Immortal Apricot of Prehistoric Times
by Duzi
About This Novel
The new book "Starting from the Weird Businessman" has received a lot of support from the audience. What is the most important thing in the ancient times, such as feet and birth time? What should I do if I am born late? Of course it's a big deal. So, Zhang Ye became a disciple of Yuanshi and became the first disciple of the Three Purities. He changed the status of the human race and made the Three Purities no longer turn against each other. In short, this is a story about how after the prehistoric period was brought into chaos, he conquered all realms and led the prehistoric world to upgrade to the eternal world. Welcome all friends to join the group chat: 689960254
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Official(27)Scraped 11d ago
The writing style can be considered above average among so many ancient novels, but the plot is too cliché. I can guess what is going to be written after just reading ten chapters. Now that I have read more than fifty, it is really unsurprising and there are many bugs in the logic. The characters in the novel are too superficial and there are no important plot points. It is a bit of a running account and it shows that there is no experience. The article is quite childish. This is the shortcoming of most ancient novels. I can only say that the flaws do not hide the flaws, but as a first book, it is a good start. I hope the next one will be better written
Senior Brother Xuanmen?
Looking at this introduction, what is the relationship between this book and The Ancient Master: Xuanmen Senior Brother? Who copied whom?
Add a lotus lantern!
The prequel to "Baolian Lantern", "Baolian Lantern" is very good-looking
Is there a female protagonist? If so, single heroine or multiple heroines?
If I say that the prehistoric world is the ceiling, don't go any higher. Matryoshka dolls don't look good, I'd rather you write a private interview incognito
Are you sure Chi You came out when Hongjun was preaching?
It's pretty good. It's the first book after all.
Ancient Times actually talks about Shintoism, and there is relatively little about clergy. The author can slightly design the content in this aspect and expand some sections to the article.
Is there anything else good to see that you can recommend?
Is there anything else good to see that you can recommend?
This book is suitable for limited editions and is free to read. If you spend money to read some parts, you will easily get annoyed. Just cut off the spiritual roots in the front. After that, 36 Dinghai Divine Pearls will be given to the disciples. I finally found the Hongmeng Heavenly Ruler. I don't need to use it to open up with the Dinghai Divine Pearls. That's all for the heavens (I couldn't bear to give up the ruler and beads so I gave them to my disciples), but after a few chapters I wanted to give them to Tongtian as a tool to suppress luck, but they were rejected. Even though he revealed that he had a ruler, he also made us think what kind of cup the protagonist was. If you want You should give it earlier. Md When Tongtian established the religion and became a saint, it was given in public, and Tongtian returned it. Since you don't want it, don't say anything about how you were reluctant to part with the ruler, so you didn't open up the heavens and gave the Dinghai Divine Pearl to your disciples. Since you are reluctant, don't give it to others. If you want to help Tongtian, you don't remind or hint earlier, but you are still rejected. It seems that the protagonist is like a clown. Can't you sort it out? It also makes people feel awkward not to mention the contradictions.
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Official(27)Scraped 11d ago
The writing style can be considered above average among so many ancient novels, but the plot is too cliché. I can guess what is going to be written after just reading ten chapters. Now that I have read more than fifty, it is really unsurprising and there are many bugs in the logic. The characters in the novel are too superficial and there are no important plot points. It is a bit of a running account and it shows that there is no experience. The article is quite childish. This is the shortcoming of most ancient novels. I can only say that the flaws do not hide the flaws, but as a first book, it is a good start. I hope the next one will be better written
Senior Brother Xuanmen?
Looking at this introduction, what is the relationship between this book and The Ancient Master: Xuanmen Senior Brother? Who copied whom?
Add a lotus lantern!
The prequel to "Baolian Lantern", "Baolian Lantern" is very good-looking
Is there a female protagonist? If so, single heroine or multiple heroines?
If I say that the prehistoric world is the ceiling, don't go any higher. Matryoshka dolls don't look good, I'd rather you write a private interview incognito
Are you sure Chi You came out when Hongjun was preaching?
It's pretty good. It's the first book after all.
Ancient Times actually talks about Shintoism, and there is relatively little about clergy. The author can slightly design the content in this aspect and expand some sections to the article.
Is there anything else good to see that you can recommend?
Is there anything else good to see that you can recommend?
This book is suitable for limited editions and is free to read. If you spend money to read some parts, you will easily get annoyed. Just cut off the spiritual roots in the front. After that, 36 Dinghai Divine Pearls will be given to the disciples. I finally found the Hongmeng Heavenly Ruler. I don't need to use it to open up with the Dinghai Divine Pearls. That's all for the heavens (I couldn't bear to give up the ruler and beads so I gave them to my disciples), but after a few chapters I wanted to give them to Tongtian as a tool to suppress luck, but they were rejected. Even though he revealed that he had a ruler, he also made us think what kind of cup the protagonist was. If you want You should give it earlier. Md When Tongtian established the religion and became a saint, it was given in public, and Tongtian returned it. Since you don't want it, don't say anything about how you were reluctant to part with the ruler, so you didn't open up the heavens and gave the Dinghai Divine Pearl to your disciples. Since you are reluctant, don't give it to others. If you want to help Tongtian, you don't remind or hint earlier, but you are still rejected. It seems that the protagonist is like a clown. Can't you sort it out? It also makes people feel awkward not to mention the contradictions.
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