Magical Girls Just Want to Get Off Work

Is anyone watching? Mengxin is so helpless. Woohoo.

The writing style is a popular writing style, the writing power is above average, the power system is perfect, and the setting of everyone's power gradually weakening is very novel, and there is no writing failure. The characters are very distinct, the story line is very stable, and it should have a good outline. The lower limit is very high. The protagonist's thoughts about the Witches and the higher-ups, and his memories of some past events can be said to be pretty good, but after all, there is a little bit of foreshadowing, and some places look very abrupt. But if the three views are correct, the protagonist's own thoughts can be justified, and there is nothing awkward about it. The upper limit is a bit high, but not much higher. If you want to raise the upper limit further, you need to supplement the description of past events in the following text, and it depends on the author's operation. Another thing is, why do you, an author, dare to do it for two days in a row? (2023/4/15)

This protagonist looks so frustrated. He obviously has super strength but doesn't use it. Being bullied by ordinary people, he can only roar incompetently and save the world. When the top management plays tricks on his family, he gets angry and gets scared. He is really a trash protagonist.

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Well. . . I don't know what to say, it's well written, but it's a bit dark at the end, which is a bit hard to accept😓

To be honest, all the favorable conditions are beneficial to the enemy. If there is no protagonist, no matter which side the enemy is, they will just slander the so-called official. And at this time, those b-things are still trying to do some small tricks to help their protagonist. I really don't know the meaning of helping them. Besides, the strength, Fite can create cursed beasts, the Witch can copy cards, and the Kingdom of Shadows is not so kind, and the protagonist has nothing. A country has not made anything useful for so many years, and those enemies have All in all, if this continues, I can't see the protagonist winning anything.

This is the beginning of a new angle that no one else has written before, and the idea suddenly comes to mind. I'm very optimistic and will continue to pay attention.

At first, I didn't feel much about transforming through cards. When I came back, I swiped cards to unlock skills and the protagonist's cursed beast form. So when I wrote Magical Girl, I read it as Kamen Rider? (Crying with laughter)

I don't like this kind of protagonist who dresses as a woman and has a younger sister holding him back.

Don't bother reading the introduction, let me take a look.