Help: the Fairies Are All Reborn Anyway
by Qin Zhixuan
About This Novel
In the world of cultivation, Gu Qing, who had a peerless appearance that could bring disaster to the country and the people, was reborn. After resurrecting his life, Gu Qing learned from the pain and decided not to be tainted by the karma of his previous life. He retired from the world, escaped from the secular world, and became an ordinary and honest person. However, due to an accident, things once again took a 'surge' in a direction beyond his control! Gu Qing was shocked to discover: "The fairies are all reborn!" ... The domineering queen, the cool lady, the noble saint, the charming witch...
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Official(7)Scraped 2mo ago
Very good, looks very good, very good
Looks good, come on, come on, come on
Was it 1 comment and 6 tips, or was it 6 comments deleted?
Author: When will Yizhoushu be updated?
The concept is very clever, and a lot of suspense is set up in the book, waiting to be solved one by one, it is worth savoring
The author is attentive, and I also have some suggestions.
Well, after reading more than fifty chapters, I have an overall feeling that the author has put his heart into it, but his writing skills are insufficient, and he is not very sure about the control of the characters and the acceptance of the readers. For example, with Liu Ningyan, there is a sense of forcibly adding scenes, one after another, and it is very easy to guess what the author wants to do, and it lacks a sense of mystery. If we instead omit most of her scenes, for example, when she comes to the protagonist on a rainy night, the rest of the plot will be closed, and then she suddenly appears at the end, and then fills in her whereabouts (just abbreviate), fills the hole (only my opinion), wouldn't this be a reversal? Authors must also learn to leave some mystery for readers to guess, improve their logic, improve their writing skills, and then leave holes appropriately. Isn't this a way to retain readers? (This is just my opinion) Another thing is to prioritize, what is the selling point of the book? What is the appeal of books? For this book, isn't it the story of the protagonist and the protagonist in his previous life? Why can't I see several disputes between the protagonists in the past life after watching it for a long time? (Only my own opinion) Grasp your own selling point. Since you are relying on the title and introduction of the book to lure people in, of course, you must open a new harem to extend the plot, but you cannot forget your own selling point. The pace of online writing is very fast, and delayed gratification cannot meet the appetite of most people. It is a bit uncomfortable not to see the selling point all the time (only my own opinion)
Do you have any good books to recommend?
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Official(7)Scraped 2mo ago
Very good, looks very good, very good
Looks good, come on, come on, come on
Was it 1 comment and 6 tips, or was it 6 comments deleted?
Author: When will Yizhoushu be updated?
The concept is very clever, and a lot of suspense is set up in the book, waiting to be solved one by one, it is worth savoring
The author is attentive, and I also have some suggestions.
Well, after reading more than fifty chapters, I have an overall feeling that the author has put his heart into it, but his writing skills are insufficient, and he is not very sure about the control of the characters and the acceptance of the readers. For example, with Liu Ningyan, there is a sense of forcibly adding scenes, one after another, and it is very easy to guess what the author wants to do, and it lacks a sense of mystery. If we instead omit most of her scenes, for example, when she comes to the protagonist on a rainy night, the rest of the plot will be closed, and then she suddenly appears at the end, and then fills in her whereabouts (just abbreviate), fills the hole (only my opinion), wouldn't this be a reversal? Authors must also learn to leave some mystery for readers to guess, improve their logic, improve their writing skills, and then leave holes appropriately. Isn't this a way to retain readers? (This is just my opinion) Another thing is to prioritize, what is the selling point of the book? What is the appeal of books? For this book, isn't it the story of the protagonist and the protagonist in his previous life? Why can't I see several disputes between the protagonists in the past life after watching it for a long time? (Only my own opinion) Grasp your own selling point. Since you are relying on the title and introduction of the book to lure people in, of course, you must open a new harem to extend the plot, but you cannot forget your own selling point. The pace of online writing is very fast, and delayed gratification cannot meet the appetite of most people. It is a bit uncomfortable not to see the selling point all the time (only my own opinion)
Do you have any good books to recommend?
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