The Years I Spent Cultivating Immortality in College

There are indeed some references in it, but there are also some parts that are your own. I hope the plot of the story can be more organized and the logic should be strengthened. Although it is an old-fashioned novel about cultivating immortals, there are also small details and excitement. I hope you can write a better story.

I mainly want to read a novel about cultivating immortals. Everything else is okay. It's just that the concept of cultivating immortals is not very clear. The plot is mediocre. This is my first time writing a novel about cultivating immortals. I hope the author will work hard in the future.

The male protagonist of this novel is written very plainly, not the overbearing school boy type. The reaction is very real, mainly because of the heroine. Of course, the monitor's life is also very down-to-earth. It would be better if the plot is more perfect. I hope the author will work hard 👍

Mainly here to see the heroine, it feels so cool to tie up a rich woman😘😘😘

The meaning of youth is the freedom to have the courage to scream and be silent, the freedom to say yes or no to everything. Youth is one of the most exciting moments in life. Youth moves forward for love without regrets. I hope to leave a novel for youth. This is the footprint of youth and the memory of youth. At the same time, I also hope that "My Jiang Girlfriend" will move forward with the future.

The university the author wrote about is different from the university I know.

Generally speaking, it's okay. The main reason is that I don't understand the realm of immortal cultivators. The ordinary levels of cultivating immortals are Qi training stage, foundation building stage, elixir formation stage, Nascent Soul stage, and incarnation stage. However, I made up the levels of immortal cultivation in this novel. The division of levels is not clear enough, which makes me confused when I read this. There is no clear introduction at the beginning. Remember to fill in this gap.