This is Not the World I Know

Note, this is just a suggestion, not a requirement, don't spray ************ First, Douluo progresses too fast in the later stage and upgrades too quickly, which will lead to confusion. And what does it mean if you jump directly to Douyi? Oh, just for a god and a wife? Secondly, regarding Ning Yueyue, don't think that labor and management don't know that you want to write a story for Ning Yueyue in the finale. What about the main character being NB, recovering his memory, and resurrecting Ning Yueyue with his strength. Then this book is only worthy of a good book. This ending is just like the ending of San Shao's Airspeed Star Trace. Third, you're telling me that the system has absorbed so much divine energy that it can't even repair itself? I don't really hope that there will be any lottery or shopping mall. If there is one, it will be the same as an ordinary time travel book. A good book will become ordinary. I hope it has its own characteristics. Fourth, regarding the realistic writing, the chapters in the main world are too poorly written and boring to read. They either don't write them at all and overwhelm them with a few strokes, or they just write them in a vivid and colorful way, which is not so cool. Thank you. Fifth, I hope that the harem will not be so hot, which will lead to fatigue and boring, and the emotional scenes are too sloppy. Except for Ning Yueyue, it can be watched from beginning to end (not exciting), but Bibi Dong's and the other one are not good at all. The emotional scenes are too sloppy. I hope the author can give me more help. Either the character is not accepted into the harem, or the writing is vivid and colorful (back then, I was really moved to tears by this emotional scene when I saw Huo Yuhao drinking lava to save Wang Donger, and Wang Qiuer drinking ice water to save Huo Yuhao. This is also part of the reason why the Douluo series is a god, the characters are depicted with flesh and blood) I will also give the author some suggestions later, and I hope the author will adopt some of them. Come on, author, I believe you will become a god one day

Chapter 1: The star map of the pig's feet, the beads left behind after the enemy's death... Nine⭐poisonous milk?

A humble author, asking for favorites and recommendation votes online

The author will update soon, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

This book was actually quite good at the beginning. Especially Ning Yueyue, although the emotional scene is a bit inconsistent, and Ning Yueyue sacrificed herself to save the protagonist, didn't the protagonist expect that he could be resurrected after becoming a god? What I find most unacceptable is the inclusion of female protagonists in the latter two worlds. Don't express your personal opinions. (Actually, I still like Bibi Dong very much) (I only like Bibi Dong and the ruthless emperor among the female characters in the novel)

Why is it suddenly on the shelves? I didn't even post a testimonial about the launch.

I almost forgot that I came to see Douluo.

In fact, if there is no last episode, the ending of the fifth reboot of the world is my favorite.

If the author changed the title of the book to something like "Starting from Douluo and Traveling Through Ten Thousand Realms", I think there would be many more collections and readers.

Will the author Ning Yueyue be resurrected? [Emot=default,01/]Author, come on