some of the plots and settings are very good, and some can even be said to be very exciting, but there is no need to pursue perfection so much. Just like the Shushan Taoist, although he burned his life with Yutian Hua to disband Shushan, I think the plot is very good, and it is only with regrets that it is impressive. When I had the opportunity to change later, I was left speechless. It was a no-brainer, right? The plot was really not as good as the previous one. I quite agree with the idea of ​​not leaving any regrets, but what was outrageous was that the outcome was not that good either. My daughter was lost. Forget it, I won't say much, after all, I am just an average reader.

Can you tell me, what does it mean to destroy a good sect that helps each other within the sect? Her fault is not hers?

The most poisonous thing is that those sidekicks are far inferior to him in cultivation and have a longer lifespan than him. In the end, they come over and insist that he has the method of immortality. Isn't this poisonous?

I was reading a book today and found that the main character's name was wrong, which is very suspicious...

To be honest, are all of you blind? The writing is mediocre and the setting is as poisonous as many of today's drug guides. Why is the protagonist so talented that he doesn't even know his wife is a monster? Isn't this poisonous? It seems that everyone in Longhu Mountain is full of wine and rice bags, right? I will only tell you what I saw.

Who is this big boss? It is impossible for a new author to have such strength. After reading this, I feel that the only shortcoming is that the timeline is a bit messy. The protagonist was reincarnated hundreds of years ago, and now it jumps directly to 10,000 years ago. Although it does not affect the reading, I am afraid that the author will not be able to figure out the timeline and cause a collapse. If there is no outline, it will probably be stuck later.

The first life was the best, the second life was awesome, the third life started with broken characters, random writing, a perfunctory ending, inconsistent character motivations, and difficult characterization. After the fourth life, the more I watched it, the more sanctimonious it became, the more I watched it, the more I felt it was deliberately disgusting, inappropriate jokes, I lost my daughter, and the next second the hell joke started, I thought I was convinced, and every word that a good man has to take responsibility, but in the end, he has never been responsible to anyone in reality. I can only say that it's no wonder it's free, no wonder it's eliminated. I really don't feel so resentful after reading a book. I really want to kill you after reading your book! ! ! !

I was a bit confused when I looked at it. I thought about it and I didn't watch it short. As I looked at it, I realized that I couldn't understand it.

It gets more and more confusing as I write it, and I can even remember the main character's name incorrectly.

The front is okay, but the more you write later, the more confusing it becomes. One moment, reincarnation can change the world, and the next moment, it cannot be changed. Reload the file! This world is like a game created by the protagonist. If you don't agree, you'll start over again! Especially what I just saw, a copy is repeated 3.4 Times. Isn't it too unfriendly to people who spend money to read books? Of course, there is no problem in having sex without spending money.