Become a Boss with the Top Talents in the Game

Do you know why I gave you two stars? The reason is actually...

The theme, idea, and writing are good, this is okay, but the plot is a bit toxic. Why did that classmate and the teacher have nothing to do with each other and suddenly become nice to you? Right, my classmates may be cheating me, but your teacher is going too far. Also, I don't know why I can't take it in. I really liked the subject matter, but I didn't want to play games in other novels. This one I wrote doesn't feel addictive at all. I hope the author pays attention. 1. I thought it was pretty good in the early stage. When the linkage came out, I thought it was pretty good and it could be reborn. I didn't expect it. I never expected it. A girl in the linkage would be so casual. She just stuck to you for a few days and then the linkage started? Why are you planning to be reborn as a woman? If you have average talent, forget it. You don't have enough martial arts skills to upgrade yourself, and then you can upgrade it to someone else. Are you afraid that you are not weak enough? Get a man. Wouldn't it be better to let him work hard to level up in the early stage and then increase the upper limit for the protagonist? There is still a way out if he dies. What's the point of choosing a woman? Life-saving things are so casual, and then the talking brother was so moved by how he looked at me, it was so embarrassing, 2. When it comes to love, why should I be with that Lin for no reason? Just because she's like that female ancestor? Even if you don't accept it, you still act like a child and have a temper? You are 26, but in reality you are only 16. Why do people who are 20 like you like a younger brother? Do you think you are 26 or 30? I guess the author has never had sex with anyone, or not many, and then you have a hookup with a girl,? Why is it just a joke or a harem? Really, you are a failure in writing emotional dramas, and then you write rejections and give various explanations, and the woman's various thoughts are unnecessary. Author, if you don't write well, you don't have to write it. We readers can also read it well, so why add poison to your book? It's still very poisonous. Write After three points, when the sex hormones have passed, it's good to read it yourself. It's really true. It's a pity for this book. The author might as well re-open it and remove the poisonous points. He may not be able to survive. Read more book reviews of other books and remember the poisonous points. Avoid it. It's definitely a good book. The pressure in the early stage is too long. You can level up by killing monsters. If you don't kill monsters, what are you trying to do? It's a trap. Everyone knows there will be a follow-up, but I have no sense of expectation at all. After upgrading and taking exams, I will have a bigger space and more good qualifications. How can I do a lot of things in the novice village? I hope the author can read it. It's not easy to type so many words, so I made some changes. It would be good to reopen the book and apply the worldview of this one.

It has been updated three or four times a day for the third month in a row, so the number of words will soon exceed one million. Although this book has no achievements, because it has an outline, I don't want it to be unfinished, so even if I rush into it, I still want to finish it. At least I don't want to live up to the outline that I racked my brains to perfect without eating or drinking for a week (funny life-saving). By the way, I feel sorry for my Mei Sansei.

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How to say, water, poison, water is not the same. After watching it for so long, you suddenly grow fruits? Are you writing about farming? Chapter 80 of Water has only come out of the ground three times. Are you kidding me if you still want to grow radishes?

Many situations are really embarrassing to watch.

It's disgusting and extremely poisonous. I didn't know what to write about the BBBB part about Teacher Dong, so I gave up the book.

The protagonist obviously already has a girlfriend, why is he still having an affair? Very disgusting, stallion?

Very good. Keep up the good work. How many more chapters does the author plan to add?

Nowadays, reading novels is becoming more and more uncomfortable. They are not as thorough, refreshing, heroic and passionate as the martial arts novels written by Jin, Gu, Huang, Liang and Wu in the past! What the author writes is also hesitant and timid. What's wrong with this? Could it be that now the Communist court also wants to continue the literary prison of the feudal Qing government?