
Versatile Mage's Immortal Fire
by Like Irena
About This Novel
Lin Ran was born with immortal fire in Bo City, and the flames on his body could heal him quickly even if he was injured.
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Official(187)Scraped 10d ago
The Black Snake chapter was written too outrageously to keep up with the plot. The protagonist always acted slowly like a blockhead. When he saw Black Snake being attacked, his first reaction was not to help, but to be surprised at how powerful Lei was. Seeing Tang Yue crying, he finally thought of taking action. If Tang Yue is threatened by the other party, the protagonist obediently puts on handcuffs, what the hell is the plot, and then he knows that there is something wrong with Luo Yong and is here to harm them, but he doesn't take action and waits for Luo Yong to kill the eagle before he fights back. What's the use of the protagonist in this chapter? On the contrary, it seems very redundant. It obviously has the ability to solve this problem, but it has the same result as the original work.
If you lick a dog improperly, you will really die.
In Mo Fan's Dog Licking, the protagonist is like Mo Fan's bodyguard, protecting Mo Fan.
There are so many wrong points, so many missing points that have not been filled in. Why is it so messed up?
What's going on? The high-level promotion to Heavenly Seed doesn't even have any special effects. What about the increase, isn't it 12 times? I see that you don't get a double increase, or you burn it directly to ashes. The light system doesn't even have a protective effect. Even an increase has no effect. The shield is shattered and the general is shattered. What's your situation? This is called Heavenly Seed. This is called Spirit Seed. How do you deserve the title of Heavenly Seed? Heavenly Seed has a forbidden realm, do you have one?
You've got amnesia now
Forcibly suppress the protagonist and follow the plot. I feel the same. The addition of an additional protagonist remains unchanged. Let's go. The protagonist's strength is too bad, and the writing of Mo Fan is too bad. There is an immortal fire, which makes you neither human nor ghost. You write cheats and suppress them. You might as well not cheat. From the moment your strength is suppressed, it becomes boring.
Mo Fan licks the dog and is not as good to women as Mo Fan
Even if it's because of the feelings he had since childhood, Brother Xinxia can't lick him like this. To be honest, he can stand at the top just with dual elements and totems. It's all a matter of time, and there is no need to worry about him being in any danger. Can't he just be a normal child like a monkey?
If you want to say that Tang Yue is the heroine, then give up. It's not that Tang Yue is not good, but the author's writing is too contradictory. In the first part, the protagonist is said to be sensible and good at studying, but in the second part, the protagonist is described as a poor student like Mo Fan, with an out-of-touch personality. Moreover, Xinxia and others like him. It is impossible for the author to write about a harem.
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Official(187)Scraped 10d ago
The Black Snake chapter was written too outrageously to keep up with the plot. The protagonist always acted slowly like a blockhead. When he saw Black Snake being attacked, his first reaction was not to help, but to be surprised at how powerful Lei was. Seeing Tang Yue crying, he finally thought of taking action. If Tang Yue is threatened by the other party, the protagonist obediently puts on handcuffs, what the hell is the plot, and then he knows that there is something wrong with Luo Yong and is here to harm them, but he doesn't take action and waits for Luo Yong to kill the eagle before he fights back. What's the use of the protagonist in this chapter? On the contrary, it seems very redundant. It obviously has the ability to solve this problem, but it has the same result as the original work.
If you lick a dog improperly, you will really die.
In Mo Fan's Dog Licking, the protagonist is like Mo Fan's bodyguard, protecting Mo Fan.
There are so many wrong points, so many missing points that have not been filled in. Why is it so messed up?
What's going on? The high-level promotion to Heavenly Seed doesn't even have any special effects. What about the increase, isn't it 12 times? I see that you don't get a double increase, or you burn it directly to ashes. The light system doesn't even have a protective effect. Even an increase has no effect. The shield is shattered and the general is shattered. What's your situation? This is called Heavenly Seed. This is called Spirit Seed. How do you deserve the title of Heavenly Seed? Heavenly Seed has a forbidden realm, do you have one?
You've got amnesia now
Forcibly suppress the protagonist and follow the plot. I feel the same. The addition of an additional protagonist remains unchanged. Let's go. The protagonist's strength is too bad, and the writing of Mo Fan is too bad. There is an immortal fire, which makes you neither human nor ghost. You write cheats and suppress them. You might as well not cheat. From the moment your strength is suppressed, it becomes boring.
Mo Fan licks the dog and is not as good to women as Mo Fan
Even if it's because of the feelings he had since childhood, Brother Xinxia can't lick him like this. To be honest, he can stand at the top just with dual elements and totems. It's all a matter of time, and there is no need to worry about him being in any danger. Can't he just be a normal child like a monkey?
If you want to say that Tang Yue is the heroine, then give up. It's not that Tang Yue is not good, but the author's writing is too contradictory. In the first part, the protagonist is said to be sensible and good at studying, but in the second part, the protagonist is described as a poor student like Mo Fan, with an out-of-touch personality. Moreover, Xinxia and others like him. It is impossible for the author to write about a harem.































