Siheyuan Begins with the Death of Silly Zhu

This is a different Siheyuan. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, and the currency should be changed!

It's a mess. In the beginning, I wrote about Silly Pillar's rebirth, and in the back, I talked about recalling the plot of the TV series. I was crazy about the number of words, pasting over and over again the long-winded words in the front. The writing was very unrestrained. When I wrote about the characters in the underground traffic station, I thought there was a linkage and a spy-catching plot, but it turned out that they just appeared inexplicably. Jia Gui disgusted Jia Zhang and then stopped writing. What a fuss. There were many times later that the plot came to an abrupt end, and the author probably couldn't wrap up the story even halfway through. . . Then I forced myself to write a paragraph, and I felt like the AI ​​was continuing it, and the author just started it. I couldn't stand it any longer, and I flipped through the catalog and saw the time traveler An Jiahe in the catalog. . . Numb.

The author's writing is quite good, but it feels like Silly Zhu is not like a reborn person, but like a time traveler who has traveled through time. If Silly Zhu were to be reborn in person, the person who would feel the most sorry would be He Xiao. His biological son failed to fulfill his responsibilities as a father for a day, followed by Lou Xiao'e. In a courtyard where everyone, including his biological sister He Yuyu, was cheating on him. , Only Lou Xiao'e has never plotted against Sha Zhu, and gave birth to a son for him, so that he would not have a child. After being reborn, she actually wanted to marry Yu Li. In her previous life, she never realized how good Yu Li and Sha Zhu were. The two of them were somewhat conflicted because of opening a restaurant. I feel like the author is also a white-eyed wolf, this idea is wrong, and he always likes to deduce the causes from the results. Isn't this just making up his own mind? The biggest failure of this novel is that Silly Zhu is reborn, from a silly and stupid Silly Zhu in his previous life to a white-eyed wolf Silly Zhu. Not to mention that Lou Xiao'e has not done anything to Silly Zhu, but she did something. She also gave birth to a son for you and raised him well. As a result, you were reborn. When facing Lou Xiao'e, you didn't have any gratitude at all. Instead, you fell in love with Yu Li. I really don't understand the author's thoughts. If you were reborn as a fool, you would live to be almost 100 years old in your two lifetimes. What else can you never forget besides your son and his mother? As for your sister He Yuyu, you don't owe her anything. He raised her and provided her with education. In that era, a girl had no parents and her brother raised her. She also went to high school and bought a bicycle. What else could she do? She was a proper white-eyed wolf. The more I read this novel, the angrier I get. What's the point of being reborn? He didn't make amends for what he needed to make up for, and he didn't take revenge for what he needed to take revenge. He's a complete idiot, saying that he only gave him the wrong name, not the wrong nickname. Maybe it was Shazhu who made the author stupid too. ***, I am almost 100 years old in two lifetimes, and I don't understand anything at all. Author, please change the title and opening chapter of the novel. Don't call Silly Zhu reborn, just find a time traveler.

It's a shame that Silly Pig's mature appearance has been ruined so badly! As for women, he is not as good as Xu Damao. Who will Silly Zhu marry later? Time and time again, Silly Zhu's mature appearance was brought out to speak out! It's disgusting to watch

After reading four chapters, I can't help but complain about some flaws. Silly Zhu is less than seventeen, so Yi Zhonghai is in his thirties. Although it was early to get married and have children in that era, Yi Zhonghai would not be completely desperate and consider training candidates for retirement. In addition, since Silhouette is reborn and hates Yi Zhonghai, the Jia family, etc., He shouldn't just target Yi Zhonghai without Jia Zhang becoming evil, right? Maybe the author particularly hates moral kidnapping and ignored it? Other aspects are pretty good, five stars

In this book of yours, I always have a feeling that you are writing about some things from the beginning of the plot, but you just changed the time, changed it to around the 1950s, but you are writing about 63/65. Then, the author, you need to know one thing. The protagonist is He Yuzhu, and He Yuzhu is also reborn. It just adds He Yuzhu's life memories. It doesn't matter that you have strengthened He Yuzhu's cooking skills. You also do those messy things. When you wrote it, I feel that you are not reborn, and you have traveled through time so that you know what will happen later. Only people who have traveled through time know everything, including some small incidents he did later. As a reborn person, you only know that the people in this compound do not have any good impressions of you, and you will subconsciously stay away from the people in this compound. What will you read again? You can write Xu Damao, because he helped you collect the information, and then you wrote it (92 or 93). Since you are discussing with a steward, the third uncle, who should write the report letter? Then you wrote again later that you hated such stingy people, which was quite speechless. To sum up, the author feels that he is not writing about rebirth, but about time travel. People who are reborn only know a general idea, but others are still the same person. Their emotions and behaviors are still the same person. Even if there are other memories, they cannot be changed at once.

In fact, the stupid pig deserves to die under the bridge, and the licking dog is unforgivable.

I didn't read the book, so I just looked at the introduction and chapter names. It gave me the feeling that it was psychologically twisted and shocking.

You are stupid and stupid every sentence, and every author has the inertia to think that the protagonist is great when he is reborn. Ordinary people are reborn and are still ordinary people. Nothing can be changed. The trajectory of fate is still running according to its gears.

Are you planning to dissect the courtyard? But there is no need to be too detailed! Otherwise, how would you write about the sports in the later period? How could you write about running away? Doesn't this go against the original intention of Siheyuan, and to be honest, it would be better to run away and just write about Hong Kong comprehensive. It's not good to sell dog meat on sheep's head! For example: When it comes to money, there is no need to write down millions first and wait for a few dollars. It doesn't matter if you just use a few pieces! Let's not talk about anything else. I'm just talking about favors, I don't know how you plan to analyze it! It was obvious that he was hypocritical in various ways, and what about the old lady, but in the end she turned against the enemy. Then you asked others for help in the early stage, and even asked others to help you sign the letter of severance. How should you deal with this? Do you think it doesn't matter if you're on the sidelines? Your father's cooking will have an impact. How can I put this? And when it comes to favors, do you end up directly attacking him? Why don't you repay your favor by being so hypocritical? That doesn't make sense. Anyway, I just think it's a bit too taken for granted. You can either change the plot. If you can't change it, then you won't participate! You are destroying your ancestral home first, and then you want to escape, but you can't escape. I don't know how to express it. Forget it, that's it. Destroy it!