Dimensional Restaurant in Konoha

It has been recommended, and there have been more and more book reviews these days. Whether it's scolding, trolling, or normal comments, I read them all carefully. First of all, thank you to the readers who supported me, and then thank you to the readers who scolded me. Originally, I simply thought, what's wrong with doujin modification? But today I suddenly realized it! Character is the key to determine whether a character can leave an image in the readers' minds. When I magically change the character's personality, the character will deviate from the track in the reader's mind, and the character will no longer be the original character. On the importance of personality! Then there is the issue of outline. While understanding the importance of character, I found that my novel lacked the 'end' of each chapter. To be honest, when I write novels, I don't have chapter outlines. I think that will affect my thinking and imagination. But today I suddenly discovered that there is no need for an outline, but there must be an 'end', which is what plot I want to write in this chapter. This book is my first book, a practice work. The results were very poor, and I lost my goal. But then it suddenly dawned on me that I was writing novels for fun, not to make money. Is it any difference that my grades are poor now that I have made no money in the past few months? And looking at more people who are worse off than me but still persisting, I feel a little ashamed and a little lucky. Therefore, I may finish this book ahead of schedule. The originally planned four to five hundred chapters may be about two hundred chapters. The main reason for being ahead of schedule is that I didn't make a complete plan when writing a book for the first time. I just started typing with the keyboard, which made the book a failure. The theme is off-kilter, the characters are confusing, the plot logic is wrong, the pace is too fast, the details are insufficient, and the writing style is stretched in the early stage. Although the writing style has been greatly improved now, these previous things cannot be changed through modification, or they must be rewritten. Thank you all for your company. Although this book will be finished in advance soon, it will not be an eunuch. Even if the writing is not good, it must have a beginning and an end. After this book, I will write another book with a rigorous attitude. I have the subject matter and the inspiration. What I lack is the attention and rigor to the book.

I deleted the second chapter, and after re-uploading it, I found that the order was wrong again. I had no choice but to delete the entire first volume, restore it and upload it again, and then word spread that my administrative rights had been blocked... Maybe the editor thought I was messing around? Chapters 15 and 16 are in the draft box and will be posted when restored.

I myself have been a bookworm for ten years. I was short of books and started writing my own novels. Writing novels is actually different from reading novels. Xie Xiaoxiao is more immersed in the world of novels, and I kind of fell in love with this feeling. Even if it takes ten years to write this book, I still won't be able to read it.

A rating of 6.8 Out of 5 stars?

Can the author please add Crayon Shin-chan and Soda

Is it leather? , Friday said there will be an update on Saturday, I haven't seen a single person on this fucking Sunday, are you kidding me?

The book has three stars at most. This book is basically okay, but some scenes really made me unhappy. For example, the protagonist Wu Chang saved Naruto and his parents asked his parents to teach Naruto, and they needed to be paid. I was speechless. Also, when they found someone else to teach Naruto, they had to pay someone else. Although the author of the Human World Coin did not say how many the protagonist had, he gave it to Naruto and the others for free, and also bought them other martial arts secrets for free, as well as Teacher Saitama's part. Teacher Saitama said that the spaceship was their reward, although the spaceship was not his. It was Teacher Saitama's strength. It was easy to get the spaceship at that time. There was nothing here, but if you want to sell the spaceship, you first have to get the system space, but the protagonist can't do it. So the main point for the protagonist is to spend world coins alone to get the spaceship into the system space and then sell it. Even if the teacher doesn't pay, everyone has to share the money equally. What the hell is it to let the protagonist pay alone? Plus there are too many typos in this book, and it feels like a pirated version. There are some minor flaws. Everything else is okay.

It's the author, can you clarify it a little bit? It's just that sometimes we feel confused when watching it. What is this? What the hell? This is just my opinion, recommendation index, nine stars

Why is it only 15 book coins for the first chapter? I'm not saying that I despise the book, but didn't the author of the previous chapter also make it free after the book is released?

Updates are finally resumed, great😘😘