Starting from a Mortal

We want to see the interaction between the protagonist and Mo Qingchen

Chapter 220 is really poisonous. In the foundation building stage, he is called Junior Brother Yuanying. Do you think you have lived too long? This chapter is really poisonous. Master and disciple are no longer called master and disciple when they are in the same realm. Senior brothers who are two big realms away are still called senior brothers. Even Shennong can't stand it

The writing is quite good, but I personally think that cultivating immortals... You can open any harem... You can open it as soon as you want, or you can accept everything if you break the harem. Come on, Goldfinger told the girls, forget it as a mortal girl, she is still young and alone, and she took someone else's Goldfinger, she also has potential (a tool person), and her three views are consistent with the fact that she is a time traveler. What the hell are the other two foundation building periods... I don't like them. All time travelers and time travel golden fingers are just this pursuit... Without some Immortal Emperor, Immortal Lord and so on... Also, there is chaos in the sea of ​​stars, and it is just two worlds rubbing back and forth, practicing skills here and elixirs there, so I don't want to go to a few more worlds... It's too dangerous to go to the prehistoric world... In other places, there is not much spiritual energy in the mortal world...

Just lick a few seeds, and you wrote it yourself, just ordinary seeds, a few rare ones, and also gave you a space spiritual field, a space prop that has never appeared in mortals. You thought Han Li was so easy to fool Dr. Mo at that time, and you wanted to shape the character into a sixth man like Han Li, and you showed off everywhere, that mortal woman Although you haven't read that novel, you have already taken the heroine's time-travel treasure. It is equivalent to others robbing your system, just like others robbing Han Li's little green bottle. You withdraw it after giving some benefits, and you also accept a disciple. The heroine is not a real child, she is also a time-traveler, she is an adult, he does not understand these things, there are too many loopholes, and the poison is a bit deep

After reading chapter fourteen, I can't stand it anymore! This book is not a fanfic of the original work, it is a fanfic based on the anime! But there are a lot of mistakes in only a dozen chapters. Let me point out a few points: 1. The shopkeeper of Wanbao Tower is in the foundation building stage, not the Nascent Soul stage. 2. Li Huayuan's silver-armored horned python is silver, not golden. 3. The Bloody Forbidden Land will not be closed for 50 years, but for 60 years. Four. This is the most exaggerated. There are more than a dozen ghost spirit gates, seven or eight Tianque Castles, and a bearded man with a talisman. Everyone has a top-grade long knife in their storage bag. The others are all elementary and intermediate spiritual weapons. There are only dozens of low-grade spiritual stones in total! This is just a joke, right? Aren't these people going to the forbidden area to seize treasures? It's only right to seek death in a forbidden place after living enough! No matter what I write the fanfic on, can you please read it a few more times? How about writing after you understand it? !

Author, you should accept fewer women. People who are mortals cultivating immortality, especially those who cultivate immortality, are very selfish. Regardless of whether they have slept with you or not, so many people know the golden finger of pig's feet. How can pig's feet be able to practice with peace of mind? Mortal cultivators are cannibals. Just like Han Laomo, he didn't dare to let his woman know about his little bottle. Don't think that the people there are so beautiful. The people there grew up in an environment where the weak can eat the strong. Even if they don't sell pig's feet, don't they know that pig's feet can still search for souls? The best thing to do is to scare everyone who knows your secret.

Is there a heroine?

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Child control? . . Or is it the cause and effect of taking the treasure and paying back the debt? This isn't considered fan fiction, it's very poisonous.

I want to watch a show without a female protagonist or a single female protagonist. Can you please not have a harem?