
Dimensional Store in Marvel
by Shuying L
About This Novel
On a certain day of a certain year, Mu Yang, who obtained the mall system, decided to become a businessman. As a result, a small change occurred in the heavens and the world. Ethan: Iron suit... Activate! Tony Stark: I am Kamen Rider Origin, Kamen Rider Zero-One! Whitebeard: High-speed regeneration + Bajiquan + Shock Fruit + Rejuvenation! Euler! Naruto & Sasuke: Fusion... Fusion! I am Rokudo Naruso!
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Official(27)Scraped 24d ago
Why not let One Piece come to Marvel?
Why don't you write a One Piece or a time traveler who travels back to Marvel to imitate One Piece or something like that?
Another book about being single for ten thousand years🐶
Everything else is written well, but I don't even have a girlfriend. Let alone girlfriends, even girls appear only a handful of times.
Give you 3 stars
There are too many Japanese comics. I don't know what you wrote. I kept skipping to the Japanese comics and ended up skipping the chapters. .
To put it simply, Konoha is passionate, righteous, the protagonist, and has three correct views. I understand everything
There are two major poisonous points in this book that I hope to correct!
First of all, there is too much nonsense. There are many places where the number of words should be reduced, so just reduce it! Secondly, what about being a dimensional businessman? I personally rescued Captain America and then rushed to resurrect Minato Namikaze and his wife. I lost all my strength. The dimensional store that was promised is not a dimensional traveler. You are a store owner, not a trader!
I didn't see the protagonist's own thoughts. Basically, the author just did whatever he wanted, without considering the content at all.
Resurrection without limits, worthless members everywhere.
I'm really speechless, ***, didn't the protagonist say it at the beginning? Everything can be traded, *** and there are US dollars. If I tell him directly that everything can be traded, lifespan, soul, everything can be traded, and the transaction value can be traded, how come *** only needs US dollars, and when he hears the words US dollars, I will be speechless.
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Community(0)
Official(27)Scraped 24d ago
Why not let One Piece come to Marvel?
Why don't you write a One Piece or a time traveler who travels back to Marvel to imitate One Piece or something like that?
Another book about being single for ten thousand years🐶
Everything else is written well, but I don't even have a girlfriend. Let alone girlfriends, even girls appear only a handful of times.
Give you 3 stars
There are too many Japanese comics. I don't know what you wrote. I kept skipping to the Japanese comics and ended up skipping the chapters. .
To put it simply, Konoha is passionate, righteous, the protagonist, and has three correct views. I understand everything
There are two major poisonous points in this book that I hope to correct!
First of all, there is too much nonsense. There are many places where the number of words should be reduced, so just reduce it! Secondly, what about being a dimensional businessman? I personally rescued Captain America and then rushed to resurrect Minato Namikaze and his wife. I lost all my strength. The dimensional store that was promised is not a dimensional traveler. You are a store owner, not a trader!
I didn't see the protagonist's own thoughts. Basically, the author just did whatever he wanted, without considering the content at all.
Resurrection without limits, worthless members everywhere.
I'm really speechless, ***, didn't the protagonist say it at the beginning? Everything can be traded, *** and there are US dollars. If I tell him directly that everything can be traded, lifespan, soul, everything can be traded, and the transaction value can be traded, how come *** only needs US dollars, and when he hears the words US dollars, I will be speechless.











