I Am Writing a Diary in Douluo, and Huo Gua is Actually Me

Fake heroines: The ones with diaries have no feelings for Huo Gua. Purely for rewards, pure interests The real heroine: Xiao Hongchen, the longest story, the most sincere emotion, she only thinks about the protagonist

Again, isn't reading fandom just to satisfy yourself? It's okay if you don't like reading it. Then why don't you read the original work? Aren't they the ones who read the fanfic because they can't stand the original work? Don't say that writing fan fiction is unreasonable. Let me first list for you a few unreasonable places in the original work. 1. Butterfly, the Goddess of Light by Wang Donger. Assuming that Dou San is a ghostwriter, then the ghostwriter must be familiar with the original work and know what Dou Yi has almost always mentioned, including what the master has said. The martial spirit must come from either parent (or both parents). Tell me why grass + rabbit = butterfly, and butterfly's younger brother = grass. Hey, Dou San changed back even without considering ghostwriting. Second, it is still the same saying that the martial spirit comes from either parent. Oh, what a coincidence. Kong Deming of Sun and Moon has the same martial spirit as his senior sister Zhang Lexuan. Then Zhang Lexuan met Mu En by coincidence. Huo Yuhao also met Tang Ya by coincidence. Then Wang Donger had to consider joining the Tang Sect, but Huo Yuhao should not consider it. Of course, this is nothing. If you look at the original work, you will find that there is no mention of Kong Deming's family, so can we boldly assume that in the fanfic? Third, both Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er have very different personalities from Tang Wutong. In the last few chapters of Dou Er, the original work clearly states it and Tang San personally admits it (there is indeed a suspicion of soul separation). Although the original work only writes in a few lines that he said that the emperor's auspicious beast has the soul of his daughter, this is written in the original work and Tang San said it in front of Huo Yuhao. Fourth, this is also my assumption, assuming that Douluo has Douluo's will, assuming that Huo Yuhao is not just the son of destiny, assuming that Huo Yuhao has always been under Tang San's watch. So can we understand that Huo Yun'er's death was controlled by Tang San, and Huo Yuhao, as the son of destiny, was the last counterattack of Douluo Will. Then Tianmeng, Electrolux was given to his biological son by Douluo Will from the beginning, and all they did was to let him enter the God Realm and regain control. If you understand it this way, it is not difficult to find that you can say anything, including Huo Yuhao himself, but you will also find that there is really no way, because he can indeed have whatever he wants. The original work can be understood as Douluo's will to lose the bet.

If you don't believe me, go watch Dou 5. Your will in the Douluo plane has become miraculous. Then why are the people in the Fairy Continent so cowardly? According to Dou Wu's explanation of the Douluo plane, when Tang San arrives, the entire Dou Luo disappears. Have you guys watched Dou Si Dou Wu? Come and tell me what there is in Douluo Continent that is worthy of his calculations. The gods now are not the ones before. Now the sea dragons and dimensions have come up. You conspiracy theorists come and tell me. What is there in Douluo Continent worth calculating, and what are the benefits? There are many planets that are stronger than Douluo, and there are also those who have no brains to cheat on Tang San and Xiao Wu's relationship. If they have poor relationships, how far will they fight? If they abandon their power and go to reincarnation, is that still called poor relationships?

So is Tianmeng dead? Tianmeng is Yuhao's angel investor It would be too much to kill him hastily. It feels like this is worse than Tang San, at least Tang San thought about it But I never really took action against the master.

At first I thought it was okay, the protagonist is quite intelligent, but as I watched it became more and more boring, the protagonist looked like a eunuch , just relying on the rewards and contents of the diary without doing anything, and getting a lot of women to cheat, it is better for the people next door to take the initiative, instead of hanging like this, like Neptune, and this Neptune has not yet chirped, and is becoming more and more helpless anyway. Chatting, I feel sleepy when I look at it. If I want to use a metaphor, it is like a bunch of flies surrounding a piece of shit. This kind of emotional line is really too stiff. It is purely for use and then suddenly and abruptly writes that I like it. Even if you fall in love directly, it is better than this feeling.

I feel that there are too many female protagonists, and I hope that the female protagonists will eliminate the parts, such as the internal competition among female protagonists.

It's quite true. In fact, if you think about it carefully, what would Dou Er be like without Tang Shenwang? Huo Yuhao encounters a big insect and the remnant soul of the Holy Law God of the Dead in the Star Dou, and starts a cheating journey. Going to the Sun and Moon Empire to learn soul tools, you will have no shortage of martial souls, not to mention innate soul power. Will the sun and moon not have the elixir that the tortoise has? It seems that the price in the original book is one thousand gold soul coins. Is it expensive for the Sun and Moon Empire? Then Shrek met the strongest soul king before the soul master competition. Without Huo Yuhao's Ultimate Ice, Ma Xiaotao would not be able to play. The original is a soul king level soul mentor. Under Huo Yuhao's advance observation, Ma Xiaotao and others suffered three minor injuries, three were seriously injured and one died. If it weren't for Huo Yuhao and one less Ma Xiaotao, there would basically be no one left in that generation of Shrek's Seven Devils. With the help of Huo Yuhao, the Sun and Moon Empire won the championship for the first time and improved its reputation. Five years later, it won the championship again and became a new star. After the war with the Empire, Orange's relationship didn't get much better. The same hatred, having a child, and seizing the inheritance of the Sun and Moon Empire. He can also rely on Yi Lao to seize the Holy Spirit Cult and enhance Xuan Lao's devouring attribute to become an evil soul master. Plus the senior sister who can instigate rebellion, the Phoenix Saint, and the Blue Silver Saint. How can you lose when flying dragon rides on the face? ? ?

Dear author, please update quickly. There is no future for updating twice a day. I need to update 4 times anyway. Don't force me to beg you! ! !

Just write it honestly and that's it. You have to be clever and add a protagonist who knows that they can see the diary. The plot has no logic at all and I can't watch it at all.

You don't have to take the initiative, but you must be responsible. Other than that, as long as you don't open your mouth and say that your wife will come and your wife will go before confirming the relationship.