I Just Joined the Group, You Said I Traveled Through Time?
by Grab That Fat Blue Guy And Smash It
About This Novel
Zheng Xuan, who had just become a new reincarnation, followed the guidance of the Lord God's mission system, took Yanjing Metro Line 2, transferred to bus No. 107, And came to Nanxiawazi Hutong. Looking at the crew of "Magic Phone" filming here, Zheng Xuan looked troubled. "Are you sure this is the world of "Magic Phone"?" [Confirming... You have arrived at the mission world, please complete the mission as soon as possible to obtain the corresponding rewards! "..." His own waste system was unable to take people across time, and he even treated the crew's filming location as a mission world! Zheng Xuan had no choice but to stuff the bunch of props from the crew into the system, but a message that the task was completed appeared: [Task completed, "Chinese brand 2060 mobile phone Sha Niu", "Sha Niu replica mobile phone Prince King", "Sha Niu replica mobile phone Prince", "Sha Niu replica mobile phone Sandstorm" have been submitted...] [Settlement rewards in progress...] Hey, no, the crew props can also be exchanged for rewards?
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Official(59)Scraped 5d ago
It was fine at first, but writing about Liu Yifei is like licking a dog. What a company boss writes is like shit. Before, he was marketing fairy spirit and now he is marketing blood cow. Although he looks better than ordinary people, that's all.
I thought it was the flow of time traveling through the heavens, but it turned out to be entertainment.
Who is watching this stupid content and it's actually on the shelves? It's all thanks to your efforts.
After reading it for a while, the creative idea was quite good, but the writing was very childish. In some places, it seemed like it was mentally retarded. It was too taken for granted and just for my own entertainment.
Pure imagination
First of all, I would like to state that those who were watching from the outside were so angry that they came here specifically to search and start complaining. . . . The first one, looking at it so far, I don't know whether the protagonist is reborn in time or is an indigenous person! (This should have been explained in Chapters 1-3) You say he is a native. In the first three chapters, the protagonist knows about Infinite Baldness. The original work was only serialized in 2007. It took 2008 to become famous. He also knew about DeSp. It took 20 years for this to spread. You could say that the protagonist is a reborn person. When he sees a celebrity, he acts as if he doesn't know him. When he encounters a girl, he acts like he's still in love. He just pounces on her, but he pretends to ignore it, just like a straight adolescent boy. . . Second, Prince's mobile phone. Whether it's a washboard master space or a cutting-edge Prince mobile phone. No matter how low it is, no matter how reduced its functions are, the prince's computer function and language function alone are all that the protagonist needs to develop in order to have personal connections! The result? What are you writing about? ? ? Starting from scratch + all kinds of difficulties? ? ? Oh. In modern society, if there is a prince's mobile phone, he still has to do this. Is it because the author can't write it? You can only rely on what you heard from childhood. Who is the best if you start from scratch? Laughing to death. . . As for other things like being a bitch when you meet a woman, these are all trivial matters and just a personal preference. What we are talking about is logical matters. . . Slipping away.
The protagonist's wisdom is equal to the author's wisdom
The idea is pretty good, but it's a pity it was wasted.
The plot is childish and the female character has no charm.
How should I put it? This is an urban novel, not a real reincarnation space novel. Let me say this in advance.
The author comes out
To be honest, the subject matter is really good But author, why do you want to be clichéd? ! ! I don't understand! The male lead shows up in a drama and gets married, bulldozer? You conceived this kind of subject matter, and you just wrote it as a way to pick up girls and go to bed? I haven't read it after it was put on the shelf. I really can't arouse the desire to read it. Why don't I read the copy/system etc. If I want to read this kind of content? It's more fun. Your main topic can't be compared with others. The meaning of the content is the same. No matter how bad it is to follow the path of pretentious articles about this kind of subject matter, it is better than writing about promoting girls. It's not that you can't push girls, you should also focus on the light ones. The main point is to go to bed... Don't write the results as a process... So empty Explain how your thinking is distorted
Damn it, you are so stupid, I'm going to vomit
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Official(59)Scraped 5d ago
It was fine at first, but writing about Liu Yifei is like licking a dog. What a company boss writes is like shit. Before, he was marketing fairy spirit and now he is marketing blood cow. Although he looks better than ordinary people, that's all.
I thought it was the flow of time traveling through the heavens, but it turned out to be entertainment.
Who is watching this stupid content and it's actually on the shelves? It's all thanks to your efforts.
After reading it for a while, the creative idea was quite good, but the writing was very childish. In some places, it seemed like it was mentally retarded. It was too taken for granted and just for my own entertainment.
Pure imagination
First of all, I would like to state that those who were watching from the outside were so angry that they came here specifically to search and start complaining. . . . The first one, looking at it so far, I don't know whether the protagonist is reborn in time or is an indigenous person! (This should have been explained in Chapters 1-3) You say he is a native. In the first three chapters, the protagonist knows about Infinite Baldness. The original work was only serialized in 2007. It took 2008 to become famous. He also knew about DeSp. It took 20 years for this to spread. You could say that the protagonist is a reborn person. When he sees a celebrity, he acts as if he doesn't know him. When he encounters a girl, he acts like he's still in love. He just pounces on her, but he pretends to ignore it, just like a straight adolescent boy. . . Second, Prince's mobile phone. Whether it's a washboard master space or a cutting-edge Prince mobile phone. No matter how low it is, no matter how reduced its functions are, the prince's computer function and language function alone are all that the protagonist needs to develop in order to have personal connections! The result? What are you writing about? ? ? Starting from scratch + all kinds of difficulties? ? ? Oh. In modern society, if there is a prince's mobile phone, he still has to do this. Is it because the author can't write it? You can only rely on what you heard from childhood. Who is the best if you start from scratch? Laughing to death. . . As for other things like being a bitch when you meet a woman, these are all trivial matters and just a personal preference. What we are talking about is logical matters. . . Slipping away.
The protagonist's wisdom is equal to the author's wisdom
The idea is pretty good, but it's a pity it was wasted.
The plot is childish and the female character has no charm.
How should I put it? This is an urban novel, not a real reincarnation space novel. Let me say this in advance.
The author comes out
To be honest, the subject matter is really good But author, why do you want to be clichéd? ! ! I don't understand! The male lead shows up in a drama and gets married, bulldozer? You conceived this kind of subject matter, and you just wrote it as a way to pick up girls and go to bed? I haven't read it after it was put on the shelf. I really can't arouse the desire to read it. Why don't I read the copy/system etc. If I want to read this kind of content? It's more fun. Your main topic can't be compared with others. The meaning of the content is the same. No matter how bad it is to follow the path of pretentious articles about this kind of subject matter, it is better than writing about promoting girls. It's not that you can't push girls, you should also focus on the light ones. The main point is to go to bed... Don't write the results as a process... So empty Explain how your thinking is distorted
Damn it, you are so stupid, I'm going to vomit
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