
Start with Mind Reading
by Seven Rounds
About This Novel
There is a retrograde wheel in Li Chen's soul that travels through time and space. One day, after absorbing enough spiritual energy, Li Chen's soul traveled through... After Li Chen returned with soul skills, he began to become a CEO, won Bai Fumei, and reached the pinnacle of life... Of course, the first seventeen words are all water. Li Chen said: "The world is not that simple, I want to see it." The first world magic card civilization... Note: Follow-up World can provide suggestions in the book review area Retrograde Wheel: "Ask for votes, seek for receipts"
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Official(6)Scraped 11d ago
Your uncle's
Very well written! Why eunuch? Be sick!
Can
The beginning is boring, but the end of Ming Dynasty is very good.
Great God
The characters written in it are all so profound and moving.
Deeply moved
So well written
worth watching
The written content is rich and colorful
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First, your outline is OK, but the branch construction is not well written. Second, the title of the book is not good. You can just write a title like "Traveling Around the Heavens from Building the Sky Group"! But you wrote (starting from mind reading) a title that looks a bit like a genuine book. Third, it may be my own problem. I feel that if you write the later chapters first, you won't be a eunuch. (The above are all personal opinions.)
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Official(6)Scraped 11d ago
Your uncle's
Very well written! Why eunuch? Be sick!
Can
The beginning is boring, but the end of Ming Dynasty is very good.
Great God
The characters written in it are all so profound and moving.
Deeply moved
So well written
worth watching
The written content is rich and colorful
question
First, your outline is OK, but the branch construction is not well written. Second, the title of the book is not good. You can just write a title like "Traveling Around the Heavens from Building the Sky Group"! But you wrote (starting from mind reading) a title that looks a bit like a genuine book. Third, it may be my own problem. I feel that if you write the later chapters first, you won't be a eunuch. (The above are all personal opinions.)















