Bright Sword: Start by Hosting a New Group
About This Novel
"Old Li, I'm sorry, who among our brothers is who? Isn't what you have mine? Zhang Dabiao is mine; Sun Desheng is mine; Zhao Gang, I want it; Shen Quan is mine; Wang Xikui is mine; Wang Gensheng is mine; and Monk Wei, of course, is still mine." "What, the cavalry company? Of course it's mine too." "Well, Yang Xiuqin, this is still yours." "I will avenge you; your brother, I will help you command, hehehe..."
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Official(22)Scraped 11d ago
You don't understand the army, military discipline, and soldiers. Forget it, what happens if you look at Yang Zhi and look at Ding Wei?
Chapter 1 Dissuades Resignation, Is the Army Li Yunlong's Private Army?
As soon as he accepted the new group, his subordinates were dissatisfied, saying that the protagonist was not qualified to accept the new group. What happened? Is the military private? This is completely the style of a warlord, right? The author is completely like a character in the drama "Dark Sword". He cannot resist his superiors. Orders must be obeyed unconditionally. This is the most basic discipline of a soldier, right? Do you have to be stronger than anyone in the entire regiment to be qualified to command the troops? Can you use force to intimidate your subordinates? Let's take this as a guide and simply cancel the position of commander, because no officer can do it. A person's energy is not endless. A normal human body can go down the road at the age of 26.
I have to say that many authors have this way of writing "Bright Sword". On one side are special forces. After time travel, special forces training manuals are needed. This is completely contradictory. Are all special forces doing this now? Don't use the word "black special forces" anymore, okay?
What the hell did you write?
As soon as it started, I didn't want to watch anymore.
Does a retired special forces soldier still need a special forces training manual? Couldn't he?
To tell a joke, the range of special forces is 15 meters. 😝
The author, a primary school student, contradicted himself and said that he was a special soldier, but ended up with a shooting range of 15 meters. I died laughing. If they were all soldiers like this, we would have been killed long ago.
Can we not write a system? Writing a system requires a lot of effort every day.
not good
I haven't even finished the first chapter. The author seems to have no common sense.
I felt funny when I saw this Yang Zhi. Is it Yang Zhi, the green-faced beast?
suggestion
Author, you can write it, but can you please understand the background of Liang Jian before writing it? I also advise you to change the setting of the protagonist, it is poisonous.
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Official(22)Scraped 11d ago
You don't understand the army, military discipline, and soldiers. Forget it, what happens if you look at Yang Zhi and look at Ding Wei?
Chapter 1 Dissuades Resignation, Is the Army Li Yunlong's Private Army?
As soon as he accepted the new group, his subordinates were dissatisfied, saying that the protagonist was not qualified to accept the new group. What happened? Is the military private? This is completely the style of a warlord, right? The author is completely like a character in the drama "Dark Sword". He cannot resist his superiors. Orders must be obeyed unconditionally. This is the most basic discipline of a soldier, right? Do you have to be stronger than anyone in the entire regiment to be qualified to command the troops? Can you use force to intimidate your subordinates? Let's take this as a guide and simply cancel the position of commander, because no officer can do it. A person's energy is not endless. A normal human body can go down the road at the age of 26.
I have to say that many authors have this way of writing "Bright Sword". On one side are special forces. After time travel, special forces training manuals are needed. This is completely contradictory. Are all special forces doing this now? Don't use the word "black special forces" anymore, okay?
What the hell did you write?
As soon as it started, I didn't want to watch anymore.
Does a retired special forces soldier still need a special forces training manual? Couldn't he?
To tell a joke, the range of special forces is 15 meters. 😝
The author, a primary school student, contradicted himself and said that he was a special soldier, but ended up with a shooting range of 15 meters. I died laughing. If they were all soldiers like this, we would have been killed long ago.
Can we not write a system? Writing a system requires a lot of effort every day.
not good
I haven't even finished the first chapter. The author seems to have no common sense.
I felt funny when I saw this Yang Zhi. Is it Yang Zhi, the green-faced beast?
suggestion
Author, you can write it, but can you please understand the background of Liang Jian before writing it? I also advise you to change the setting of the protagonist, it is poisonous.
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