Travel Through Time and Become a Goddess

Travel Through Time and Become a Goddess

by Laughter Is Never Happy

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371Kwords
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Updated 4y agoScraped 4d ago
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About This Novel

Drunk Wu Liang inexplicably traveled to a parallel world. The key was that he turned into a girl who had just been hospitalized in a car accident...

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Official(12)Scraped 5d ago

LM
Lm54mo ago

How should I put it? It was written with great care.

I think I wrote very carefully while sitting down. It's better than many others of the same type. It's not easy.

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Izumi Sagiri^ω^56mo ago

Come on, come on^ω^

It should be better if you divide it into as many segments as possible

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Birds Singing in the Empty Mountain_ed53mo ago

Very well written

The writing is very good, and it will be even better if it is divided into sections!

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A Gentleman Forgets His Love57mo ago

Author, let me tell you something

My phone is smaller, it's a Vivo×9, and the parts you don't segment directly fill up my screen. It's too difficult to read, and it's densely packed.

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A Gentleman Forgets His Love57mo ago

very good

I said that your book is very good, but there are typos and paragraphs. Unless it is not important, I usually skip to read. It is too difficult to see clearly and I can't understand it.

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Dry59mo ago

Writers take a look

Let me tell you, can you divide it into segments? Why is one segment so long? The plot is okay so far, but your segment is too long🤐🤐🤐🤐

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Pinch of Camellia Sauce55mo ago

This protagonist often makes things more difficult for himself.

This protagonist often makes things more difficult for himself.

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This Software is Dead56mo ago

...

Everything about your book is good. The only thing that isn't great is the details. In terms of performance, the details are not well written. Not only that, but only half of them are written.

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Kukai_0156861819444mo ago

Beautiful(。・ω・。)ノ♡

The plot is exciting! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

LM
Lm54mo ago

What, piles of them

Why not segment? Usually when I read novels, I can read the general outline of each paragraph at the beginning. What do I think of this mess?

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