Douluo's Companion Creates Ice and Fire

Come on! ! ! I will support it! ! ! I hope you can become a great writer!

I'll take a seat on the sofa and have some experience.

First: You started by killing Yu Xiaogang, and then it involved many plots, including the Golden Triangle, what should Tang San do? Second: It's okay if you want to write about Bibi Dong and the protagonist, but you can't change the plot too much, otherwise it will easily collapse later. You are still a novice, so don't try too hard, otherwise it will be easy for the "originalists" to abandon the book directly after reading a few chapters. Third: I feel that you are very impatient, the pace is very fast, and you skip it hastily, which makes people feel uncomfortable. You are already impatient now, let alone later. Fourth: You will not break the chapter. Using broken chapters can control the curiosity of book friends very well. For example, the picture below can give some benefits to book friends. However, if you suddenly break the chapter during sex, readers will want to hit you, but this will achieve the purpose. The "gentlemen" will look forward to the following plot, and sometimes they will give you recommendation votes, votes~(￣▽￣~)~ Okay, that seems to be a bit much to say. You can watch it or not. The rest of the plot is up to you. 😘

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It's so fucking cool